五年级英语作文我的书包【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文我的书包【二】
书包，它是我们上学的必需品，这样，发来的新书，买来的文具，就有了一个温馨的家。
我的书包特别大，四四方方的。它的颜色是由黄色、红色、粉色三种颜色组成的，我很喜欢。背面有一对双肩带，是由粉色组成的，很漂亮，我也很喜欢。
我的书包两边各有一个小网兜，左边每天装着一把蓝色的漂亮雨伞，右边则装着常常为我解渴的水杯，让我不会被淋雨，也不会口渴，让我的嘴巴每天保持湿润。
我的书包里里外外有四个包。书包最大的包装的是我的语文书、数学书等，还有一个小包我都是放文具盒、尺子等学习用品。第三层住的是我的一个本子大家族，一到做作业，语文本马上跳出来，钢笔也跳出来，让我写作业，一会是语文本跳出来，一会又是圆珠在忙碌，它们都想帮我快点完成作业。
第四层住的是我的运动品，如跳绳、长绳、毽子等。一到体育课，它们就积极的出来让我好好运动、运动。
我的书包很整齐，只是有点旧了，但是我会好好爱惜它。
五年级英语作文我的书包【三】
如果你可以在生日的时候得到一个想要的礼物，你会想要什么呢？我想要一个新书包！我的这个想法刚落地，我的爸爸妈妈就送了我一个新书包，而我这个想法根本还未脱口而出呢！
我指的“落地”，是指我的想法从我的脑袋里落到我的心头，至于我的爸爸妈妈是如何知道我这个想法的，我想这正是他们成为我的爸爸妈妈的原因吧！爸爸妈妈送我的这个新书包，不仅从形式上符合了我的心意，而且在内容上也切合了我的心意。
我的新书包是一个小猪佩奇里面恐龙先生的造型，一只绿绿的恐龙身躯，还有着一张红红的嘴巴，而这个书包正是从恐龙先生的嘴巴那里可以装进我上学所用的书本，可以取出我上学用的文具的。这只恐龙先生的四只脚，正好是我可以背在背上的书包带，那条坐落着一排小山的恐龙背脊依旧延伸出了一只恐龙尾巴。你能想象我的新书包是什么模样吗？如果你爱看小猪佩奇的话，一定明白我的新书包是什么样子，并且知道它有多么可爱了。
我的新书包现在每天都陪伴着我上学放学，我背着它走在路上，总能引来许多小朋友的关注，这让我不由自主地低下头来开心。我喜欢这种别其他小朋友羡慕的眼光，这让我觉得自己拥有着了不起的东西。
现在我的爸爸妈妈来接我放学时，也是依照这只恐龙先生的新书包来从人群之中找到我的。爸爸妈妈说我们放学的时候，就像是养鸭人放出了关了一天的小鸭子，唯有这绿绿的书包可以让他们辨认出我在哪里。爸爸妈妈这样的说法，让我觉得很有趣，也让我的新书包有了更加不可替代的用途！
五年级英语作文我的书包【四】
书包，它是我们小学生不可缺少的伙伴，有了它的帮助，我们学习用品便有了它们自己的小天地了。
我的书包是在一年前一次和家人去逛商场时买的。我的书包的外形很像长方形，不算大。它的高为35厘米；宽为26厘米；侧宽为15厘米。它是双肩背带的，背上它，不至于让我很吃力，也不会高低肩。它的颜色是深粉红的，正面看去有3兄弟，最特别的要数老三了。老三是个大爱心形，大爱心的表面上还有白雪公主、灰姑娘和睡美人的卡通图案，醒目极了。
我的书包不仅漂亮，而且功能齐全，里里外外有8个口袋，各有各的用途。
老三，就是一个大爱心形，主要负责一些小本子和红领巾等小杂物的存放。老二，则负责装一些我做作业用的作业本，如：字帖、家庭听写本等。老大是最富有的，不仅它自己一层，里面还容纳了3小层，一块硬板从中间隔开，最后面还有一层纱网，有多了一层。
老大的第一个孩子，主要负责保管一个绿色的笔袋，还有晚上做完的作业，这样方便于第二天早上交作业。老大的第二个孩子，负责保管我要上课用的的书和语文、数学、英语的辅导书和同步练习题书，比如：课程探究、活动手册等。第三个孩子负责保管一些课外书或学习资料。
而它两边的小口袋，一边是网线袋，一边是布袋。网线袋装的是我的浅蓝色小折叠伞；布袋是放我的小水壶用的。
这么多的东西都放在这个书包里，书包多辛苦啊！可它从来都不叫苦，默默的陪伴着我！书包，我感谢你帮我承载了那么多的知识！
五年级英语作文我的书包【五】
我有一个漂亮的小书包，每天背着它高高兴兴地去上学，它陪伴我快乐成长，是我形影不离的好朋友。
书包一般按年纪大小而分类。幼儿园小朋友的书包很小巧，小学生的书包相对要大一些，中学生的书包就更大了，而且功能更齐全。当然书包还分女式和男式两类。女式书包一般粉红色居多，男式书包一般以黑色为主。书包的品牌很多，常见的品牌有迪士尼、米奇、联众等等。
我的书包是蓝色的，迪士尼的。正面有一个非常可爱的米老鼠图案。书包的两侧各有一个网兜，可以用来放文具盒、水壶，雨伞等。书包内部有三层，呈阶梯状。第一层是个小空间，适合放小巧的作业本以及教科书。第二层适合放大作业本和课本。第三层空间最大，适合放饭盒、零食、衣服及其他大件的东西。每一层，还有一些小格子，可以用来更详细的分类，便于使用。
书包的上方有一条拎带，书包的背面有两条背带，左右对称，设计巧妙，按我们背部的支撑点设计出保护垫，避免了我们走动时书包撞击脊椎带来的伤害。
我把书包保护得很好，只要有一点脏了，我就把它洗得干干净净。我喜欢我的书包，他伴随着我度过了童年时代。
五年级英语作文我的书包【六】
我的书包看起来小巧玲珑，可容量却不小。它分成两层，第一层，是“杂物小弟”，里面装着我每天用的饭盒，美术课的彩笔和颜料，音乐课用的口琴。它里面还有一个微型的小袋子，小拉链经常是关闭着的，这是一个秘密，里面藏着我节省下来的“MONEY”，没有人知道，我就叫它“小金袋”。
第二层是正品大哥，里面装着我的正科大将军：语文课本，数学课本，英语课本，他们三个在中间正襟危坐，后面站着十几个为他们服务的“本子小士兵”，他们团结一致，和谐相处，是一个牢不可破的团体！
另外，书包还有两个侧袋，是网眼的，左边装我的水瓶，右边装我的纸巾，也是必不可少的“小宝贝”。
这就是我的书包，它默默地伴随我走过春夏秋冬，陪伴我成长的脚步，虽然不曾开口说话，却是我最忠实的朋友。我会加倍珍惜她！
