Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
黄沙满天,大雾蒙蒙,一股黄风卷起……你们也许以为你在看电影,也许以为这在做梦,总而言之,你们相信这是真的吗?其实,这是沙尘暴“捣的'鬼”。沙尘暴是沙暴大哥和尘暴小弟的总称,他们经常用风把地面大量沙尘卷入空中使空气十分浑浊。他们的出生原因是因人们大度砍伐树木与植物而产生的。沙尘暴兄弟俩作为一种高强度风沙灾害,并不是有风的地方他们都喜欢,只有植物稀疏的地方,他俩才去那里。如果那里是植物和树极缺的地区,他们就会亮出自己的绝招——瞬时风速每秒达25米,风力10级以上,可能使地面水平能见度低于50米!
沙尘暴是一种危害性极大的灾害性天气。当沙暴大哥和尘暴小弟找到自己的“作案地点”时,会以排山倒海之势滚滚向前移动。他们的“作案”后造成的后果可不小,有时,会使大片农田受到沙埋或被刮走活跃土,或者农作物受霜冻之害。它还能加剧土地沙漠化,给人民生命财产造成严重的损失,他们一旦出现,所经地区受害尤为严重。
去年12月31日和今年元月1日,沙尘暴兄弟肆虐甘肃省河西走廊,兰州市出现浮尘,在他们的统治下,连白天开车都要开车灯呢。今年3月底以前,甘肃河西走廊和内蒙西部已出现沙尘天气9次之多。3月中旬,兄弟俩的踪影出现在距沙漠地区遥远的南京市,引起人们的恐慌。
沙尘暴兄弟气焰嚣张,甚至飘扬过海,登陆日本了,日本的电视新闻都在说:从中国来的6年来最大的一次沙尘暴袭击了日本的大部分地区。
沙尘暴兄弟对人类的危害这么大,不除不足以平民愤呀!我想发明一种机器,专门治理沙尘暴。当然,我的机器它并不是《西游记》中多闻天王的混元珠伞,能把花果山的猴子收拾得干干净净,而是一种能播撒绿色的机器。因为沙尘暴兄弟光靠挡是挡不住的,只有把他们消灭在“出生”的地方,才是治本的好办法。沙漠是沙尘暴兄弟的“出生地”,我发明的机器,能把他们困在沙漠里不能出来“作恶”。机器的形状象一个超级可乐瓶,里面装满了富于营养的物质和植物的种子,这种瓶子可以固定在飞机的肚子下面,飞到沙漠上空的时候,就通过操纵杆打开“瓶盖”,把营养物质和植物种子均匀地喷洒在沙漠表面,营养物质里面饱含植物生长所需的水分,经过科学家的特别配制,落到沙漠上后并不会马上被沙子吸收或蒸发掉,它会一直坚持到植物长大为止。我相信,过了不久沙漠上就会遍布绿色植物了。我的机器表面涂着漂亮的绿色,好像在暗暗地告诉着我们要保护环境。有了我发明的机器,沙尘暴兄弟这两个祸害人民的“罪犯”肯定被绳之以法了,哈哈!
当然,这只是我的幻想,现在真正地实现这个愿望还要等一段时间。所以,我们要从身边的一点一滴做起,从身边的小事做起,努力学习科学文化知识,将来有更多的发明创造,让大自然变得更加美丽!
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
您好!
