苏州中考英语作文押题(15年苏州中考英语作文解析)

苏州中考英语作文押题(15年苏州中考英语作文解析)

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苏州中考英语作文押题(15年苏州中考英语作文解析)

苏州中考英语作文押题【一】

如果问,苏州落日的最佳观赏点在哪儿?那便是金鸡湖了。

沿着金鸡湖走着,微风过处,湖面在太阳的照耀下显得金光闪闪,劳累了一天的太阳似乎还有着用不完的精力。它像个孩子似的,调皮地将光芒撒向湖面,湖面就像被上了一层金粉一样闪闪发光。

接下来,它好像还未玩尽兴,它又向周围的云彩们泼了一盆橘水,一下子,云彩上的橘点便像在宣纸上滴上墨点一般,慢慢地向外泛开,一层一层,由深到浅,简直就像是中国画中的渲染一般过度得是那么的自然。

它好像玩累了,脸涨得通红,随意地将衣服抛向云彩,云彩立刻被蒙上了全身,粉粉的轻纱笼罩在云那飘逸的身躯上,在湖面的映衬下显得十分可爱!也可能是看到大家都变美了,开心地笑了起来,没想到这一笑便停不下来了,笑得脸涨得红红的,笑得脸颊粉嫩嫩的,这天真的笑声感染了湖水,云朵,大家都幸福得脸红了吧!

突然,那落日伸个懒腰,扭扭肥肥的屁股,晃晃悠悠得摇回了家,云朵没了太阳,冷得瑟瑟发抖,不一会儿便变回了洁白的原色,湖水也困了,也渐渐平静了下来。

要问美在何方?那便是苏州的落日!

苏州中考英语作文押题【二】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

苏州中考英语作文押题【三】

I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.

苏州中考英语作文押题【四】

导入:

第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.

正文:

第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因

第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势

结论:

第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ

苏州中考英语作文押题【五】

导入:

第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对

The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下

正文:

第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由

结论:

第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构

苏州中考英语作文押题【六】

Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.

Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?

Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.

苏州中考英语作文押题【七】

导入:

第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文:

第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法

结论:

第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法

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