六年级的英语 作文怎么写【一】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
六年级的英语 作文怎么写【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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六年级的英语 作文怎么写【三】
今天，我读了美国的著名作家纳塔莉·巴比特写的《不老泉》，看完后，我深有感触。
这个故事的主要内容是这样的：温妮·福斯特在家族拥有的森林里发现了一口泉，泉水竟然可以使人长生不老！但这也迫使小温妮进一步思考：永生究竟是一种福音还是一种诅咒？
喝过这口泉的塔克一家四口看着生命在身边流逝，而他们自己却永远不老，他们把这奇妙的经历秘密地像温妮道来……温妮最终没有去赴杰西的不老之约，她选择平平凡凡的过生活，选择经历生与死。若干年后，塔克一家又回到了这里见到了温妮，不过见到的是她的坟墓。她已经去世了，活了78岁。温妮虽然没有长生不老，但是她已经领悟了人活着的真谛。
人之所以害怕死亡，是因为死亡总是伴随着各种伤痛，各种离别，各种恐怖，各种残忍。你可能还想和你心爱的人多说几句话，你可能还想多看这美丽的世界几眼，但死亡断绝了你的这些希望。死亡绝然地带走你的亲人，或把你从你的亲人身边带走，带走你的爱、你的希望、你的快乐和健康。可是永生，并没有表面上看的那么风光。
死亡与出生就挨在一起，你没法儿只挑自己喜欢的，不要自己不喜欢的，完整的人生才是一种福气。人活着就得死，所以我们这模样，不能算活人，这能算是死人，是死物，就像路边的石头。这是塔克先生说过的一句话。曾经，我也向往长生不老，这样可以和家人永远呆在一起，可看完这本书，听完塔克先生说的这句话，我顿时觉得自己错了，错的太离谱了，我发现如果永远不死的话，那么你就不会去珍惜这个生命，去感悟这个世界！
所以，死亡真的不可怕，真正可怕的，是像塔克一家一样，永远死不了。
六年级的英语 作文怎么写【四】
《不老泉》是我前一段时间看完的，我觉得：世界上的坏蛋真不少啊！竟然能干出这种事情！如果我们喝了不老泉的泉水，永远不变老，那么世界上得有多少人啊！这样不断繁衍，地球都得开通地下公寓了。等地下再也开通不了公寓了，人们都要迁移到月球。再说，粮食也不够用啊！
不过，我很喜欢塔克和梅。因为他们都很和蔼、善良，保护温妮，很有办法。可是梅犯了唯一一个错误：她把穿黄衣服的人枪毙了。其实让他永久坐牢就行了，或者让法律公正的把他绞死，梅反而偏偏要***死他。我知道梅当时是忍不住，但是这是***人啊！
我还很喜欢杰西和温妮。杰西长得很英俊，这一点我不得不承认，哪个女孩喜欢丑陋的男孩呢（他的心如果很好可以原谅，但他毕竟真的很丑啊）？杰西还很照顾温妮，要是有这样一个男孩朋友真的很好（因为那些讨厌、卑鄙的人总会说男女孩在一起是初恋，我很讨厌这一点，也很难忍受，因为我喜欢和男孩子玩）。我喜欢温妮是因为她很顾全大局，因为在梅要被绞死的那一夜，是温妮主动提出要帮助梅坐牢，让梅离开。这样做也很安全，因为14岁以下的孩子不能判刑，不过也很让家人感到羞耻。
再说一说，我很讨厌穿黄衣服的人，我相信你们也一定的讨厌他，因为他跟温妮的家人说温妮被绑架了就是因为他想占有那块独特的树林，把不老泉泉水一点一点卖出去，而且提出很高的价钱，让他占有人们的很多很多的钱财。你们是不是也这样想？
人一定要不断发展，争取把人生变得更好，但一定要靠自己，不要贪得无厌，想出各种各样一般人想不出的诡计，夺取别人辛辛苦苦挣来的钱，得到自己虽然富贵却卑鄙的人生。
六年级的英语 作文怎么写【五】
人若不生不灭，永不衰老、改变，那将是怎样的情境？如果你拥有一眼神奇的泉水，喝下它便能成为永恒的存在，不会变化，身体仿佛定格，你会作出怎样的选择？
娜塔莉在她的童话中，就挖了一眼这样的《不老泉》。
温妮是一个不到十一岁的小女孩，家族有着一片林子。偶然地遇上了塔克一家，得到了一个惊天秘密——她的林子里竟有不老泉。
长生不老是很多人梦寐以求的，谁都想长生不老，永世长存，但是塔克却阻止温妮喝下泉水，因为塔克觉得人若一直活着，跟石头没什么两样。是的，人若不经历生老病死，那还有什么意义。生命不是用时间衡量的。而且若世上的人都是如此，那世界不成为了一张定格的照片？不老泉的秘密，就因此深埋于塔克一家的心中。
但是，这个秘密还是被一个阴险的人发现了，为了守住秘密，塔克一家倍受牵连，女主人梅因为误***了那个对泉水虎视眈眈的人送进了监狱。最终，温妮救出了梅。经历了一次次风波之后，生活又归于平静。林子再也无人深入。
但这个神奇的故事并未结束，温妮，还将面对那个也许决定她一生的选择。
尾声，带着几分凄凉。时间，磨平了往事。林子没了，温妮的宅子也没了，最后，温妮的选择浮出水面，带来了无限的伤感和震撼。一块墓碑上镌刻着温妮.福斯特的名字。
读完后，它带来的冲击仍萦绕心头。无论构思、语言、情节、文字都精妙无比，如真被不老泉滋润过一般，经典永恒！
六年级的英语 作文怎么写【六】
《不老泉》是娜塔莉·巴比特的成名之作。它主要讲述了小女孩温妮赌气离家出走，却在小树林里无意间发现了不老泉的秘密&&喝了可以长生不老，容颜也永远不会发生变化。然后，她被善良的塔克一家绑架了一天，并与他们过了一天。却不知这一切都被黄西装看见了，他从温妮的爸妈那里要来了小树林，报酬是找回珍妮。他来到塔克一家的家中，逼迫他们交出温妮，供出不老泉，并搬出森林。迫不得已，梅用枪托砸死了黄西装，而这一幕正好被林间村的治安警察目睹了。梅将面临被绞死的命运，但是，却没有一个人能置她于死地，因为她喝了不老泉。为了保全这个秘密，也为了梅，温妮做出了一个决定：让迈尔斯在晚上撬开监狱门，自己进去替换梅，让梅乘着夜色逃走。而杰克，则交给了温妮一杯不老泉的水，让她在十七岁那年喝下它，这样他们就可以一起走了。可是，这个愿望最终并没有达成，温妮为了救一只蟾蜍，将不老泉的水倒在了蟾蜍身上，自己却在78岁时去世。
这本书将善良的塔克一家和珍妮与为了发财而不顾一切的黄西装做了鲜明的对比。黄西装为了利益，为了发财，而不惜将不老泉的秘密公布于世，也不顾别人喝下后是否开心，只是一味地为了金钱。甚至当他遭到塔克一家的阻止后，竟想将他们打伤。那时，他的眼睛里只有利益，只有金钱，完完全全成了一个利益的奴隶
这让我想起了社会上的一些人。他们为了金钱，为了利益，不惜大打出手，有的甚至去***人放火，不顾一切地以各种手段获得金钱，最后因此进了监狱，穿上了囚服。他们也是一个个金钱的奴隶啊！
人要学会控制自己，别让自己成为金钱的奴隶，最终误入歧途！
