我的童年是多姿多彩的,有喜,有怒,有哀有乐,那些事情有时很可笑,有时又很无奈。
我的小时候,什么都不知道,主要是哭,学会走路的时候乱跑,到早教班也是玩儿,好不容易学会了一个“大"字,还是我哥教会我的。我小时候还经常逃课,逃午睡,躲到男厕所里不出来,由于大部分老师都是女性,所以我们总能逃过午睡。现在想想,我都不知道那些时间我是怎么耗过去的。
有次,妈妈因为当时的我还够不着马桶,就给我买了个尿盆回来,绿色的还泛着点黄色,刚拿回来的时候我还不知道这是干什么用的,好奇的这边瞧瞧那边看看,端详了一阵后,举起了尿盆,妈妈不知道我又在搞什么怪也只是看着我不为所动。只见我”咣“的一下把尿盆我的头上,当帽子戴了!我那时候头还很小,如果按我现在的头围把尿盆往头上扣,应该像个西瓜太郎,但像我原来那么小的头,尿盆往上一放把脸也给盖住了,成了四不像,妈妈看见了”扑哧“笑出了声,看不下去了,过来纠正了我,我乖乖的往里面撒尿,尿完之后把尿到了又扣在了头上,一点儿也不长记性。
我童年的事,常常有一些滑稽的举动,但是在家长看来它是可爱的,在现在的我看来是可笑的,我一些早教班的老师对我的逃课现象当然是可气的。
小时候的我就是这样:可爱,可笑又可气。
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
作为一名高中生,每天都需要把精力放在学习上,过着三点一线的生活,每次下课后,都会匆匆的吃上几口饭,然后回到教室继续学习,但是却没有想到今天我却晕倒了。
叮铃铃,下课铃响过之后,我像往常一样跑步去餐厅吃饭,因为如果跑的慢的话,那么就要排队,至少需要十分钟,所以我也尽量的减少时间的浪费,结果还没到餐厅,我就感觉到眼前一片黑,然后就晕倒在地,这一段时间,我根本就不知道我是怎么来到医务室的',因为当我醒来的时候我已经躺在了医务室的病床上了,检查结果是因为低血糖。
当我询问是谁把我送来的时候,医生也没说什么,只说了一句是一个个子高高的男生,把我背到这的时候就离开了,我十分感谢那个男生,除了自身的体重外,他也一定费了不少的力气,因为我知道餐厅离医务室有多么远的距离,然而我却不知道他是谁,不能当面感谢。
第二天的时候,我来到了学校的广播室,说出了自己的心里话,我感谢一个个子高高的男生,谢谢他能够在自己晕倒的时候深处援助之手,如果有机会,我一定会当面谢谢他。
记得那是一个爽晴的日子。下午第一节体育课,太阳火辣辣地烤着大地,天气干爽,燥热。嗓子里几乎要冒烟了,渴死了,想喝水的念头愈来愈强烈,如果能喝一口清凉的冰水,那该是一件多么惬意的事啊!
正想着,下课的铃声响了。我既没带水也没带钱就向朋友借吧!突然,我看见李烁手里有一瓶冰水,于是,我飞快地跑了过去向李烁借水,可李烁就就好像没看见我似的,走了过去。我愤怒极了!连好朋友都不理我,太没良心了!
到了教室,我的喉咙就像着了火似的,徐佳琦见了我,二话不说的把水瓶递给了我,我顿时热泪满盈喝了一大口,后来,我遇见了李烁,我本想转头就走,可李烁叫住我对我说:“我不是不理你而是我感冒了不想传染给你!"
顿时,我的泪水就像泉水似的涌了出来。
每一个人,都会有一些难忘的事。这些难忘的事,有发生在自己身上的,也有发生在别人身上的。这些事有发生在商场的,有发生在学校的,又发生在家里的,还有发生在大街上的……等。今天,我就给大家说说发生在我的学校,一完小的事吧!
我的学习一向很好,在一二年级的时候,我还考过好几次双百呢!可是,从三年级的时候,一切都变了。本来很简单的题,一下子变难了,而且,还加了好几门课。学习任务变重了,而题也越来越难,考试时,不是是只考语文和数学了,一下子变成了四门。让我们的负担更重了,本来我以为我还能考好,的确,三年级上学期我考了一个不错的成绩,英语也考了90多分。在我自信满满的去迎接期末考试的成绩时,一件令我疯狂的事发生了,本来语文,数学,综合的成绩都没有什么变化,都是90多分,可是,上次考了90多分的英语,这次竟然考了68分。
这次的英语成绩令我很伤心,给我留下了深刻的印象。不过,经过我的努力,我的成绩很快就上来了,而且还上升了。
© 2022 xuexicn.net,All Rights Reserved.