Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
妈妈先教我用电磁炉,红色的是开和关,可以调温度,我把妈妈教的.使用方法一步一步学会了。下来妈妈教我打鸡蛋,第一次,我把鸡蛋打了一个小裂缝,我想把它剥开,妈妈见我为难的样子就对我说:“打鸡蛋要用点劲的碰才能打开.”我试着做了,果然蛋黄安然无恙。我高兴极了!妈妈又让我切青菜,我把我的手指头撑开扶着青菜去切,差点切住手指头。妈妈教我说,切的时候,要把手指头弯曲就能避免切到手指头啦。按妈妈教的我把青菜切的好好的。
我把电磁炉的开关打开,倒了一碗半的水开始煮了起来。我看到锅盖在抖动,妈妈说水已经开了,赶快把面放进去。我赶紧把面块放了进去。好慌张!然后我按妈妈的指挥放进了调味包和鸡蛋。我一会看看一会儿又看看,妈妈说这样很好,可以了解面是否煮熟了。在面快要熟的时候,我放入了青菜。啊哈!终于能吃到自己动手煮的面啦!
第一次吃自己煮的面条,居然相当的好吃。有一种成就感!真让人惊喜啊,我竟然会煮面了。以后妈妈不在家的时候,我就自己煮面吃,肯定不会挨饿了!
首先,要先把这两只“大家伙”给“放倒”。***了这两只“大家伙”可不容易。***的不好的话它是要将所有的“脚趾”都挣扎掉的!妈妈的***法是直接用刀从青蟹的.肚子上切下,一会儿就死了。看这两只死命挣扎的大青蟹,我忽然有点可怜起它们来,可是为了填饱肚子,只好牺牲你们了!
***死它们后,要洗干净它们。要洗两遍,刚开始不能把它手上的粗绳子解开。因为这时候的青蟹还没死绝,手上的钳子还是能挥舞自如的。一不小心就能将你的手指头“剪”出几个大口子来。由于青蟹是生活在很航脏的地方,要用刷子反复地刷洗,直至把它“指缝”里的泥都刷干净才行!
将青蟹洗干净后,就直接把青蟹放下油锅炸。炸好后就直接放入锅中下面。还要放入姜、丝瓜等食材,煮上几分钟,一锅肥美鲜甜的青蟹面就煮好了。
终于可以开始吃面了。肥美的蟹肉入口即化,再喝一口鲜甜的汤就组合成了一碗好吃美味的青蟹面!
这青蟹真是太美味了,我们一家三口将两只青蟹吃得一点肉都不剩。真希望以后可以经常都吃到这种美味。
很久很久以前,在离古龙德镇很远很远的地方,有一家很古老很古老的磨坊。磨坊主名叫米歇尔,他的两个徒弟名叫马兹和斯特凡。
有时候,来磨面的村民不那么多,干完活儿,米歇尔和他的两个徒弟就忙里偷闲睡一觉。偶尔,师徒一齐动手,到水轮磨坊的引水渠里去抓鱼。
这一天。马兹运气特别好,在引水渠里逮到了一条活蹦乱跳的大梭鱼。“把它拾掇干净了,做一餐煎鱼吃,晚上干完活儿以后,咱们一起来享用它!”磨坊主米歇尔说道。
鱼煎熟了,吃的喝的全部在餐桌上摆好了,这时候也已经午夜十二点了。午夜钟响的那一刻,米歇尔叫了一声:“大家胃口好!”大家正要下刀叉时,窗口突然闪现出一个怪物。这家伙全身草绿草绿的,丑陋的脸上一双滚瓜溜圆的大眼睛,还长着一张咧到耳根的蛤蟆嘴。这是什么东西?原来是生活在引水渠里的小水怪,它平日里在芦苇丛中安身,这会儿被煎鱼的香气吸引来了。
“能分点儿给我吗?”小水怪咂着大嘴问道。
“走开,哪儿来的回哪儿去!这是我们的梭鱼,凭什么要给你?”磨坊主叫道。
米歇尔话音未落,小水怪便撞开窗户跳了进来。只见它暴怒地喘着粗气,挥舞着长了蹼膜的手掌,满头满身的水草和淤泥。它叫道:“让你们这帮吝啬鬼记得我!让你们这些小气鬼终生不要忘记!”
