人一生中的一半时间是和老师一起度过的,人们说我们是祖国的花朵,而老师就是辛勤的园丁。在我眼里老师就是我们灵魂的工程师,是我们光辉未来的领路人。鲜花之所以感恩雨露,是因为雨露滋润它成长;苍鹰之所以感恩蓝天,是因为蓝天帮助它飞翔;高山之所以感恩大地,是因为大地让它矗立成长;而我之所以感恩我的老师,是因为老师助我遨游在知识的海洋,飞翔在未来的蓝天上。在我飞向蓝天时,她一直守候在我身旁,他就是。我又敬爱又害怕的李老师。
李老师既是我们的严师也是我们的慈母同时他也是使我变得勇敢的人。刚到新的学校时,心中不免有些害怕。李老师就是我的新班主任,一开始老师就把我选为班长,对于一个新生来说是这应该是一个锻炼的好机会,可是一向在陌生环境里胆小的我却不敢接受,后来也不知道是怎么回事我还是当上了班长。记得有一次,班级里的男同学在走廊打架,我劝阻了好久也没有用,最后的我也不知道是哪里来的勇气,竟然对着他们大声说:“你们谁要是再敢动手,就永远也别想进班级。”其实我知道自己根本就没有权力来抉择他们,可是我还是要尽到我的责任,说这话的同时老师也站在了我的后面,而我并不知道。当我知道后心里反而特别的害怕起来,而老师却并没有责怪我反而是用温和的目光看着我,说我是个有魄力的人,老师的话深深的印在了我的心里。他的和蔼可亲使我在以后的学习和管理中变得勇敢。
然而在李老师的课堂上我们所有人都会害怕,她有个习惯就算上课不准我们看书,然后她提问我们回答。有一次他提出的问题没有一个人知道,她没有说什么只是一声不响的走了,我那个时候真的好想哭,好恨自己,作为一班之长竟然都不能回答出问题来,还把老师气走了。教室里鸦雀无声,我想我应该站出来了,我组织好同学们自觉学习后,和几个班干部一起来到办公室,校长等一些老师都在,我们一时之间都不知道该说什么,都只是一直沉默,就这样一直到下课,谁都没有发出声音。说实话,那个时候我倒是希望老是骂我们,那样至少我知道老师还在乎我们还没有放弃我们。整整一个星期老师都没有来给我们上语文课,都是其他的老师来上的,因此班级的语文成绩也是一落千丈。此时的我带着班级所有人的请求找老师回来上课,可是老师每一次都是把我拒之千里。我哭了,在所有人的面前我第一次留下了伤心的泪水,那里面包含着我的自责,害怕……在老师的门外我说出了我的心里话,说出了我对新学校新同学新老师的一切影像……时间在一点一滴的流逝。门终于缓缓的打开了,老师出来将我们拥入怀里,大家也一起欢呼。从那以后我们的语文成绩一直在全校第一,老师对我们的要求也松了,但是我们却还是像以前一样,一直到最后。
一次学校举行运动会。我参加了3000米,对于我来说体育是我的强项,而这次我却有些害怕。这时老师走过来微笑着对我说:“尽力了就好”我笑了。时间转眼而逝,只剩最后一圈了,我使出全身的力气冲刺,可是偏偏在这个时候,我摔了一跤,自己觉得自己的意志力就在那一霎那失去了,我的膝盖出了好多血,老师跑过来急切的查看我有没有受伤,我的内心顿时涌入一股力量。那就是老师爱的力量。我站起来,坚持跑到最后。在那一时刻,好像我完成了最伟大的事情,我胜利了。此时老师跑过亲自帮我上药,一边上药还一边问我痛不痛。我说不痛,此时的眼泪再一次掉下来。至于那是什么泪水我也不知道,因为那里面包含的太多太多……“春蚕到死丝方尽,蜡炬成灰泪始干”用这句话来形容老师是再好不过了,因为老师真的拥有像春蚕和蜡烛一样无私奉献的精神。
老师,您把希望的羽翼插在我们的身上,想让我们飞得更高、更远。正是这样,您在无形的小事中,教会我们如何做人、如何处事。您的关爱无处不在,那些点点滴滴的回忆,填满我的心海。当我们感到迷茫时,您便化身为指路明灯,带领我们在大海航行;当我们伤心时,您便化身为天使,为我们分忧,让我们快乐起来,重回活泼少年。作文
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第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
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The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的\',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
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第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成\"总—分—总\"结构
Children's finally here, it is our holiday, but imagine the children also accompanied by together, everybody is more excited.
Children on this day, white clouds float over the blue sky, the children also have made a hot air balloon, they sit together on yourself a hot-air balloon, extremely happy! Balloon flying high, and finally flew to the sky, the children are in the sky holiday, the children sit on clouds, umpa jump, like a frisky little monkey.
Playing children, suddenly to rain cats and dogs, the children of the balloon has stalled, baiyun sister swept away by the wind, the children fell into despair. Is a time of crisis, a group of dragonflies sister and sister flew caught the children, and the safety of the children to the ground.
On the ground, only butterflies woven into a rainbow "lei", the children wear a wreath, some like a fairy, some like a warrior.
Play tired, the children fell asleep between full of fragrance of flowers.
Children's good play my imagination, to one day be able to live in such a children's day.
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