I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
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第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
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第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
2010年高考全国卷1:有鱼吃还捉老鼠?
漫画作文。餐桌,许多猫吃鱼,就一只猫捉老鼠,别的猫说:“有鱼吃还捉老鼠?
往年高考漫画作文:有鱼吃还抓老鼠?
猫啊,都什么年代了,有鱼吃还捉老鼠?
是呢,为什么有鱼吃还捉老鼠呢?这的确是个问题了呢.我们可以站在这只捉老鼠的猫的立场上,试着分析一下.原因或许有二:
一则,这只捉老鼠的猫,突然有了心理障碍.他大概已经看到那只吃完了鱼的猫,正捂着肚子,表情似乎很难受,大概是吃得不舒服了.是啊,现在的鱼儿还敢随便吃吗?谁知道这鱼的来历,明白不明白呢?现在的鱼儿,多是人工养殖的呀.谁知道是不是吃激素,或是吃别的什么什么的长起来的呢?据说,还有喂避孕药的呢.弄不好,已经转基因了呢!怎么敢乱张嘴吃呢?有健康证吗?就算从湖里河里捕捞的,现在的河流湖泊大都污染的严重,黑黑的`废水,黄黄的漂沫,还有放心鱼吃吗?每年吃鱼吃出毛病住医院的,可不是少数啊?作为猫儿来讲,鱼,猫所欲也,老鼠,猫所欲也,吃老鼠不吃鱼,只是为了饮食健康,放心也.总之,现在老鼠还没有人工养殖的呢,也没见过哪个超市卖老鼠饲料的.吃老鼠,放心呀!天然的,绿色的.
二则,猫儿们的生活水平都逐年提高了.猫,已经从人类捕鼠的工具岗位,转移到宠物的位置了.现在的猫儿的生存条件,已经发生了翻天覆地的变化.还有几个逮老鼠的呢?多是鱼来张口,都已经养尊处优了呀.夏天必须在有空调的房间里休息,冬天在街上溜弯儿,也得穿上保暖马甲.但尽管这样,仍然有不失本色的猫儿呀!如图所示,至少有四分之一猫儿,仍然是捉老鼠的.正所谓,时代变化了,劳动本色不能变.这只捉老鼠的猫,实在让我们看到了猫儿们的希望所在呀!
猫不吃鱼,总有道理.
往年高考漫画作文:有鱼吃还抓老鼠?
漫画《猫有鱼吃还捉老鼠》,描绘的是这样的一幅场景:餐桌边,几只猫在吃鱼,只有一只猫放弃盘子中的鱼,在捉老鼠。其中的一只猫说:“都什么年代了,有鱼吃还捉老鼠?”,并带着一副讥笑的表情。另有一只吃饱的猫,捧着肚子,一副不屑的表情。 这幅漫画无疑是对当下社会现象的一种生动反映,如今社会经济发展了,物质极大丰富了,人们的生活条件普遍改善了,就像那些猫儿顿顿有鱼可吃了。
而作为本性就是捉老鼠的猫,是不是还应该去捉老鼠?其实,这是暗喻人们面对优越的物质条件,还去不去付出劳动,还去不去奋斗和拼搏。这是一个复杂的社会现象,总体来讲,人类追求进步,追求文明的步伐什么时候也不会停止。即使有鱼吃了,也要去捉老鼠,去努力工作和奋斗,争取不但有鱼吃,而且要吃鲍鱼、吃更高级、更有营养的食物。显然,那只去捉老鼠的猫是只好猫,是只很有远见的智慧猫。
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
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第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
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第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
5年级时,托管里一个比我小的同学发现书上有些骂人的话,不知道是谁写的,可是总的要随便找一个说,于是,她看我平常不太跟她说话,也不怕得罪,就随便说:好像是我写的,于是,她就给他家长说是我写的,她家长就告老师,老师又告诉我家长,老师和家长都一口咬定是我写的,老师还说:看那些字就是我的`笔迹。可是我连那些字在什么书上都不知道,后才我问她才知道是在课堂本上写的,课堂本:不让带回家,只让放在学校,我怎么写?于是她说是我去她班偷偷写的,这明显是在给她自己撒谎找理由,我那时都不知道她是在哪个班的!
6年级时,班里一个要好朋友过生日,于是我就去礼品店买了一个精致的水晶球送给朋友,送后不久,老师知道了,找了一天语文课在全班说同学以前送自己的一个水晶球很久没动过,后来发现失踪了,失踪的水晶球和我送给朋友的水晶球一模一样,问我是不是拿了,我心想:我真是倒霉透了,送朋友个水晶球居然买成和老师失踪的水晶球一模一样的,太蹊跷了,我在怎么解释老师也不信,因为这实在是巧合了,我再怎么解释也是徒劳,我说礼品店老板能作证我是在礼品店里正正规规买的,因为礼品店相对离学校比较远,同学也因为太远懒得和我去那么远找人作证,老师也没有那个闲工夫,这件事我又被冤枉了!
初二时,我们新添了物理课,物理老师很敬业,班里有个同学腿摔坏了几天没来学校,老师居然中午主动牺牲自己休息时间给那位同学补课,不过正是因为这位老师敬业,所以拖堂是自然免不了了,有一回老师下课了还在继续讲,我背后一个调皮的同学喊了一声:老师,下课了,你咋还不下课老师就突然炸扭过头对着我说:谁说下课了,下课了你坐不住你自己出去,别影响我们上课。我这又是被冤枉了!
还有一会英语课,我同桌不停跟我说话,因为我们英语老师特别严,不抓住说话了可就惨了,我就一直没敢回话,知道我实在憋不住了,用了稍大点儿的声音会了我同桌一句:你够了没?结果老师听见了,居然没管我同桌,对我说:这位同学,谁让你上课大声嚷嚷的,罚你抄10遍3a,放学之前抄完,抄不完别回家我刚想要解释说是我同桌西先说话影响我的,老师迅速打住说:不需解释,解释再罚10遍
我的人生,就是这么委屈不过,我依然很乐观!
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第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
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