Father's Day
Yesterday was Father's Day. I had planned to give my father a present. But I didn't remember it until in the morning.It was too late to post a card to him. So I decided to buy something. When I was in the department store. I found it was not easy for me to choose something right for him. Suddenly I
got an idea. I ran home and opened my computer. I made a beautiful card and mailed him through the Internet. then I began to make supper. When father came home, he was very glad to find a big meal on the table. then I asked him to check his e-mail. He was amazed to find a beautiful card in his e-mail-box.
What a wonderful surprise!
你有一个好听的名字,叫“草莓姑娘”。在你的脸上,正使用梅红色调形成了一个个小小草莓,在我幼儿园小班时,我遇见了你,当你被“重重”地放在我手上时,我心中是无限惊喜。在我中班时,每天都用稚嫩的`笔触写下一个又一个歪歪扭扭的错别字,画下一幅幅图画,记录着每天的心情与无意中收获的笑话。到了大班,认识的字多了写日记的兴趣更浓了。每天着情与轻轻翻开厚厚的封面,看着用草莓拼起来的“diary”,记录下每天的点滴。后来的七年里,几乎每天都写日记,直到六年级,已经全部写完了,一篇篇从头翻起,看着以,小小孩口吻写的小,有种想笑的感觉,不是嘲笑,而是会心一笑,仿佛有两个我在纸上交流。翻到一篇笑话,被幼时的我贴上了“世界上zuì 好玩的笑话”的标签,现在看看也不过是个冷笑话而已。
还记得幼儿园时,同学们常围在一起讲笑话,黄雨昕说:“以前有个人,上树摘苹果,从树上掉下来了,哈哈哈哈!”范浩堃说:“从前有个人,去摘苹果,结果被狮子吃了,哈哈哈哈!”轮到我时,我可不像他们“信口拈来”一个笑话,我轻轻打开你,不慌不忙地翻到有抄写小笑话的地方,用半生不熟的语调读笑话,同学们都被逗乐了,以后每天都会有同学问我,带上你了吗?
现在的你,已经有些破旧了,可是很干净。从第一页到最后一页,是你见证了我从一个懵懂的小女孩成长成一个少女,,是你见证了一个个歪歪扭扭的字长大成为工工整整。是你倾听了我从小到大的快乐与哀伤,你有着我的秘密,你是我的秘密。我把你架在书架上,把你藏在枕头底下,把你放在我的心中,永远地保存下去。你就像我的母亲,包容着我的一切。
你,在我心中。
1分析论证方法的作用
句式:使用××论证的方法+论证了××观点+效果
具体如下:
(1)举例论证:通过举具体的事例加以论证,从而使论证更具体、更有说服力。
格式:使用了举例论证的论证方法,举……(概括事例)证明了……(如果有分论点,则写出它证明的分论点,否则写中心论点),从而使论证更具体更有说服力。
(2)道理论证:通过讲道理的方式证明论点,使论证更概括更深入。
格式:使用了道理论证的论证方法,论证了……了观点,揭示了事情的本来面目,从而使论证更概括更深入,令人信服。
(3)比喻论证:通过比喻进行证明,使论证生动形象、浅显易懂。
格式:使用了比喻论证的论证方法,将……比作……,证明了……的观点,从而把抽象深奥的道理阐述得生动形象、浅显易懂。
(4)对比论证:对比论证的作用就是突出强调。
格式:使用了对比论证的论证方法,将……和……加以比较,突出强调了……的观点。
(5)引用论证:引用论证比较复杂,这与具体的引用材料有关,有引用名人、格言警句、权威数据、名人佚事、笑话趣闻等各种情况,其作用要具体分析。如引用、格言警句、权威数据,可以增强论证的说服力和权威性;引用名人佚事、奇闻趣事,可以增强论证的趣味性,吸引读者往下读。
格式:使用了引用论证的论证方法,通过引用……证明……的观点,使论证更有说服力。(或更有趣味性,吸引读者往下读)
2分析论据的类型和作用
1、论据可分为道理论据和事实论据二种类型。答题要点二个方面:明确论据类型;具体分析作用。这类题目就其实质是考查论据与论点的关系,无论是与中心论点与分论点的关系,都是证明与被证明的关系,所以,规范性答题格式如下:这是……论据,在文中起着证明……(论点,如果有分论点,则写出它证明的分论点,否则写中心论点。)
2、补充论据作为一种新题型正在流行,做这种题目,注意以下二个方面:(1)看清楚要求补充的论据类型,即看清楚要求的是名言还是事例;
