初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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外公种了一块花生地。一天,外婆对我说:“我明天去挖花生,你去不去摘花生呀?”咦,摘花生,不就把花生摘下来吗?简单,我最拿手了,把小小花生摘下来,这不是易如反掌呀!于是,我回答:“好呀!”。
第二天清晨,我一大早就起床了,外婆起的更早,早饭吃过,我就出发了。
骑了不到十分钟,妈妈把车停到了路边。我下了车,跟着外婆来到一排花生前。外婆拔出一株花生给我看,一颗颗白白嫩嫩的花生长在根上,很可爱。外婆让我和妈妈一颗颗摘下来,不要把连着花生的茎也摘下来。摘下来的花生放进篮子里,摘完了没用的扔在一边。于是我开始摘了。一开始,我先摘了几颗,不知是我的.方法不对,还是花生长得太牢了,总是有几颗花生摘不下来,要费很大劲才勉勉强强把花生拔下来。就这样,才摘了几株我就筋疲力尽手发麻。而外婆则一刻不停地挖花生,一株株挖好的花生排队似的放在一旁等着我摘,我摘也摘不及。
这时妈妈拿起一株花生,一边笑着对我说:“太慢了吧!摘花生要讲究方法,你看。”于是妈妈熟练的摘起花生来,“花生有个茎连着的,你摘花生时不要顺着茎拉,要反着撕,还有你抓花生要抓在花生的头上,这样就轻松多了!”我看妈妈的手灵活的一拨一拨,一株花生马上摘光了。
我也学着妈妈的样子摘,轻轻一拨,花生就摘下来了,哈哈,果然有很好。过了一会,篮子马上满起来了。这时,太阳越来越大,我手上脚上都沾满了泥土,还有蚊子虫子来回袭击,身上越来越痒。可是我看大家都在辛勤的劳动,想:再坚持一会吧,马上摘完了。于是我加快了速度,熟能生巧,终于把这一排花生摘完了。
经过这一次摘花生,我知道了农民不是这么好做的。
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