亲爱的女儿(思瑜:
你好!
首先,你能进入季延中学初中部学习,说明你是一个优秀的学生,你不但可爱,而且是个乖巧、懂事的女孩,我和你的妈妈为你感到骄傲,你也应该像我们一样为自己感到自豪。
你出生后,当我第一次抱起你的时候,我就明白了,你是我一生中最重要最爱的人,你的父母会尽一切所能为你创造一个舒适、安全的学习生活环境,会尽一切所能保护你健康成长,会倾注所有心血在你身上,任何时候都不要怀疑我们对你的爱。
初中是一个从儿童进入青少年的重要阶段,是人生价值取向的起点,你的任务就是不断的.学习、学习、再学习。学习要尽力,但不要给自己太大的压力,我们对你的学习成绩没有什么要求,但我们相信你是一个有上进心的人,你是一个喜欢学习的人,我们衡量学习成绩的标准取决于你的努力程度。
要学会交朋友,用真诚去交朋友,同时也挑选一些真诚的同学跟他们亲近,不必在乎他们的成绩,不必在乎他们的背景,不自高、不自卑,要诚恳、要自信,用最大的善意去对待人,你是一个真诚的人,相信任何人都会喜欢与你交朋友的。
要学会感恩,你有一个爱你的家庭,有一所高标准的学校,有一间充满温馨的班级,有一批辛勤教导你的老师,有一个真心负责的班主任,有一群活泼可爱的同伴,你应该要感到幸运,你应该要感谢身边的人,感谢那些教导过、帮助过、支持过你的人。
健康的身体是无价的资本,在努力学习的过程中,你要注意加强体育锻炼,多游泳、多跳绳、多跑步,注意用眼卫生,谨防近视。
最后,祝你
健康快乐。
爱你的爸爸、妈妈
十二月七日
如果有人问我的乐园在哪?我会毫不犹豫的告诉你,乐园就是我的多功能小房间。
我的房间面积不大。窗户外面有一个小阳台,一张小床紧靠窗台边。床底下摆满了大大小小的箱子,里面都是我的“宝贝”——玩具、乐高,拼好的乐高模型,它们有序地摆在床头。床边是书柜,左图右史,整齐地排列着。
早晨起来,一束金色的阳光射进来,我在小床上沐浴着阳光,伸一个懒腰,好不惬意!打开窗户看到阳台上有一颗开满小白花的桔子树,一股清香扑面而来,顿时使人心旷神怡。我喜欢坐在书桌前面大声阅读,在书的海洋中,我学到了“不破楼兰终不还”的决心和毅力,学到了“一览众山小”的自信和乐观。
学习之余,我会把门锁的紧紧的,坐在地上,翻出我的乐高玩具,专心致志地拼起来,拼出了霸气十足的霸王龙,我好像和霸王龙一起回到远古时代;拼出了气势磅礴的飞机,载着我,飞向蓝天。晚上,我在小床上甜甜的进入了梦乡。
这就是我的乐园。我成长的乐园,知识的海洋,想象的家园,奋斗的天地!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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