mybag英语作文五句话四年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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mybag英语作文五句话四年级【二】
“两耳不闻窗外事，一心只读圣贤书”这句话教育我做什么事都要一心一意，不能三心二意。它让我常常想起。
记得那天晚上，我正在写作业，耳边突然传来一阵阵歌声，我想起，爸爸正在楼下看电视。再一听，那不是我最喜欢的歌——《想象之中》嘛！于是我也跟着哼了起来。渐渐地，我手里的笔快了，不一会儿就把作业写完了。等到爸爸来检查我的作业时，一看我的作业写得乱七八糟的`，甚至作业里还有歌词，顿时火冒三丈。厉声说道：“你难道不懂‘两耳不闻窗外事，一心只读圣贤书’吗？你是做作业，还是听歌的呀？真是心不在焉，重做！”没办法，我只好再重新做一次。虽然我被爸爸狠狠地批评了一顿，但我也明白了：学习要认真，只有“两耳不闻窗外事，一心只读圣贤书”才能专注学习。
这件事给了我很大的触动。在学习中，我也把爸爸的话记得牢牢的。有一次，老师不在教室，班里的“捣蛋鬼”也坐不住了。叽叽喳喳叫个不停。而我没有随波逐流，又想我践行了这句话：“两耳不闻窗外事，一心只读圣贤书”，于是，我就专心地写起了作业，写完后，，我又认真地看起了书，丝毫没被外界的嘈杂所干扰。等到老师来了，沸腾的班里顿时变得鸦雀无声。可老师还是看见了一言也没发的我，还表扬了我。此刻，我又想起了那句话：两耳不闻窗外事，一心只读圣贤书。是这句话指引我，让我得到了老师的表扬。
正是爸爸教育我的这句话：两耳不闻窗外事，一心只读圣贤书引导我让我受到了老师的表扬；让我做事不再三心二意；让我认真地对待每一件事……这简短而有意义的一句话。
mybag英语作文五句话四年级【三】
自从上了四年级，电子琴就以它的魅力深深的吸引了我，妈妈采纳我的意见，给我报了电子琴培训班，我欣喜若狂，走进教室开始了第一节课，起初几节课的\'歌曲挺简单，我还弹得挺不错。可学到《梁祝》主题曲时，我怎么弹都弹不好，坏脾气就上来了。因为在家里，我总是练不好曲子，不是认错了谱子就是弹错音，弹了半天连半个曲子都练得半生半熟，那更不要说把一首完整的曲子弹好了，我如一只疯狂的狮子，跳着、叫着、用手拍着琴，眼里噙着泪水，心想：老师的手在琴键上飞速的行径着，在琴键之间跳动着，一阵阵美妙的琴声随之而来，令人不由自主地跟着哼了起来，而我细长的手指在琴键上却十分笨拙，这下可好了，一拿自己和老师作对比，我火气更大了，一颗颗金豆豆 从我眼中滚了出来，可是这些带火气的金豆豆 并没有让我情绪得到一点好转，我的眼泪流得更凶了，我拼命拍打着琴，认为这样就可以减轻痛苦，客厅里传来爸爸的脚步声，我感紧胡乱一抹眼泪假装弹起了曲子，可是拍琴声终究没有逃脱爸爸的耳朵，爸爸走进房间对我说：不是任何事情都可以用生气来解决，把弹琴当作是一种享受，把一点一滴的失败当成自己前进的道路。 我闭上眼睛，心里想着爸爸对我说的话，努力让自己心平静下来，随着心情的平静，我感觉自己仿佛就是贝多芬，正在舞台上演凑着。
终于，经过我的不懈努力，我的指尖在琴键上跳起了优美的舞，随着舞蹈者的跳起和降落，跳舞的速度和节拍，一首悲伤而悦耳的曲子传进我的耳朵里，她仿佛在向我诉说着古时候梁山伯与祝英台的凄凉故事。
在爸爸的话语下，我改掉了我的坏脾气，这句话让我永生难忘。它是我的指路标，是我的照明灯。
