High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior three student, it won't take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.
高中被认为是一个人一生中最好的时间。作为一名三年级的学生,在我毕业前不需要很长时间。现在,我和我的同学们分享了很多。
Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "no pains, no gains."
首先,我想对我所有的方式,教师,家长和朋友包括我的赞赏。没有他们的帮助和建议,我的生活将是不同的。其次,是对我伤害或误解的同学说对不起的时候了。沟通和微笑是友谊的桥梁。最重要的是,我已经下决心要尽一切努力去学习,因为我相信努力工作是成功的关键。正如俗话所说:“没有痛苦,没有收获。”
Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.
最后,我希望所有的年轻人都能充分利用时间,因为时间和时间等待任何人。
1 No one can deny the fact that ...
2 The idea is hardly supported by facts.
3 Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ...
这种结尾方式,就是在文章结束时,以全文的内容为依托,运用简洁的语言,把主题思想明确地表达出来,或者在全文即将煞尾时,把写作意旨交待清楚,所以这种结尾方法又称“卒章显志法”。
有时,用来总结全文的还可以是名言、警句或诗句,这样的结尾更是言简意赅,起到画龙点睛的作用。
【例一】(作文材料:丛飞的故事。题目《落红》)
一花如此,对人则毋庸多言,记得有两句诗写得很好——“落红不是无情物,化作春泥更护花”。
【例二】(话题“2007年全国卷Ⅰ漫画‘摔了一跤’”,题目《让我摔一跤,继续前行》)
当我成功了,再来回顾摔的这一跤,我心中成功的喜悦将会把疲惫吹尽。
让我摔一跤,继续前行。
【例三】名篇《驿路梨花》的结尾
我望着这群充满朝气的哈尼小姑娘和那洁白的梨花,不由得想起了一句诗:“驿路梨花处处开”。
In short, it can be said that
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
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