This is my first week in ** Senior Middle School.Everything here is new for me.Our school is an old school but it`s very beautiful.I have 50 new classmates in my class.They`re all very excellent, I think, and I felt a little sad.Because I`m too common.But come to think of it,it`s a very good thing.I believe I can also be very excellent if I study with such excellent classmates.I didn`t know why Ms *** chose me to be the committee of study.But I know it`s a good chance for me to raise my ability.All I can do is do my best in the future.I am sure that Ms *** and my classmates can help me when I do something wrong. Because they`re all very kind.It`s a pleasure to work and study with them.I`m really very happy.I`m not an outstanding student in this class,but I can do the same thing like others.I believe I won`t make anyone disappointed.
Now I am in winter holiday, I am so happy, I can have fun with my friends. My friends and I make the deal that when the wind comes, we will go to the park and fly kites. Today the wind finally comes, after finishing breakfast, I go the park with my friends. We take out our kites, mine are butterfly, my friends are birds, all are so funny. I start to let my kite fly, but it could not, so I run faster and faster, then my kite flies, I go let go it gradually. A few minutes later, my friends’ kites are also flying. Seeing our kites flying, I feel so free. Today, I have a great time.
现在我已经放寒假了,我很开心,可以和朋友们玩。朋友们和我约定风来了,我们就去公园放风筝。今天风终于来了,早饭过后,我和朋友们去公园。我们拿出自己的风筝,我的.是蝴蝶样,朋友的是鸟的样子,都很有趣。我开始让风筝飞,但是飞不起来,因此我跑得越来越快,风筝终于飞起来了,我慢慢放飞。不一会儿,朋友们的风筝也飞起来了。看到我们的风筝飞着,我觉得很自由。今天,我玩得很开心。
很多学生觉得,只要脑袋里装满例子,写作时想要什么例子就有什么例子,就什么都不用愁了。其实,这是一种误解。议论文固然离不开例子,但例子并不能代替分析论证,议论文的力量,主要来源于作者丰富的生动的言之成理的思想,归根到底,要以说理取胜,并不是靠例子取胜。一篇八百字的议论文,你能举多少字的例子呢?例子多了,辨证分析的空间就小了,就很难把观点说透。许多学生就形成了一种强盗逻辑思维,不管三七二十一,叙完某人的成功之处就贴话题(命题),比如,在一次习作中,话题是尊重他人,有些学生就如此论证:李白之所以能够成为诗仙,能写出‘乘风破浪会有时,直挂云帆济沧海’的名句,就在于他能够尊重他人;鲁迅之所以能够成现代文学巨匠就因他能够尊重他人,这就是一种强加,前面没有事例证明,后面没有辨证分析,这些伟人之所以能够取得这些成就,就一定是他们能够尊重他人的结果吗?这就说明没有思辨能力就无法做到把理说透。
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