(2)补充名人事例要注意字数限制。当然,作为应考,可以准备“勤奋”、“处世”等常见主题的名人事例和名言。名言字数要少,事情要熟悉,不要为求新而准备那些较长名言或不熟悉的名人事例。
3文章提出中心论点的方式
(1)文章标题点明中心论点;
(2)文章开头提出中心论点;
(3)文章结尾归纳出中心论点;
(4)文章中间用某个承上启下的句子提出中心论点。
(5)文章没有直接提出中心论点,但始终围绕……展开论述。
4分析文章的论证思路
首先应该了解一般议论文的结构:提出问题(引论)——分析问题(本论)——解决问题(结论)。分析议论文的论证思路,其实,就是在段落层次的`基础上加上一些诸如“首先”、“然后”、“接着”、“最后”一类表承转启合关系的词语。做这个题目,尤其要注意开头结尾的表述。
1、开头的内容有:
(1)提出中心论点;
(2)引出论题;以上二个方面,要具体回答出提出中心论点或引出论题的具体方式,有的是通过名人名言、有的是通过名人佚事、有的是通过趣闻笑话等。
2、结尾的内容:
(1)深化中心论点,提出……的结论;
(2)重复或强化……的中心论点;
(3)发出……的号召或劝勉人们……;
(4)补充论证了……。(有时候会考查这方面作用,其作用是使论证更严密。)
做这类题目,就是把文章的引论、本论、结论具体化地陈述出来。
5议论文开头的作用
(1)开门见山,提出中心论点。
(2)针对现实中某种现象(或事例或观点)进行分析,然后提出论点(或提出论题),具有很强的针对性
(3)引用名言提出论点或论题,同时,名言又是证明论点的论据。
(4)由某个故事或事例引出论点或论题,同时,故事和事例又是证明论点的论据。
(5)摆出错误的论点和论据,为下文的批驳树立靶子。
(6)用生动的比喻或故事(如寓言)引出论点,既能激发读者的阅读兴趣,又能把抽象的道理形象化,便于读者接受。
6议论文结尾的作用
(1)深化中心论点,提出……的结论;
(2)强调……的中心论点;
(3)发出……的号召或希望人们……;
(4)补充论证了……。(其作用是使论证更严密)
(5)总结全文,得出中心论点
(6)提出问题,发人深思,其发人去关注或思考某个问题
7议论文写作特点分析
议论文写作特点分析的角度比较多,如修辞手法、论证方法、写作手法等
(1)修辞:
①比喻:把××比作××,形象生动,把抽象的道理形象化,有力的论述了的××论点,便于读者理解和接受;
②排比,增强了文章论证的气势,增强了文章的说服力和感染力;
③引用,引用古诗文,使文章富有文采,同时有力证明了××论点。
引用名言,有力证明了××论点。
④反问:增强语气,发人深思
⑤设问:启发读者思考,强调某种观点
(2)论证方法:参考论证方法的作用谈。
(3)写作手法比较固定,常见的就是:
①举例论证与道理论证相结合(夹叙夹议);
②以……论证方法为主。
新年到了,家家户户忙得不亦乐乎。你瞧,二婶在家包着饺子,大爷和姐姐忙着贴春联,奶奶帮着妈妈煎肉圆,王叔叔家热气腾腾的正在制作包子,人人脸上露出幸福的笑容,处处充满迎新年欢乐祥和的氛围。
你听,“啪——啪”,瑞鸡在片片雪花、阵阵鞭炮声中翩翩而来了。瑞鸡她送走了金牛,喜滋滋、乐陶陶的报告着祖国人寿年丰,国泰民安的喜讯,打开了新年之门。
小伙伴们拜年说话的声音传到耳中,我一骨碌爬起来迅速穿好新衣新鞋,来不及吃园子,草草洗刷了以下,我就撑着一把布伞,拿着一只袋子,虽然外面下着零星小雪,但是我还是一蹦一跳地加入拜年的队伍。
“恭喜发财,身体健康”
“鸡年万事如意!”
“鸡年行大运,今年发大财。”
“祝爷爷奶奶过百岁!”
一大把一大把的糖果放进口袋,一大把一大把的花生果放到了衣兜,一张张透新的压岁钱乐坏了我的心情。在回家的路上,提着满袋的糖果、花生果,我们满脸笑容,满载而归。年龄比我们小的伙伴眼睛紧盯着我们,投来羡慕的眼神,那时侯我的心里别提有多高兴了!
回到家,妈妈说:“我家女儿真不错,拜年拜了不少的糖果!”尽管装着漫不经心,不当一回事,可心里美滋滋的。
看着这飘飘扬扬的大雪,一朵挨着一朵,一片接着一片,飞向千家万户,我想起了“瑞雪兆丰年”的俗语。
今年是鸡年,我祝愿大家鸡年快乐,吉星高照,天天幸福平安。
Dear Dad,
Long time no see, I do miss you. Well, let me tell you something about my life here.To tell the truth, i live a normal life just as anywhere i can live.(我过着一个在任何地方都普通的生活 My life is revolved on work and work.(我的生活除了学习还是学习Frankly,i feel tired sometimes(老实说,我有时候觉得很累.But i see, studying is the whole life to students like me.(但是我知道,学习是像我这样的学生的全部 So no matter how difficult, i will do my utmost .所以不管多艰难,我都会尽自己最大的努力。
Best wishes for you .
