Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
“叮铃铃……”上课的铃声响,我们迅速在操场操场汇集,个个都是欢天喜地的。上体育课多好,不用呆在教室里,我们可以自由自在地奔跑,玩耍。
体育委员从器材室拿足球出来,于是我们兴奋的去领足球。拿到足球后,我们想来个足球比赛,于是,老师将我们分成两个对,我在一队。
比赛开始,我们两队分别派出代表,来玩剪刀、石头、布,决定由谁先发球,结果我们赢。球一发,大家都发起猛烈的攻击,肩擦肩,脚碰脚,球在我们的脚下不停地滚来滚去……
现在,球控制在我们队的支旭辉的脚下,他是足球大王,很厉害的。支旭辉过五关斩六将,站到离球门的不远处,准备射球。突然,他脚抬到半空时,对方一名队员迅速冲过来,以速雷不及掩耳之势,将球接走。刚气得直跺脚。球在对方队员的脚下传来传去,突然有人忙中出错,居然把球传到我的脚下,射门不是我的强项。球在我的脚下滚一会儿,我就慌里慌张地把球传给张凌杰。他踢着球如鱼得水,控制自如,对方的阻拦,好像更激他往前冲的力量。他盯着球门用力猛抽一脚,没想到还是偏。球没进球门,反倒蹦回来扣到自己的头上。
“哈哈……”一片欢乐的笑声游荡在操场上空。队长摸着头脑傻笑,紧接他迅速用头顶着球,往球门射去。可惜对方的守门员也不是吃闲饭的,转身一跃,球就被抱住。
比赛仍然激烈地进行着,但双方攻势都很猛,谁也没有进球,比分依然是0比0。
欢笑中的时间总是过得特别开,老师吹起哨声,比赛宣告结束。我们个个累得满头大汗,兴高采烈地回到教室。
上个星期天,爸爸帮我报了一个班,名字叫“新节拍”。新节拍是学音乐、舞蹈、美术、书法等等,我报的班是漫画班。
今天是星期六,我就要开始学习画漫画了,我怀着一颗好奇的心,早早的出了家门。在路上,爸爸告诉我一节课上一个小时半。我边哼着小曲,边听着爸爸说话,心情十分愉快。到了教室门口,我似乎有点紧张,但是我还是从容的走了进去。我找到我上课的地方,一看的地方,一看,哇!那么少人啊,加上我才只有四个人,因为这个班是新开的。
我一进教室就看见,教我们的老师是个男的。我心里在想:男老师会不会很凶呢?我带着这个疑问听着老师讲课。老师先告诉我们漫画有几大类,一是中国传统类漫画,还有一类是新漫画,新漫画的第一位创建者是日本人,具体叫什么就不知道了。老师在这半个小时中就先让我们认识一些漫画的基础知识和漫画与动画之间的关系。讲完这些后,老师又讲了头部的比例和面部的表情,半个小时就不知不觉的过去了。
后一个小时,就是给我们画画的,老师叫我们画五个不同的苹果,也要有五种表情,分别是:喜、怒、哀、乐、惊。我们认真仔细的画,一个小时又眨眼间过去了。
这节课,让我学会了许多知识,也得到了无穷的乐趣!
本周二上午第四节,我们上一节有趣的体育。
上课铃响后,体育老师的哨子声响起。我们迅速步跑到楼下集合,整队,体育委员把队伍带到操场上。
“这节课我们来做个以前没有做过的游戏,是考验脑子的灵活性的,咱们看谁的脑子反应最灵活。先解一下游戏规则,”“哇噻!”我们都兴奋地喊起来。体育老师开始布置任务。“这里画四条线,南北两边共四条,中间两条短,边上两条长。分两组,同学们面对面的站在中间两条线上,吹一声哨时,南边的同学们反身跑,北边的同学们追,追上的同学就下去,吹两声哨时,北边的同学们反身跑,南边的同学们追,如果哨声拉长,就原地不动。听明白吗?”“听明白。”同学们齐声回应道。“好,游戏开始。”
第一轮游戏正式开始,没想到体育老师第一声哨就给我们一个突然袭击,吹一声长哨,有的同学的身体就动,随后摇摇头就很不情愿地下去。幸运的是我还在上面。第二声哨,吹一声短而清脆的哨,随即南边的同学像兔子一样飞跑起来,而我们北边的同学就像老鹰一样紧追不舍,最终他们还是逃不出我们的手掌心,输得只有一个“剩男”李振。我们这边还有五个人,我心想:“五个人对一个人,他们那边肯定输,就等着看他们那边输得多惨吧。”我暗自得意起来。
两声短促的哨声响起,我正在得意呢,刚反应过来,就已经晚,李振迅速抓住我和另一同学,其他同学也很快被“抓”住。唉,大意失荆州,真是骄兵必败,以后可真要吸取今天这个深刻的教训。
就这样,我们还没等到下一轮比赛,下课的铃声就响。在同学们欢乐的笑声中,一节有趣的体育课结束。
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
今年五月一日,我们一家坐着小轿车去云台山旅游,一路上,只见欢快的麦苗在风中跳着舞,红红的玫瑰花,黄黄的月季花,还有许多不知名的小花盛开着,不时散发出淡淡的清香,田野到处充满着初夏的芬芳,我们仿佛行进在一幅美丽的画卷中。
听爸爸说,云台山属太行山系,是豫北的名山,位于河南省修武县境内。那里山岳高峻,山间常年云雾缭绕,风景优美,有着“小九寨沟”的美称。
快到云台山的时候,山路崎岖起来。远远看去,只见山脉连绵起伏,到了山脚下,我们下车步行进山。山路两边群山起伏,郁郁葱葱的绿色林海中,点缀着一簇簇小野花,带着露水和草木的清香。随处可见的潭水五光十色,色彩缤纷,而且清澈见底。在这令人心旷神怡的景色里,我禁不住跳进了清凉的水中,溅起的水花弄湿了爸爸的衣服,他拿起空水瓶,舀满水向我泼过来,哈哈,开始泼水了,我们俩互相追赶,真的是身上湿淋淋,脸上笑开花,课文里不是有句话:“清水是吉祥如意的象征,谁身上泼的水多,就意味着谁得到的幸福多。”我们怎能不高兴呢!
当我们下山时,多次回头,不忍离去。云台山,我喜欢你的山,喜欢你的水,更喜欢我们欢乐的“泼水节”。
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