曾听过这样一个故事:一只猎狗追赶一只兔子,兔子为了他的生命奋力向前跑,只是猎狗没有追上他。我们都知道,一般情况下兔子是跑不过猎狗的,但故事中的兔子为什么会跑过猎狗呢?因为他们的目的不同,他们所承受的压力也不同,狗是为了填饱肚子,兔子是为了保全生命,不得不使出全力。可见,压力不同,所付出的努力也不同,最后的结果自然而然也就不同了。
再说说现实生活中的我们吧!人类步入二十一世纪,世界多极化,信息全球化,知识信息量以百倍的速度递增。面对这样的现实,昔日人们的欢声笑语早已不见,取而代之的是人们不停的探索、追求知识的艰辛努力。我们何尝不是如此?!
作为一名中学生,我现在每天早上起床、上学,晚上:放学、学习。每天都重复着这些步骤,丝毫不敢放松。因为我们肩上的责任和所承受的压力迫使我们必须这样做。只有有了压力,我们才会努力;只有努力,我们才会成功。它们像一条链子一样,紧紧的系在一起,缺一不可。
现在国家在全力号召给中小学生减负,但结果却是令人失望的。不是那些老师愿意整天忙来忙去的,而是他们必须这样做。因为他们有压力、有责任。祖国下一代的生活、发展掌握在他们手中——可见他们的压力是多么的大。但最终的结果给予了他们肯定的答复。在他们的鞭策下一颗颗小树苗长成了能保卫国家的参天大树。同时,我还要说:说是减负,怎么减?谁能减?社会在进步,科技在发达。如果没有压力,孩子们就不会努力,自然而然就不会有好的结果。你可想过:如果孩子们长大之后对现代科学领域一问三不知,那将是一种怎样的情景啊!
在我们身边就有这样的例子。一位很胖的母亲,平时连走路都呼呼的.喘,更别说跑步了。然而,当她买菜回来看到自己的小女儿从楼上掉下来时,不顾一切的跑过去用自己的双臂接住了女儿。那速度简直比世界冠军都快。是什么原因让她有了如此惊人的举动呢?对,就是压力,是女儿在生死之中徘徊时给她带来的压力。可见压力有多大的作用。
同学们,不要抛弃自己身上的压力,即使有时它会让人疲惫不堪。因为只有当我们感受到压力的时候,才会努力的去向自己的目标驶去、才会跟上时代的脚步、才会站上世人瞩目的位置!
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
本文对边远地区艺术生的英语教育现状进行了总结,并提出了一些提升教学水平的策略,希望对相关的教育工作者有所帮助。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
宽敞的大道上,平日里朴素得只有匆匆忙忙的车辆来装饰,旁边的花草树木只是略微做个陪衬罢了。到了新年之际,便也换上了新衣,浓妆梳洗了一番,擦上了胭脂和唇红。胭脂是那五彩的串灯,挂在光秃秃的树枝上,光亮着喜庆的气氛;而那唇红,就是一个个通明闪亮的红灯笼,映红了大街小巷……
小城的集市,在年的脚底下也是人山人海的,大家都摩肩接踵地挤着走,每个人都愉悦地与菜打交道,每家的店主也都微笑着迎接一拨拨客人。“走一走,瞧一瞧,今天菜价优惠哦!”也不知是哪家的大嫂喊了一嗓子,人们都蜂拥过去挑菜称菜了。我想此刻大嫂的脸上,必定全是玫瑰花。在人人满意的笑容中,年,哧溜一声,又不知钻到了何处。
抬头一望,已是夕阳满照,紫红色的天空显得格外美丽。想必这时,家家户户都在欢天喜地地享受着天伦之乐,远方的游子也踏上了回乡的车船。也不知又是哪家的娃,挑着个鞭炮到处跑,打破了玻璃一样的宁静,带人们真正走进了新年的大门。
倒是我家的冰箱受苦了,塞满了新鲜的肉和蔬菜。这些全是年饭的`加盟友。我此刻已经馋得口水直流,奶奶肯定会在初六会客的时候大露一手,到时候,享受的可全是美味佳肴。
如今,新年的大门已经敞开了许久,人们每天都匆匆地礼尚往来。年的气息久久不去,逗留在每一个人的笑脸上。赠人玫瑰,手有余香,那一件件礼品,就是亲情、友情中的玫瑰。
过夜了,一家家的灯光次第灭了。月光皎洁,照在树梢,小城又在渐渐消停的热闹中熟睡了。年,也睡在了他的脚底……
(一)意识落后,态度不积极
部分学生对英语教育的认识不足,没有认识到英语的重要性,英语学习的主动性较低[1]。这种不积极的态度导致英语教学活动很难得到深入全面地开展,而且部分心理较幼稚的学生甚至会出现对英语的轻视或敌视:英语不是我的母语,无须学习。这是艺术生和普通学生都会出现的问题,而在艺术生中这一问题会因为各种因素出现的频率更高。另外,艺术生一般心理较崇尚自由,部分学生养成了较为懒散的学习习惯,没有进行计划性的学习,对学习的任务也是采取敷衍的态度,导致学习没有深度。在课后,很少有学生主动进行英语学习[2]。这些意识的落后最终都体现为对英语的忽视,态度的不积极严重影响英语水平的提高。除了学生,部分教师对英语的重视程度也较低。很多的艺术类教师只注重对学生专业能力的培养,只注重表演、绘画、音乐等艺术涵养高、文化程度深的课程教学。他们忽视了英语作为语言的沟通作用,没有进行较高质量的英语教学,导致学生学习更加懒散。最后,学校的考核制度也不够合理,大多数学校采取期末的方法进行考核,而考试的监督又不够严格。这种考试制度使得学生的学习只是为了应付考试,教学的宽度有所下降。
(二)基础较差,教学难度大
艺术类专业的文化课程分数线较低,很多学生英语基础比较差,大多数都在60分左右,平均水平处于不及格的状态,甚至部分学生的英语成绩在20分左右,英语成绩在100分以上的比较少。一方面,学生的基础差,而教学内容是需要一定基础的,这一矛盾导致教学从最开始就没有进行良好的对接。随着教学的继续,学生之间的差距越来越大,整体水平甚至出现了倒退。另一方面,基础差使学生养成了一种无所谓的态度,抱着破罐子破摔的心理对待英语学习。英语作为一门语言类学科,学生在日常生活中使用得也较少,一旦教学出现了间断,就会出现倒退的现象。而且,艺术生的专业课占比极大,练习较多,学生没有课外时间进行英语学习,导致基础不牢固。
(三)方式单一,教学效果差
由于艺术类专业对英语不够重视,导致教学的方式没有变化,资源分配过少,加剧了教学模式的单一。大多数英语课堂仍然采取教师课上讲授、学生被动接受的教学模式。这种灌输式的教学方法损伤了学生学习的积极性,也不利于对教学的深度进行挖掘。尤其教授对象是艺术生这种思想较为活泼、性格较为开放的群体,这种死板的教学模式带来了沉闷的气氛,导致部分学生对英语教学出现了抵触的心理。
(四)难度不合理,实际意义低
目前边远山区的英语教学没有考虑艺术生的基础较差这一现状,导致教材与教学脱轨,很多学生无法理解教学内容。另外,在教学内容的分配上,英语的运用内容较少,这会造成教学的实际意义降低,无法适应高考及社会发展的需求。
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