小水怪叫喊着开始乱扔东西,碰到什么摔打什么,煎锅与锅铲齐飞,碗碟的碎片四处飞窜,水桶被扔到墙上,罐子被踩得四分五裂。面粉瓢、破抹布、劈柴、刀叉、洗锅刷子、酒杯满室飞舞,乒乒乓乓声响成一片。
我的天!这真是一场飞来横祸!从这天起,每天夜里十二点,小水怪都会光临古龙德磨坊。午夜钟声一敲过,磨坊里就会响起摔盆打碗声、咆哮怪叫声,吵闹得无人能够得到安宁。
接连过了好几夜,磨坊主和他的两个徒弟再也无法忍受了。于是天一黑,他们就锁上磨坊门,刹停磨轮,抱上被子到附近的村子去借宿过夜。
冬末的一个傍晚,他们正要将磨坊关门落锁的时候,从乡间小路上远远过来了一个走江湖的牵熊人。
“能让我和我的熊在你们这里借宿一晚吗?”牵熊人问米歇尔道,“瞧这又冷又湿的天,没有一个住处可真受不了。”
“借宿倒是没有问题,遗憾的是我们几个晚上不能住在这里。”磨坊主把近来闹鬼的事情一五一十地告诉了牵熊人。牵熊人听了哈哈大笑道:“不能让这东西继续作祟了,您几个就瞧我们的吧!”
于是磨坊主开了门,让陌生人和他的熊进了磨坊。牵熊人就在火炉旁边的长凳上躺下身来,大狗熊就睡在他脚旁的一束麦草上。
半夜十二点的'钟声一响,那水怪不请自来!它从窗户跳进屋里,立刻开始大吵大闹,锅碗瓢盆四处乱飞,响声震天。
大狗熊和牵熊人就像什么也没听到,什么也没见到似的躺着。直到一块劈柴砸到熊鼻子的时候,它才大吼一声跳了起来,伸出巨大的熊掌劈向绿毛水怪。一瞬间,那水怪被大狗熊给吓傻了。
水怪转身想逃,却被大狗熊拦腰抱住。它拼命挣扎,撕心裂肺般尖叫,好不容易才从熊的怀抱中挣脱出来。
第二天早晨,磨坊主和他的两个徒弟从邻村回来了。牵熊人把夜里发生的事情讲给他们听,把他们惊讶得目瞪口呆。牵熊人说道:“那个阔嘴绿毛的家伙吃了这一惊肯定会牢记这个教训,它再也不敢来***扰你们了。”
磨坊主和他的徒弟们摆了一桌子极其丰盛的早餐来款待牵熊人和他的大狗熊。吃完早,餐后,牵熊人又带着他心爱的熊继续赶路了。要问去向何方,只有他们知道。
果不其然,夜间闹鬼的事儿从此戛然而止。他们又像从前一样,过上了安居乐业的生活。
又过了几个礼拜,大地已经回春,冰雪全都消融了,灌木和大树都已抽出了新叶。椋鸟回归,不久之后燕子也漫天飞舞了。
磨坊主米歇尔干完了活儿,拿上鱼竿到引水渠旁钓鱼。他正在下钩的当儿,从柳树后面的芦苇丛中钻出了一个长着满头绿毛、瞪着大眼睛和张着癞蛤蟆式的大嘴巴的怪家伙来。它开口问道:“喂!开磨坊的!那个又黑又粗长着利爪的大家伙还在你们家吗?啊?那个傻大黑粗的家伙?”
