五年级英语去上海旅行的作文【一】
春天，暖暖的阳光照在我的身上，我的心情和天气一样，阳光灿烂。今天我们四、五、六年级的同学们将乘坐大巴，去我们向往已久的上海科技馆，体验一年一度的社会实践活动。
大巴士一路飞驰，一会儿就带领我们到达了目的地——上海科技馆。最先映入我们眼帘的是一个巨大的灰白色半圆形建筑物，远远地望去这个奇形怪状的建筑物就如同一轮月牙矗立在大地的怀抱中。进入馆内后，我们小组先去体验了“食物的旅行”这个游戏。我们乘坐梨车，从“嘴”中进入，经过了口腔的“咀嚼”，到达了“胃”进行消化的过程，通过动画版的介绍，我们知道了食物在人体内是怎样被消化的，怎样变成我们需要的营养。
参观过了新奇有趣的“探索之光”展馆，观看了美丽迷人的“热带雨林”后，我们一起高高兴兴地看电影去喽！《重返二叠纪》这部影片讲述了二叠纪中期，是两栖动物的天下。这里几乎都是两栖动物，有背帆鲜艳的帆螈、有凶猛的锯齿螈、有翅膀巨大的巨脉蜻蜓……4D电影模拟了真实的场景，电影院里还配备着各种场景模拟道具，它会根据电影的情节，进行各种模拟状态，给人身临其境的感觉。这部影片似乎让我穿过了时光的隧道，回到了那神秘的二叠纪。
科技馆让我领略到了我国科技的发达，让我对科技的领域有了初步的了解。我终于知道科技是多么神奇，我一定要多多学习科技知识，来解开未知的谜团。
五年级英语去上海旅行的作文【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语去上海旅行的作文【三】
今天，我去了上海复旦大学和中国馆。
首先，我在复旦大学的体育馆里打了羽毛球，又在学校的食堂吃了一顿午饭。然后参观了一下校园，觉得真美啊！著名的大学果然不同。
接着我离开了复旦大学，来到了中国馆。它外观以“东方之冠，鼎中华，天下粮仓，富遮百姓”为构思主题，表达了中国文化的精神与气质。它的大红颜色和特别的造型，看起来很雄伟。
后来我们到内部参观了清明上河图。清明上河图被媒体改造成动态的图画，里面的人、车、马、船、鸟、河流……都会动， 还 分白天和晚上。白天人们辛勤的劳动，黑夜安静极了。整个画面长达100多米，壮观极了。
接着看了哈定的艺术作品展，画的太像真的了。还有他学生的画，著名画家陈逸飞就是哈定学生之一。
最后我在轿车上兜了一圈，看见了月亮船形状的沙特馆、飞碟形状的奔驰展览馆，和美丽的世博园，可是因为天色已晚，所以没进去参观，有点遗憾！不过没关系，可以下次再来。
美丽的上海，快乐的一天！
五年级英语去上海旅行的作文【四】
今天早晨，爸爸妈妈和我一起去上海的“机器太空室”里去玩。
我们坐在飞机上4个小时，飞机开了3000公里了，我问爸爸：“怎么还没到？”爸爸说：“应该快到了。”司机对我说：“还有1小时。”在飞机上，我想着上海是个好玩的地方，想着想着，便睡着了。
过了一会，爸爸把我叫醒，我迷迷糊糊的回答：“爸爸，你到了再叫我啊，人家睡的正香呢。”爸爸说：“已经到了呀！”我一瞬间就回了神，说：“真的？”爸爸笑着说：“是真的！”我一骷轳爬了起来往外走。
我们走进了“机器人太空室”，那里有很多机器人和外星人。外星人有的可怕，有的很可爱，有的很温柔，还有的很恶心。有一个很有趣的机器人，我触了他一下，他就动一动，然后帮你按摩，再帮你打扫房间。我们来到第一层：“死亡鬼屋”，这里有很多的幽灵，我对爸爸说：“那里有门。”门上写着“想从此门通过，需要一个宝石（从这层找）。我们找了找，终于找到了一个，我把宝石放进去，门果然开了，于是我们便来到了第二层：僵尸谷。这里太可怕了，我们呆了一会就回来了。
这次的上海之行，让我很开心！
五年级英语去上海旅行的作文【五】
今天，我和妈妈继续我们的上海之行。我们来到上海刚建成的欢乐谷。
一进大门，就看见不远处的高空有飞椅在转动，不时还传来阵阵叫喊声。我们决定先玩这个刺激的游戏——高空转椅。排了一个小时的队，终于轮到我们了。刚坐上去，我心里有一些紧张，但转念又一想，男子汉不能害怕，会被人笑话的。铃声想起，椅子开始转动，并且慢慢升高，我听见耳边传来尖叫声，是妈妈的声音。随着椅子转速加快，伴随着椭圆形的轨道转动，我感觉整个人飞起来了，心里反而不在害怕了，好像自己变成了一只小鸟，在空中自由飞翔。时间到了，我们又慢慢下来了。
接着我们又来到更加刺激的水上项目——激流勇进。我和妈妈坐上一艘小船，开始漂流。为了防止淋湿衣服，还穿上雨衣。小船慢慢上升，上升，到达一定高度，停止了3秒钟，忽然沿直线向下滑去。这回，我吓得连叫的力气都没有了。眼睛一闭，把头扑进妈妈的怀抱，双手仅仅抓住妈妈的衣服。只听见水花溅起的声音伴随其他人的尖叫声，我知道到目的了。睁开眼睛，果然到了下面的小河里。回头望望，那高高的轨道，还心有余悸，这时，船上有人估计了一下高度，约27米。哇，真刺激！
我们还玩了“神奇草帽”、“蚂蚁王国”等许多有趣的项目。欢乐谷不仅给人们带来换了，更多的是刺激之后的害怕。
五年级英语去上海旅行的作文【六】
今天是周六，我们先搭爸爸的车来到上海同济大学的校园，在那里下了车，然后我和妈妈来到地铁站，开始了我们今天的征程。
我们先坐10号线来到了上海博物馆，上海博物馆门口真是人山人海呀，队伍排得很长很长，绕了很多个弯，我们也没找到排队的起点。我和妈妈不约而同地想，这要排到什么时候呀，排到天黑也排不到吧！
于是，我们妈妈来到了附近的上海工人文化宫，正好工人文化宫正好在举行邮票展，我们看到了很多漂亮的邮票。原来不仅要邮票漂亮，粘贴方式也是非常重要的，还有邮寄的地址。同一套邮票，不同的人，可以收藏出不同的风格。
接着，我们逛了书城，看了电影，买了小吃，最后来到南京路坐我最喜欢的小火车。好不容易挤上了小火车，你别说，风景还真不错！炎热的夏天，坐在小火车上享受着习习凉风，看看南京路的人山人海，还真是一种享受。这边不像太仓，这边有各色的人种，有黑人，白人，最多的是我们黄种人，还有浅咖啡色的人…。穿着的衣服更是各不相同，有红色的，有黄色的，有绿色的，有黑色的，有白的的，有橙色的……随着小火车的行驶，到处都是靓丽的风景线。
小火车的终点是上海外滩，外滩的人更是摩肩接踵。于是，我们选择在外滩坐上轮渡，享受下黄浦江上的风景，逃离会儿人声鼎沸。
上海真是个繁华的大都市，这一天我逛了好多地方，买了很多好吃的，过得很开心，很快乐，当然也很充实！
