中考英语作文扣了一分【一】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
中考英语作文扣了一分【二】
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文：
第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论：
第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
中考英语作文扣了一分【三】
一大早客厅就传来咿咿歪歪的声音，仔细一听，原来是外公的声音，再细细听来，原来，外公在学说英语。
外公今年60多岁了，他头发花白，但仍然十分好学。
上个星期，外公和我说他想学英语，并让我做他的老师，教他说英语，那时我很惊讶，外公都六十好几了，怎么这么突然想学英语呢？我忍不住问外公想学说英语的原因，外公告诉我：为了提高文化水平，参加社区比赛。我一听恍然大悟。
我为外公制定学习英语的计划：要想说英语，那还得从音标、词语开始教起，我原本预计一天教外公十个单词，可在教的过程中，我发现现实和想象不一样，一天学下来，外公只能记住三、四个单词，这样的掌握程度，我有些崩溃。不过，外公是一个做事有明确目标的人，只要认定的事就一要会坚持到底的。
俗话说得好：“一分耕耘一分收获”。在外公的不懈努力之下，外公终于会说简单的句子了，这得归功于外公日复一日的练习。他现在已经能简单地和邻居说几句英语了，但为了赢得市区比赛，当会几句英语句子还远远不够，于是他每天把大部分的`时间都用来埋头苦读。瞧，早饭的时间到了，外公在读英语，午饭的时间到了，外公还是在读英语，晚饭的时间到了，外公仍然在读英语，有时连做梦都在背英语单词，我被他这种坚持的精神感动了。
转眼间，比赛的日子到来了，主持人宣读了比赛的流程并宣布比赛开始，只见外公抬头挺胸，一副胸有成竹的样子，看起来稳券在握。第一环节：猜单词，外公对答如流，好像这道菜对外公而言小意思，可到最后一个环节——选词拼句子，其中有一个句子的词语意思相似选A还是选B或是选C？外公愣住了，而时间在悄然流逝，台上的外公紧张得额头冒汗，坐在台下的我们都为他捏了一把汗。机会是留给有准备的人的。在比赛的最后10秒倒计时中，在紧张的选词中，外公最后还是选出了正确答案，比赛结果是外公得了第一名，他很有荣誉感，我们为外公感到高兴。
一分耕耘一分收获。外公学英语这一路走来，他的执着精神感动了我，我要像外公学习，并发誓以后要用心学习，争取取得优异成绩！
中考英语作文扣了一分【四】
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第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
中考英语作文扣了一分【五】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
