他,有一个颗忧国忧民的`心;他,有一颗坚贞不屈的心;他,有一颗高风亮节的心。他为了心中的梦想九死一生而无悔,一曲千古绝唱在坎坷中吟成。因此,他成了人们心中高悬的日月,烛烛光焰永远照耀后人。便举世皆浊的世界没有他栖身的净土。他带着忧国忧民的哀伤;带着旷古未有的悲凉;带着千古未有的遗恨,绝望地沉入了汩罗河。因此而千年悲泣。因此而万古流芳。
忧国忧民,换回的是无情江水--涩
历史虽离我们远去,却依稀闻到芳香种种,让我们尽情品味--历史的味道。
成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐,每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如:
必须按时回家,不准打电子游戏等。请你结合家庭的实际情况,根据下面的提示
和要求,以“MyFamilyRules”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:1、家里有哪些家规;2、对家规的感受;3、对父母的建议。
要求:1、必须包括提示内容,可以适当发挥;2、词数:80个左右;3、文
中不得出现真实的地名和人名。
MyfamilyRules
Myparentsarestrictwithme.Therearemanyrulesinmyfamily.Letmetell
yousomeofthem.IamnotallowedtospendtoomuchtimewatchingTVorsurfing
theInternetonschooldays,andImustgotobedbefore23:00,becauseIhavetodo
myhomeworkandgetupearlythenextmorning.Ihavetocleanmyroomevery
morning.Myparentsthinkitisaverygoodhabittodoso.ButIdon’tagreewith
them,becausemyroomisnotalwaysdirty.EvenIdon’tagreewithsomeoftherules,
Iwillfollowthem.Ithinkmyparentswon’tdoanythingthatisbadforme.
Unit8ItmustbelongtoCarla
【原创习作点评】
请以Jack的身份根据下面提示帮他给他的老师Mr.Black发一封电子邮
件。词数在80词左右。
提示:1.当Jack到家时,他发现自错拿了英语书,他认为肯定是Tracy
的,因为书上有Tracy的名字。
2.Jack的书可能在Mr.Black家的书桌上。如果在,请老师帮忙保存起来,如
果不在,麻烦Mr.Black告诉他Tracy家的电话号码。
DearMr.Black,
Iamsorrytotroubleyou.Iwantyourhelp.AfterIgothome,Ifoundthatmy
Englishbookwasn’tinmybackpackandItookawrongbook.Ithinkitmustbe
Tracy’s①book,becausehernameisonit.IthinkmyEnglishbookmightbeon
yourdesk.Ifitisthere,pleasehelpmekeepit.Ifitisn’tonthedesk,pleasetellme
Tracy’stelephonenumber.Shemighttakemybook.Iamlookingforwardto
youre-mail.Thankyouverymuch.
Jack
教师点评这是一篇比较优秀的学生习作。得分点(1)内容完整,行文流畅(2)
(一,介绍你SpringFestival.
TherearemanytraditionalfestivalsinChina.MyfavoritefestivalistheSpringFestival.It
comesinJanuaryorFebruary.TheSpringFestivalisoneofthemostimportantfestivalsin
China.BeforetheSpringFestivalpeopleoftenpreparesomethingnewanddeliciousfood.On
theeveoftheSpringFestival,peopleoftengettogethertohaveabigdinner.Chicken,fishand
dumplingsarespecialfood.DuringtheSpringFestival,familyoftengotovisittheirrelatives
andfriends.Childrencangetmuchluckymoney.IliketheSpringFestivalbecauseIcanspenda
lotofhappytimewithmyfamily.
(二介绍中秋节
TherearemanytraditionalfestivalsinChina.IliketheMid-autumnFestivalbest.It’sone
ofthemostimportantfestivalsinChina.ItcomesonlunarAugust15th.Familyoftengettogether
forthefestival.OntheMid-autumnnightfamilyhaveabigdinner,thentheyenjoythefull
moonandsharethedeliciousmooncakeswiththeirfamily.Themooncakescarrypeople’sbest
wishestothefamilytheloveandmiss.IlikethisfestivalbecauseIcanspendahappytimewith
myfamily.
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