随着天气变化,预防流感的形势越来越严峻。根据河天区教育局思政科下发的“关于做好学校托幼机构流行性感冒防控工作的通知”,我校高度重视,严格按照上级主管部门和卫生部门的要求按部就班地做好预防工作。
学校利用板报的形式,对学生进行了预防知识宣教,提高学生的.卫生意识和防范意识;同时加强了晨午检,每天坚持晨检、午查、晚点,时刻关注学生身体状况,认真填写报缺课记录和晨检单;并将因病缺勤学生的详细信息上报所属社区卫生服务中心(站);下课后要求班级打开窗户,通风透气,保持空气流通清新;定期对校园各个角落进行全面消毒,确保环境清洁卫生。
学校努力做好各项工作的同时,希望家长能够全力配合学校,做好以下工作:
1、安抚好孩子的情绪,不要慌张,不要急躁,尤其是出现多名学生同时发烧、发热、咳嗽的班级,给孩子做好相应的解释工作,告诉孩子这种流感可控、可防、可治,不要渲染或夸大恐怖气氛,不要人为制造紧张空气。
2、请家长理解学校在非常时期采取的非常手段,只要学生发烧,必须马上联系家长,学生需要立即离校,病愈复课需凭所属社区卫生服务机构出具的康复证明方能返校。
3、学生因发烧在家停课治疗,对于落下的功课,学校已通知班主任老师与学生保持联系,让学生在家自主学习,保证与学校的学习同步。
4、每天坚持认真、耐心地给孩子测量体温,让孩子带好体温单,杜绝孩子仿照家长笔迹不负责任地签名谎报。
5、遥控好孩子的行踪和动向,放学后、双休日尽量减少或避免前往人群拥挤场所。
6、居住场所注意开窗通风,督促孩子用肥皂和流水洗手,合理安排作息时间,加强体育锻炼,注意膳食营养。
7、体温如果达到37.5度,必须隔离治疗;如需到医院就诊,最好乘坐私家车或搭乘出租车,不要乘坐公交车,途中必须戴口罩,到医院后禁止随处走动,直接到发热门诊。
8、如果发现孩子咳嗽,一定给他带好纸巾,咳嗽时捂住口鼻,用后扔到垃圾桶里,防止飞沫传染。
10、学校建议家长在日常生活中,做一些简单、美味的小药膳,进行饮食预防。
致礼!
黄沙满天,大雾蒙蒙,一股黄风卷起……你们也许以为你在看电影,也许以为这在做梦,总而言之,你们相信这是真的吗?其实,这是沙尘暴“捣的鬼”。沙尘暴是沙暴大哥和尘暴小弟的总称,他们经常用风把地面大量沙尘卷入空中使空气十分浑浊。他们的出生原因是因人们大度砍伐树木与植物而产生的。沙尘暴兄弟俩作为一种高强度风沙灾害,并不是有风的地方他们都喜欢,只有植物稀疏的地方,他俩才去那里。如果那里是植物和树极缺的地区,他们就会亮出自己的绝招——瞬时风速每秒达25米,风力10级以上,可能使地面水平能见度低于50米!
沙尘暴是一种危害性极大的灾害性天气。当沙暴大哥和尘暴小弟找到自己的“作案地点”时,会以排山倒海之势滚滚向前移动。他们的“作案”后造成的后果可不小,有时,会使大片农田受到沙埋或被刮走活跃土,或者农作物受霜冻之害。它还能加剧土地沙漠化,给人民生命财产造成严重的损失,他们一旦出现,所经地区受害尤为严重。
去年12月31日和今年元月1日,沙尘暴兄弟肆虐甘肃省河西走廊,兰州市出现浮尘,在他们的统治下,连白天开车都要开车灯呢。今年3月底以前,甘肃河西走廊和内蒙西部已出现沙尘天气9次之多。3月中旬,兄弟俩的踪影出现在距沙漠地区遥远的南京市,引起人们的恐慌。
沙尘暴兄弟气焰嚣张,甚至飘扬过海,登陆日本了,日本的电视新闻都在说:从中国来的6年来最大的一次沙尘暴袭击了日本的大部分地区。
沙尘暴兄弟对人类的危害这么大,不除不足以平民愤呀!我想发明一种机器,专门治理沙尘暴。当然,我的机器它并不是《西游记》中多闻天王的混元珠伞,能把花果山的猴子收拾得干干净净,而是一种能播撒绿色的机器。因为沙尘暴兄弟光靠挡是挡不住的,只有把他们消灭在“出生”的地方,才是治本的好办法。沙漠是沙尘暴兄弟的“出生地”,我发明的机器,能把他们困在沙漠里不能出来“作恶”。机器的形状象一个超级可乐瓶,里面装满了富于营养的物质和植物的种子,这种瓶子可以固定在飞机的肚子下面,飞到沙漠上空的时候,就通过操纵杆打开“瓶盖”,把营养物质和植物种子均匀地喷洒在沙漠表面,营养物质里面饱含植物生长所需的水分,经过科学家的特别配制,落到沙漠上后并不会马上被沙子吸收或蒸发掉,它会一直坚持到植物长大为止。我相信,过了不久沙漠上就会遍布绿色植物了。我的机器表面涂着漂亮的绿色,好像在暗暗地告诉着我们要保护环境。有了我发明的机器,沙尘暴兄弟这两个祸害人民的“罪犯”肯定被绳之以法了,哈哈!
当然,这只是我的幻想,现在真正地实现这个愿望还要等一段时间。所以,我们要从身边的一点一滴做起,从身边的小事做起,努力学习科学文化知识,将来有更多的发明创造,让大自然变得更加美丽!
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