要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
“两耳不闻窗外事,一心只读圣贤书”这句话教育我做什么事都要一心一意,不能三心二意。它让我常常想起。
记得那天晚上,我正在写作业,耳边突然传来一阵阵歌声,我想起,爸爸正在楼下看电视。再一听,那不是我最喜欢的歌——《想象之中》嘛!于是我也跟着哼了起来。渐渐地,我手里的笔快了,不一会儿就把作业写完了。等到爸爸来检查我的作业时,一看我的作业写得乱七八糟的`,甚至作业里还有歌词,顿时火冒三丈。厉声说道:“你难道不懂‘两耳不闻窗外事,一心只读圣贤书’吗?你是做作业,还是听歌的呀?真是心不在焉,重做!”没办法,我只好再重新做一次。虽然我被爸爸狠狠地批评了一顿,但我也明白了:学习要认真,只有“两耳不闻窗外事,一心只读圣贤书”才能专注学习。
这件事给了我很大的触动。在学习中,我也把爸爸的话记得牢牢的。有一次,老师不在教室,班里的“捣蛋鬼”也坐不住了。叽叽喳喳叫个不停。而我没有随波逐流,又想我践行了这句话:“两耳不闻窗外事,一心只读圣贤书”,于是,我就专心地写起了作业,写完后,,我又认真地看起了书,丝毫没被外界的嘈杂所干扰。等到老师来了,沸腾的班里顿时变得鸦雀无声。可老师还是看见了一言也没发的我,还表扬了我。此刻,我又想起了那句话:两耳不闻窗外事,一心只读圣贤书。是这句话指引我,让我得到了老师的表扬。
正是爸爸教育我的这句话:两耳不闻窗外事,一心只读圣贤书引导我让我受到了老师的表扬;让我做事不再三心二意;让我认真地对待每一件事……这简短而有意义的一句话。
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