玉林市中考英语作文评分标准【一】
青少年是时代的中流砥柱，是国家的希望与未来，为纪念五四运动100周年，我校决定组织学生参观吉林省博物院，让我们，了解吉林的历史和丰富多彩的传统化，激发热爱家乡，保护传统文化之情。
今天，我们怀揣着对中国历史文化和民族文化的无比崇敬之情，去参观了吉林省博物馆。在参观的过程中，我们深深地为中华民族的优秀文化所感染，我为自己身为一个中国人，自己的祖国有着如此丰富的历史文化和民族文化而感到自豪。
《白山松水的记忆——吉林省历史文化陈列》是反应吉林地域历史文化的一部大型通史陈列。展览分为文明曙光，汉唐古韵，松漠雄风，明清华章，近代吉林等五个部分，生动地展示了自有人类活动以来，吉林省的沧桑历史与变迁，反映了边疆各族人民不断的交流融合，共同创造中华民族文化的恢宏历史进程。
巍峨的长白山，孕育生命的三江之源，肥沃的松嫩平原边疆各民族共同生活的美丽家园。在这里，各族儿女携手谱写着中华民族大融合的历史画卷。王府屯仙人洞安图人榆树人为您徐徐拉开了吉林的历史帷幕，点燃了吉林大地上的生命之火，先民们依江河而居，逐水草而牧，捕鱼猎而食。众多的遗址，遗迹，散落在江河湖泊，山地草原。如今，历史的.沧桑依然留在了那些古老的断壁墙垣、碑碣石刻和墓陵大道、更有数不尽的历史谜底和文物瑰宝，等待着我们去探索，去发现。
吉林，正是有着一帧帧的记忆，描绘出了一副华夏各族人民共同创造中华文明的历史长卷。白山松水的记忆，星罗棋布的古遗迹，历史悠久的文物……沉淀经年而有勃勃生机，依拖着岁月的沧桑，开拓着辉煌的明天。
通过这次参观，我了解了更多的中华民族传统文化和革命文化，加深了自己的爱国情怀，在今后的学习，工作和生活中，我会努力继承中华民族优秀传统，发扬革命先烈不怕苦，不怕牺牲的精神，从身边小事做起，做一名合格的中国公民，不断完善自己，实现自己的人生价值。
玉林市中考英语作文评分标准【二】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
玉林市中考英语作文评分标准【三】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
玉林市中考英语作文评分标准【四】
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。
玉林市中考英语作文评分标准【五】
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第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
玉林市中考英语作文评分标准【六】
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第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句，承上启下
正文：
第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论：
第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段，构成"总—分—总"结构
