本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
“这次大家考得不错,只有几位同学考得不理想。”老师“扫描”了一下教室,“下面开始读名发卷。”
徐小凤看到大多数同学都是“紧张领卷,欢跃而归”。因此,她越来越有信心:"那么多同学考得好,那么我不也十拿九稳?”
没想到整整一节课也没有提过她的名字。徐小凤急了,恨不得一下子钻进试卷堆里,把自己的卷子扒出来。下课了,老师临走撂下几个字:“徐小凤!到我办公室里来一趟!!!!”
徐小凤带着一脸疑惑,站到了老师面前。只见老师一下子把试卷扔到她面前:“小凤啊,小凤。你……你……你自己看看你的试卷!!!”
徐小凤弯下腰,拾起了她的试卷。一个鲜红的“74分”跳入了她的眼睛。再往下看,几串联起来的大叉叉搅的她心烦意乱。
老师接下来的训斥,她一个字也没听进去。浮现在脑海中的是朋友的嘲笑、父母的斥诉、还有外人的指指点点…………………………
她无精打采地走在回家的`路上。气恼与后悔一下子从到了头顶。此时此刻的她看什么都不顺眼:看到小河“哗哗”的唱歌,她觉得是在嘲笑她;看见树上的小鸟唧唧喳喳地叫个不停,也像是在笑话他:“堂堂副班长,考了74!!—-—”
回到家,她偷偷拿出试卷,仔细改错,发现大多数都是由粗心引起的错误,如被魔笔抹去了的数忘记写上,做递等式时抄错数…………
也许,徐小凤的妈妈没有发现,从那天起,她的学习更加认真。
她胜利了。
在她拿到试卷时,脸上露出胜利者的微笑。
胜利是属于她的。
——纯属虚构,若有雷同,绝对巧合
Some fish are forced to leave polluted water and are flying in the sky. But unfortunately, air is also so polluted that they have to wear masks. Each of them is crying, “Where is my home?” What a terrible sight!
Mankind has brought so much pollution. Waste is being poured into rivers and seas. Poisons to kill pests in farming and chemicals go into rivers and seas, too. Poisonous gasses from factories also make the air so dirty. The whole balance of nature is being destroyed as a result of our ignorance of the environmental protection.
Personally, man can not live alone on the earth. Should fish die from serious pollution, so would man! It is high time we did something to prevent such a scene from happening.
这本书花了我300元。
I spent 300 yuan on the book.
I paid 300 yuan for the book.
The price of the book is 300 yuan.
It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book.
我不懂什么英语,李明也不懂。
I don’t know any English, nor does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, nor does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, neither does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, no more does Li Ming.
I hardly know any English, so it is with Li Ming.
I know no more English than Li Ming does.
I know as little English as Li Ming does.
一到家,我就把所见到的一切都记了下来。
On/Upon arriving home, I wrote down everything I had seen.
As soon as I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.
The moment I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.
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