When I was a freshman in college I watched the film Gua Sha Treatment for the first time, now I am a junior student and I come back to review the movie from a multicultural aspect, I have many different feelings after watching the film again.
At the beginning of the film, XuDatong is given an award and later he delivers a speech. What makes me impressed most is in his speech he says “one day I will become one of you, a truly successful American, today this award proved that America is a true land of opportunity and I am the living proof of that.” At that moment Xu thinks he has realized his American Dream totally with his lovingly wife and adorable son. However, I think it is ironical that to make a speech like that and I assume it is made on purpose to hind a clue for the story\'s development. How many non—American people have such a beautiful American dream? One of my classmate studies in American now and before he went aboard he told me his American dream is he can stand at the top of the New York. To be honest, I also dream that one day I can get the Green Card living there happily and successfully maybe working at the Wall Street. When Xu gets the award he thinks he entirely melted in the melting pot neglecting the multicultural obstruct, later the plot goes against the way he thinks. And later Quinlan asked Xu\'why you be the scapegoat of your father?\' Xu answers \'because he is Chinese.\' Then maybe Xu knows that there is always a wide gap between Chinese and American cultures.
The second scene is Xu hit his son Denis because Denis hit the son of xu\'s boss, at the middle of the film xu tells his boss that he hit his own son is only to show his respect to his boss John Quinlan, that time Quinlan feels puzzled “what a Chinese logic”,yes, American can never understand such a logic full of Chinese characteristic, because they respect everyone including the children, they won\'t beat a child to please the boss, and there is no such a conception of degree between employee and employer, they feel everyone is equal, which is quite different from china.
Connected to the second scene, the third difference I want to analyze is the care for the children. In America, people pay more attention to the right of children which can be seen from the law—leaving children alone at home is illegal, while in China it is so common that almost everyone may experience such loneliness. And Children Welfare Agency does work in America which shows the importance Americans attach to children\'s right. What\'s more, I remember a line \'No one won the case, especially the child.\' In my opinion, it also manifests the universal concern from the American public to the children.
The fourth aspect is following the procedure, in the film, more than there times, the people focus on the rule, the law, the procedure. At the Christmas Eve Xu wants to return back to his home pretending as a Santa Claus, what a pity, the security recognizes him and persuades \'you are always a good tenement, never causes troubles for me.\' And another scene is at the end of the film , the judge says \'I have to follow the procedure.\' However, in China people always have to ask for a favor to do something, and later you have to pay back the favor,for myself, I prefer the American style, strict to the procedure.
The fifth and the last point is the humors, Quinlan says \'you can\'t fall, your health security is the company paid.\' \'Datong, welcome home, maybe next time, you can come from the front door.\' \'dady, why you come from the window\' \' because we don\'t have a chimney.\' I really adore this distinguished American humor, especially in dangerous situations, which is quite rare in China.
That\'s my whole reaction to Gua Sha Treatment.
1议论文的三要素
论点:作者对议论问题所持的见解或主张。(全文的灵魂。起统帅全文的作用。)论点要求:鲜明、正确。鲜明,即论点必须表示拥护什么,反对什么。正确,即论点必须符合客观实际,能够解决实际问题。
论据:作者用以证明观点的根据。
论证:作者用论据证明论点的过程和方法。
2论证方法
道理论证、举例论证、对比论证、引用论证、比喻论证
3论证方式
立论、驳论
Dear Daddy,
亲爱的爸爸,
Thank you very much for your letter written to me. In your letter , you not only expressed your expectation to me , but also showed all your love to me . I was deeply moved . Thanks again ,Daddy .You said ," I hope you get bravery and perseverance, and can quickly grasp living skills like a lion ". Now I want to tell you that I will try my best to do everything well and live up to your expectations . Dear father , you are a great lion in my mind .
谢谢你给我写信。在信中,你不仅仅表达了你对我的期望,还展示了你对我所有的爱。我深深感动了。再次谢谢你,爸爸。你说,“我希望你能够变得勇敢和有耐心,并且能像狮子般快速的掌握生活技能。”现在我想说我会尽我最大的.努力把所有事情都做好来达到你的期望。亲爱的爸爸,你是我心中的狮子。
When I am absent mind , when I am depressed, you , my dear father is always there . Your advice and encouragement guide me through many difficulties . Thank you , Dad, for your help and understanding. I love you , Dad ,forever!
当我茫然、绝望时,是你,我亲爱的爸爸永远都在我身边。你的建议和勇气引导我克服许多的困难。谢谢你,爸爸,谢谢你的帮助和理解。我永远爱你,爸爸。
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