加拿大的作文英语五年级【一】
杰克：
你好呀！
自从我们成了qq好友后，你通过视频发了许多美丽加拿大的照片，让我向往，等我长大以后，一定要去拜访你！下面我给你介绍我的家乡——中国南京，一个美丽的城市。
这里的每一个人都很热情、友爱、好客。如果你有困难，他们一定会主动向你伸出友爱的双手来帮助你。曾经有两名外国同学到我校学习，得到了老师的关心与爱护，同学们的帮助鱼信任。
每逢节日的时候，人最多的\'地方就数夫子庙了。夫子庙在节日的时候人流如潮、人山人海、人头攒动，把宽阔的街道挤的水泄不通。如果坐在飞机上从上往下看，地上肯定是密密麻麻，如同一个紧挨着一个的芝麻粒；每个商店里的商品变得鳞次栉比。路过的游客都会情不自禁的停下脚步欣赏起来。小朋友变成了身手敏捷的小猴子，东钻钻，西窜窜，弄的家长们急得团团转。
杰克，我现在再给你讲讲南京的著名小吃！(千万不要流口水哦！南京最具代表性的就数盐水鸭了，鸭皮咸咸的(咸中带一丝丝甜，鸭肉嫩嫩的，吃起来好吃极了！还有小笼汤包、鸭血粉丝、赤豆元宵--------这些对我来说是百吃不厌。在南京你一定要买雨花石哦！有的雨花石晶莹剔透，如被水染过；有的五彩缤纷，如同朝霞中的锦缎-------(杰克，要不要我寄一块给你？哈哈。
杰克，这就是我的家乡！说了这么多的话，你一定想马上飞来吧！那就快快来吧！
祝你更上一层楼！
加拿大的作文英语五年级【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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加拿大的作文英语五年级【三】
走在公园的小路上，看着小松鼠正在忙碌，看着鸽子在吃早餐，看着狗在玩耍。那一层薄薄的雾，好像给公园蒙上一层轻纱，什么都是隐隐约约的，真好看!加拿大已经进入深秋了，可是，草还是那么绿，偶尔看见一点隐隐约约的黄，落叶虽然已经堆成山，可是，树上的叶子还是那么绿，那么多，看起来真舒服!空气是那么清新，我都能闻到树叶散发的清香。
清晨的`公园里透着一丝丝凉意。我看见几位来自
加拿大公园的清晨是充满生机和活力的!
加拿大的作文英语五年级【四】
在一个美丽的夏天，爸爸妈妈带我和弟弟去班芙市的洛基山游玩。在路上，我们经过了一片果园，那里果树成荫，栽种着苹果、樱桃等水果。我们来的正是时候，果子成熟了。在苹果园，我们一饱口福，品尝了酸酸甜甜的苹果干和苹果汁，还有香醇的苹果酒。在这儿，我还亲自摘苹果，妈妈拿来梯子，我爬上去，摘了许多苹果，有红的，绿的，还有半红半绿的，叔叔阿姨们用一个大盆子把我从树上扔下来的苹果接住。我们摘了一个又一个苹果，可高兴了。那是我第一次亲手从树上摘下了水果，也是我记忆中最美味的水果。带着丰收的.果实，我们依依不舍地走出了美丽的果园。
第四天，我们终于到了洛基山。虽然是夏天，可从远处看去，山顶依旧被冰雪覆盖，云雾环绕。到了山顶，映入眼帘的是皑皑的白雪，茫茫的冰川，冰雪象水晶一样晶莹洁白。我们穿上了棉衣，坐上雪车，投入了冰川的怀抱，在冰川上嬉戏，那感觉真是特别极了。我和弟弟在厚厚的冰上打了个洞，看到冰水在流动，尝一尝，水甜甜的，和普通的水真的不一样。
加拿大的作文英语五年级【五】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
