让我们节约资源吧
同学们,你们知道两型学校吗?不知道吧。那么你们也应该知道“两型社会”吧?是的,两型社会环境友好型和资源节约型社会。学校是社会的一部分,两型学校也就是环境友好型社会和资源节约型学校。在学校,不,不管在哪儿,我们都应该从自己做起,从身边做起,恰当使用并节约资源,让一切都更加和谐、友好。
在家里,不论是孩子还是家长,都喜欢看电视,但许多人在不看电视的时候虽然关了电视机却不太理会接线板,没有关掉接线板上的开关。日复一日,年复一年,接线板的耗电也可能多达难以想象的数字。有些人可能会不当一回事,说:“那又怎么样?”“多用几百度电不也没多少钱吗?有什么问题呢?”但是它们或许不知道,我们发出的电并不能足够所有地方使用。当你看电视却忘记关台灯时,别的地方可能就因为缺这些电而一片漆黑。我国的许多必要资源并不是很充裕,13亿人口的胃口是非常大的,这些资源还得留给一些给子孙后代啊!我们应该尽量节约资源!
水,也是自然中非常宝贵的资源。虽然地球上的海洋面积约占总面积的70%,但是能用于饮用的淡水却日渐缺乏。在学校里,常常有学生洗完手后不关水龙头,任那水流“哗哗”响。还有人甚至用矿泉水洗手,洗杯子。可用水资源正一天天减少,也许“世界上最后的一滴水就是人的眼泪”真的会来临的。
让我们从身边做起,从自己做起,从家里做起,节约资源,保护我们人类赖以生存的地球吧!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
在我们的地球上有许多的资源在慢慢的逐渐减少,特别是土和水的资源。
工业的发展,在生产过程当中大量排出的废水、废气、废渣等物质通过大气、水、固体废渣的形式进入土壤;同时,耕地被人为施化肥、农药并进行污水灌溉,是大量的有害物质进入并在其中积累,从而造成土壤的污染,不再适合耕作。每形成1厘米厚表土需要100年到400年的时间;即使在人为参与、管理极好的情况下,也需要20年。全世界每年有500万公顷的土地不再适合耕作。德国、日本、硬度以及我国的人均耕地减少了一半以上。由于滥伐森林,滥垦草地,英气土壤破坏和土地流失,世界耕地表土地流失约为270亿吨一年。
与空气一样,地球上的水似乎是取之不尽的,用之不竭的。而只有淡水中的一小部分被人所实际利用。如果把全球的水看成一缸,淡水只有一汤勺,而能够被人利用的淡水只有一滴。当世界上10亿人空时,拥有水资源900亿立方米;到21世纪中期,世界人口达90多亿时,全人类也能分享在规模相当的水资源,而且水资源正在被人污染,工业服了、农药、生活行水都流向河流和浅层水。1立方米污水将造成8至10立方米的水无法使用。
看吧!现在的土和水资源真是太少了,我们应该极力节约资源。让我们共同向一个目标点——节约资源努力吧!
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