英语作文写错词了如何改正【一】
兔子课上，五（2）班王军同学练习跳远时，不小心把脚扭伤了，不能动弹。只见他手指着右脚，咬着牙说：“疼……疼死我了。”几个身高体壮的男生七手八脚地把他抬出沙坑，小心翼翼地脱下他的鞋袜一看，啊，脚腕已经肿了起来，并且青里透紫地出现了淤血，王军也由于疼痛而汗珠直淌。大家一下子都慌了，有的说：“快送医院吧。”有的说：“快打电话通知他爸妈吧。”更有心急的同学，上前就要为他按摩，恨不得一下子把那个大肿包给揉下去。
就在大家手忙脚乱，心急火燎的时候，兔子王老师却镇定自若。他制止了要给王军按摩的同学，对大家说：“刚刚扭伤，绝不可以乱动，大家听我布置：冯旭——马上去医务室请校医，并让她带一卷绷带来；肖鹏——你劲大，把王军背到水池边。”肖鹏在老师的协助下，小心翼翼地把王军背到了水池边。同学们也一齐围了过来。
老师边用水池中的冷水冲洗王军扭伤的脚，边告诉我们，这是防止继续瘀血。一会儿，校医李老师来了，用绷带把王军脚腕上部缠紧。兔子老师又告诉我们，这是不让肿胀再扩散。然后，他又叮嘱王军把脚架在高处，保证血液回流疏通。看着老师熟练的操作，听着那头头是道的讲解，再看王军减轻了痛苦的表情，大家都长吁了一口气，一齐向老师投去了敬佩的目光。这时，王老师又推来一辆自行车，让王军坐在后车架上，和校医一起把他送到医院去做进一步检查治疗。
这堂课上得可真有价值，不光锻炼了身体，还增加了急救知识。事后连受伤的王军都开玩笑说：“用我身体的疼痛为你们换来了急救知识，值——”从此，大家更佩服体育王老师了。
英语作文写错词了如何改正【二】
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼，多休息，避免过度劳累，不吸烟，勤洗手;注意个人卫生，打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁，使用消毒液清洗的地毯，避免使用难以清洗的地毯，保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁，确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通，应每天开窗换气两次，每次至少10分钟，或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生，进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟，加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯，搞好厨房卫生，不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时，在户外洗手不方便的时候，可以使用免洗洗手液，随身携带，随时随地隔离病菌，呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时，应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热，100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
英语作文写错词了如何改正【三】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
英语作文写错词了如何改正【四】
我读了《亡羊补牢》这则寓言，感触很深。故事说从前有个人，养了几只羊。一天早上，他去放羊，发现少了一只，原来羊圈破了个窟窿，夜里狼从窟窿钻进去，把那只羊叼走了。他很后悔，不该不接受街坊的劝告，心想现在修还来不晚。他赶快堵上那个窟窿，把羊圈修得结结实实的。从此，他的羊再也没丢过。
这则寓言讽刺那些有错不改的人，同时也告诉我们有了错话要及时改正补过，否则就会损失越大。应当虚心听到别人的批评及时改正错误，若坚持不改，后果将不堪设想，我自己也犯过同样的事。
有一天，我把妈妈喝茶的玻璃杯打碎了，我怕妈妈知道就捡起来丢下窗户。过了一会儿，有人敲门，我在猫眼一看，原来是妈妈。我把门打开，坐在那里看电视，就当没有发生这个事情一样。我心里很着急，怕在妈妈面前说漏嘴，妈妈就会生气。一天，妈妈要喝水，找不到杯子。妈妈问：“艳玲，你有没有看见。”我说：“没有，没有，我没看见。”突然，有人敲门，我开门一看，原来是楼下的阿姨。阿姨说：“你们家谁前天把玻璃块扔到楼下。”妈妈想了想说：“应该没有啊，对不起。”阿姨说：“没关系，下次不要这样，不然你们就要被人骂，知道吗？”妈妈连忙说：“知道了，知道了，下次不会这样了。”这回，我心里很难过，我把妈妈的面子全丢了。妈妈说：“这到底是什么回事？是你做的，对吗？”我说：“妈妈，不是我，不是我，我没有把玻璃丢下去，真的，你要相信我。”说完，妈妈就把我拉到房间，叫我承认错误，就会原谅我。我没有向妈妈承认错误，如果我承认了错话，将会变得没有面子，同学们也不喜欢跟我一起玩了。这一次，我损失很大，失去了别人对我的信用，我内心很难受。
过了一星期，我体验到了，我是那么自私自利，只想自己的感受，而没想到别人的\'感受。我跟妈妈一直保持沉默，谁也不愿意先开尊口。又过了四个星期，我终于先说话向妈妈承认错误。妈妈说：“孩子，你永远是妈妈的好孩子。”我扑到妈妈怀里哭了，我体验到了家的温暖，懂得了一个道理：母亲对我们的爱是无私的。这次吸取了教训，我不会再犯同样的错误。妈妈，我一定会做一个懂事的孩子。妈妈，我爱你。
我想对您说：“妈妈，您辛苦了，等我长大了，有钱，一定会孝顺您，我永远是您的乖女儿。那些犯了错误的人，一定要及时改正错误，听别人的批评，不要向我一样，知道了错误还不改正，不然后悔就晚了。