米歇尔不假思索地答道:“你问的是它呀!当然在啰!前不久它还生了八个小崽子呢!”
“哇!我的天,一个还不够,又加八个?我再去你们磨坊,不是自找苦吃嘛!你说对吗,磨坊主米歇尔?”说完,咕咚一声,水怪沉下水去不见了踪影。
从此以后,古龙德磨坊附近,再也没有闹过水怪。
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
一位怀才不遇愤世嫉俗贫困潦倒饥寒交迫的秀才来到咸阳,他路过一家面馆时,听见里面“biang——biang——”之声不绝,一时饥肠辘辘,不由得踱将进去。只见白案上摆满了和好的长条状面块儿,师傅拎过一块儿,扯住两头,顷刻间摔打成裤带般宽厚扔进锅里,顷刻间摔打了好几块儿,顷刻间从锅里捞出一大海碗,碗底事先盛着作料和一些豆芽青菜,自然要浇上一大勺油泼辣子,热腾腾端上来。秀才看得兴起,大叫:“好啊!店家来一碗!”“这位客官一碗……”店小二一声长长的吆喝,顷刻间一碗面摆到面前,顷刻间碗中罄净,直吃得秀才大汗淋漓。“店家,结账!”秀才喝道。一摸兜,坏了,一时忘形,竟忘了囊中早已空空如洗,顿时窘住,刚才的热汗顷刻间冷冰冰刷在脸上。一旁,店小二斜着眼耸着肩,一脸坏笑。“小二……”秀才讪讪,话刚出口便被店小二堵住:“客官,本店小本经营,概不赊账。”见店小二不通融的模样,秀才又向身上摸去,左一摸,右一摸,上一摸,下一摸,好像早晚能摸出几文钱来似的。
店小二心想:“你个穷秀才,看你摸出什么来。”天呀,这不是有辱斯文么?秀才一面摸,一面思量脱身之计。他与店小二答讪:“小二,你家这面何名?”“何名?”店小二学着秀才的腔调说:“biang、biang面。”秀才问:“biang、biang面?biang、biang字咋写?”这家面店可是远近闻名的老字号,其面做得特殊,面与面板摔打撞击,“biang、biang”也,故称“biang、biang面,biang、biang”二字咋写,店家做面,客人吃面,谁也没去想过。见店小二答不上来,秀才顿时有了主意,他说:“小二,你与老板商量过,本人今天没钱,可否写出‘biang、biang’二字,来换这碗面吃?”店小二顷刻间回来,说:“成。”店家心想:“古来就没有‘biang、biang’二字,看你穷秀才怎么赖账。”“biang、biang、biang、biang……”秀才心里嘀咕,嘴上嘀咕。
秀才读书,也最认书,古往今来偏偏没有这“biang、biang”二字 ……“书上没有,岂可生造乎?”皇上可以造字为名,秀才岂敢与之比肩?秀才满腹心酸,一腔惆怅;寒窗苦读,功不成,名不就,众目睽睽下,落到赖账这般田地,天理不公啊!他一急,心里骂皇上:“什么‘日月当空照’?民间疾苦,哀鸿遍野;宫闱倾轧,豺狼当道;贪官污吏,横行乡里;我秀才寒窗苦读,就因无钱无人,打不通关节,获不取功名……日月何照之有!罢罢罢,你皇上能造字,我秀才何尝不能?”秀才一声大喝:“笔墨伺候!”只见他笔走龙蛇,大大地写了一个biáng!他一面写一面歌道:“一点飞上天,黄河两边弯;八字大张口,言字往里走,左一扭,右一扭;西一长,东一长,中间加个马大王;心字底,月字旁,留个勾搭挂麻糖;推着车车进咸阳。”一个字,写尽了山川地理,世态炎凉。
秀才写罢掷笔,满堂喝彩。从此,“biangbiang面”名震关中。
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