To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
十月三十日,一个不平凡的日子;襄阳城,一个有故事的地方。十月三十日夜,在襄阳城古城墙上,人们点满了蜡烛,齐聚城墙之下,为金庸老先生送最后一程。襄阳城,作为金庸先生笔下众多侠义之士都舍身守护的古城,虽其一生都未曾踏足,但在这一刻,襄阳城只为他而点亮。
被传了二十多次的谣言,这次,没等来辟谣,却等来了官方的证实。记得有人问金庸先生“人生应该如何度过”,老先生答“大闹一场,悄然离去”。正如老先生说的那样,他的一生便是大闹一场后,悄然离去。作为一个今年刚成年的零零后女生,我不爱韩剧,不爱偶像,偏偏喜爱金庸先生笔下这至情至性的江湖。得知先生死讯,我像受到重创一般,哭了好久。别人都不理解我是为何而哭,只有我自己清楚,我哭的是情怀,是少时所追逐的江湖。
飞雪连天射白鹿,笑书神侠倚碧鸳。一剑一侠客,一笔一武林。先生的离去,是一代传奇的谢幕,亦是一个时代的结束。他用一生构筑了一个拥有着刀光剑影,快意恩仇,侠骨柔情,至情至性的江湖。在这片江湖里,我们看见爱情,懂得侠义,领悟家国,初识人间沧桑。
江湖之大最动人处莫过于江湖儿女之情。有人为情所迷,有人为情所累。
对乔峰来说,情是“喜欢了就是一辈子”;对阿朱来说,情是“为了你,我宁愿牺牲我自己”。阿朱和乔峰的爱情是悲壮的。阿朱对乔峰说“便跟着你***人放火,打家劫舍,也永不后悔;跟着你吃尽千般苦楚,万种煎熬,也是欢欢喜喜。”却不想命运弄人,乔峰亲手***死了挚爱。自此,塞上牛羊空许约,烛畔鬓云有旧盟。面对阿紫的追求,仍记得乔峰说的那句“阿朱就是阿朱,四海列国,千秋万载,就只有一个阿朱”。直至乔峰离世,心里都只一个阿朱。
“靖哥哥,我死以后,我准你娶华筝,不准你娶别的女人。因为华筝是真心对你,我怕别的女人会骗你;我准你立一个坟来祭拜我,但不准你带华筝来,因为我始终是个小气鬼;我准你为我伤心一段时间,故此缅怀我,但我不准你一直为我意志消沉下去。”在黄蓉临死之际,给郭靖立下了三准三不准,让人至今仍心疼那个虽刁蛮任性,但将“爱的'人只要幸福自己便幸福”奉为爱情主旨的傻女子。
在周芷若和张无忌的婚礼上,赵敏独自一人前去,众目睽睽之下,那一句“我偏要勉强”,是那样的让人心酸。
江湖儿女,至情至性。这场江湖梦,不愿醒来。可随着岁月的流逝,终是要从向往江湖,仗剑天涯的年纪,回到世俗的平庸与柴米,将江湖深埋心底。
“你看,那天上的云聚了又散,人生离合,亦复如此。”查老先生,“今番良晤,豪兴不浅,他日江湖相逢,再当杯酒言欢。咱们就此别过。”下个江湖再见。
自然灾害夺去了许多人的生命,四川大地震,唐山大地震,青海玉树大地震......一个个活生生的例子警示着我们,我们不能等待。
自然灾害的发生,我要让沙漠中有河流流淌出来。土地荒漠化在急剧发生,我国的土地已剩余无己。有多少人在沙漠中因缺少死去,多少人在沙漠中迷路,假如我能制止自然灾害的发生,这些人就不会被可恶的“恶魔”掳去,假如我能让沙漠中流出水源,这些人也不会渴死。
假如我能让地震不在肆虐于地球。地震的频发,使许多人失去了美好的家园,失去了宝贵的生命。 假如我能制止,就会有多少人幸免于这次灾难,有多少人逃脱出地震的虎口。他们依旧能够在这美丽的家园无忧无虑的生活,享受着宝贵的.生命带给他们的欢乐与幸福。
我们的地球母亲已经伤痕累累,假如我能制止自然灾害的发生,我们的母亲仍旧会光彩照人。可恶的自然灾害“强盗”也不敢再来侵占我们母亲的躯体,吓得抱头逃窜,消失在浩瀚的宇宙。
我们只有一个地球,它是我们唯一的家园,假如我能制止自然灾害的发生,它可能会更加长寿有人预言:2012年,是世界灭亡的日子,假如我能制止自然灾害的发生,地球还会像以前一样富饶,这所谓的"预言"他将成为空淡。
假如我能制止自然灾害的发生,使其不再猖狂,我要让它们还我们一个全新的家园!
“强盗、恶魔”,滚出我们的领地,离开我们的家园!
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