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我们先来到小西湾固体处理中心参观。我们向阿姨提出问题,知道这里是把废桨加工处理成砖、水泥,压缩、烧成石块、泥块;也把废泥加工处理在职砖来再利用,先是在沉淀池里抽取沉淀物,然后再进行加工处理,最后,制成成品砖出售。这样环保、循环利用的措施,我们怎能不支持这一种行动呢?对!我们要支持这一利行动。
接着,我们来到了强者企业,冠者陶瓷工厂。我们参观工厂,并也向叔叔、阿姨们提出自己想知道答案的问题。我知道了他们是非常支持环保的,他们的工厂就是一个例子:第一,他们的工厂的所有机器都是用电的,环保;第二,他们的工厂的一部分也是抽取污水沉淀物除去杂质,下药凝固,加工处理,最后制成成品砖出售,循环环保;第三,他们还利用剩余下的废料进行加工处理,最后制成空心砖,再循环利用,这样不仅再次利用做成砖,还把剩余下来的垃圾、废品的'数量减少到最低,环保!我们也要支持这一种行动。
我们再来到了罗南村,那里给我们的感觉就是:绿、环保。那里的水非常清澈,可以看到水底,可以用来洗衣服、洗菜。那里树木非常多,可以吸到清新的空气,可以听见小鸟“吱吱喳喳,吱吱喳喳……”的叫声,可以眼看万里,鼻闻四方,可以挡风乘凉,可以遮阳静休。
最后,我们来到了万科城背景。那里也长满了花草树木,在我们面前有一条清澈的河流缓缓的流过。“你看那边……。”“快来看一看这边……。”环保的一处处深深吸引了我们。
真是一次难忘的环保参观活动。
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior three student, it won't take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.
高中被认为是一个人一生中最好的时间。作为一名三年级的学生,在我毕业前不需要很长时间。现在,我和我的同学们分享了很多。
Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "no pains, no gains."
首先,我想对我所有的方式,教师,家长和朋友包括我的赞赏。没有他们的帮助和建议,我的生活将是不同的。其次,是对我伤害或误解的同学说对不起的时候了。沟通和微笑是友谊的桥梁。最重要的是,我已经下决心要尽一切努力去学习,因为我相信努力工作是成功的关键。正如俗话所说:“没有痛苦,没有收获。”
Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.
最后,我希望所有的年轻人都能充分利用时间,因为时间和时间等待任何人。
Some fish are forced to leave polluted water and are flying in the sky. But unfortunately, air is also so polluted that they have to wear masks. Each of them is crying, “Where is my home?” What a terrible sight!
Mankind has brought so much pollution. Waste is being poured into rivers and seas. Poisons to kill pests in farming and chemicals go into rivers and seas, too. Poisonous gasses from factories also make the air so dirty. The whole balance of nature is being destroyed as a result of our ignorance of the environmental protection.
Personally, man can not live alone on the earth. Should fish die from serious pollution, so would man! It is high time we did something to prevent such a scene from happening.
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High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior 3 student, it won't take long before I graduate.
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