生命重于泰山,安全高于一切。今天我们学校举行全校性的紧急疏散演练,目的是为了进一步提高全体师生的自我保护意识,提高面对突发事件的应变能力,增强在紧急状态下的心理承受能力,帮助全体师生提高自救、自护的能力。同时我们也希望通过今天的演练,大家能熟悉逃生疏散线路,一旦遭遇突发事件,能在最短的时间内进行逃生自救。
这次疏散演练比以往要具有挑战性,是在老师同学不知道在具体时间情况下发生了危害,考验我们老师学生的应变能力。但大家临危不惧,当广播中响起警报时,全体人员能严格按照突发事件应急预案,进入各自岗位进行及时疏散,各班学生在老师指挥下按照指定的安全出口,有序地离开事故现场,紧急撤离到安全地带,全部学生在规定的时间内到达了安全地带。从信号发出到第一个学生到达集合地,历时12秒钟,全体学生撤离完毕共花140秒钟时间,整个过程紧张而有序,撤离队伍一个接着一个,安全、迅速地到达集合地点,经过实地点名,全体学生和教职员工悉数到达指定位置,活动取得圆满成功在演练过程中保持了安全良好的秩序和快速反应的能力。本次演练活动共有263名学生和部分老师参加,整个演练活动达到了预期效果。
在取得成绩的同时,我们也通过演练发现了一些问题:表现为部分学生在活动中没能把演练当作一次实战演习,在疏散的过程中紧张程度不够,撤离速度不够快慢。这次演练虽然结束了,但安全工作没
有止境。各班级要认真总结教训,着手建立长效机制,完善责任制度,确保校园安全。
凡事“预则立,不预则废”。 灾难来临时,虽然我们无力对灾难说些什么,但关键在于我们如何防患于未然,知道当自然灾害来临时,如何给自己和他人的生命留下更大的生存时空。5 •12汶川大地震发生的那一刻,四川省安县桑枣中学全校304多名师生能死离逃生俱缘于他们每学期进行一次的疏散演习。桑枣中学教会学生逃生避险自救的能力,为我们树立了生命教育的榜样,也让我们回忆并懂得了08年中央电视台新年开学第一课《如何用知识来守护生命》的深刻含义。血的教训提醒我们要有备无患、临危不惧、坚持不懈。天灾虽不可避免,但历史却不该让它重复。今天的这场疏散演练给我们学校的.安全教育上了生动现实的一课,这对我们这样一所规模较大、正在发展中的学校显得尤为重要和必要。希望全体师生能以这次紧急疏散大演练为契机,进一步做好学校的各项安全工作,把安全隐患消除在萌芽状态,防患于未然。让我们用知识守护生命,用爱护卫心灵,牢记安全教育,学会应急避险的常识和技巧,努力营造一个平安、和谐、祥和的校园环境!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
(1举止文明,人多的时候不拥挤、不起哄、不制造紧张或恐慌气氛。
(2尽量避免到拥挤的人群中,不得已时,尽量走在人流的边缘。
(3发觉拥挤的人群向自己行走的方向来时,应立即避到一旁,不要慌乱,不要奔跑,避免摔倒。
(4顺着人流走,切不可逆着人流前进,否则,很容易被人流推倒。
(5假如陷入拥挤的人流时,一定要先站稳,身体不要倾斜失去重心,即使鞋子被踩掉,也不要弯腰捡鞋子或系鞋带。有可能的话,可先尽快抓住坚固可靠的东西慢慢走动或停住,待人群过去后再迅速离开现场。
(6若自己不幸被人群拥倒后,要设法靠近墙角,身体蜷成球状,双手在颈后紧扣以保护身体最脆弱的部位。
(7在人群中走动,遇到台阶或楼梯时,尽量抓住扶手,防止摔倒。
(8在拥挤的人群中,要时刻保持警惕,当发现有人情绪不对,或
人群开始***动时,就要做好准备保护自己和他人。
(9在人群***动时,脚下要注意些,千万不能被绊倒,避免自己成为拥挤踩踏事件的诱发因素。
(10当发现自己前面有人突然摔倒了,马上要停下脚步,同时大声呼救,告知后面的人不要向前靠近。
为此,专家特别提醒:当发现前方有人突然摔倒后,旁边的人一定要大声呼喊,尽快让后面的人群知道前方发生了什么事,否则,后面的人群继续向前拥挤,就非常容易发生拥挤踩踏事故。如果此时你正带着孩子,要尽快把孩子抱起来,因为儿童身体矮小,力气小,面对拥挤混乱的人群,极易出现危险。面对混乱的场面,良好的心理素质是顺利逃生的重要因素,争取做到遇事不慌,否则大家都争先恐后往外逃的话,可能会加剧危险,甚至出现谁都逃不出来的惨剧。
今天早上,我习惯性地走到阳台上看日出,可是映入我眼帘的是一片灰白色,就像巨大的布蒙在我眼前。原来,“白色魔鬼”雾霾降临了。
早上的雾霾像一锅白白的浓汤,遮住了我的视线,就连太阳光也刺透不了它,太阳就像一颗淡桔色的弹珠,挂在城市上空,显得一点力气也没有。原本的蓝天白云消失了,取而代之的是灰蒙蒙的天空。远处的群山不见了,连火车东站也被雾霾淹没了。
中午雾霾似乎消失了一点儿,但是近处的人、建筑、绿化和其他的东西,似乎还是蒙了一层白纱。这时,小区里的游乐设施上空无一人。小桥边的长凳上也没有人,要是往常,原本是家长们带着孩子去游乐设施玩、老爷爷和老奶奶去上桥边晒太阳的时候啊!可是因为雾霾,每扇窗都关得紧紧的。
晚上,雾霾悄悄地又出现了,由于夜幕的降临,能见度更低了,即便所有的车都把车灯打开也无济于事。路上行人很少,几乎都戴着口罩,为防止雾霾入侵体内影响健康。
为什么会产生雾霾?雾霾是因为污染太严重而产生的。让我们一起保护环境,阻止雾霾的产生吧!
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