我走上前去,厉声质问妈妈:“你为什么要宰我的鸭儿。你不觉得这样很残忍吗?它是我的好伙伴,你却这样伤了它。书上不是说动物是人类的好朋友,我们要保护动物吗?”爸爸说:“区区一个鸭子,有什么好哭。”我再也不想跟他们辩了,于是直冲入房,捂住被子,号啕大哭起来。
吃完饭,我打开电视,在转到宠物频道时,我看到有一个人养了一只鸽子。有一天,那鸽子在树上被卡住了,飞不下来。于是,主人就不顾危险爬到树上去,将鸽子救了下来。但是却把他困在了树上,直到有人打了求助电话,他才平安地下来。
是呀,为了一只动物,那个养鸽人却能不顾生命危险去救助,多么令人感动呀!我们人类与动物就应这样和睦相处,好好保护我们地球的生态环境。不过,我听老师说,对圈养来改善生活的家禽、家畜,我们是可以区别地分开来对待的。
爱护弱小,是我们中华民族的传统美德。我想,用在这里,也是相通的。所以,我们一定要珍惜动物的生命,尽量不要伤害他们。
观点明确,论述深刻、发人深省,文约而意丰,论述语言有理有据、有力、富有文采、形象生动具体,给伤害动物的人们敲响了警钟。
动物是人类最忠诚的朋友,请不要伤害他们。
从小,我就特别喜欢小动物。我觉得,它们是人类最忠实的朋友。所以,当我看到别人随意抛弃动物时,心中不禁很难过。我的梦想就是人们和动物和平相处。
现在人们都很喜欢吃狗肉火锅,我很不理解。狗的一生,都是为了自己的主人,难道就只是因为它老了,不中用了,就否定它存在的价值。这是不可以的!人们还将刚出生的小狗崽扔到湖里、垃圾桶里,将它们随意丢弃,这也是不行的。每个人都有存在的意义和价值,即使是人,也没有资格剥夺它们的生命。
我曾经亲眼目睹了猫被车撞飞后的惨状。那扭曲的脸诉说着它的痛苦。它的鲜血、内脏被撞离体外。尽管雨水冲刷掉血的痕迹,但每当我走到那儿时,脑海就自动地跳出了那一幕,想起那只被撞得面目全非的猫,想起它死前不甘的眼神……
从那时起,我就在心里默默发誓,要尽自己的努力,来保护小动物,至少,也不会让它们无辜枉死。
我想,在将来,我会成立一个“幸福之家”,这里会专门收养流浪小动物,如果好心人愿意收养,我也会赠送给他。这样,那些流浪猫儿、流浪狗儿就有了一个温暖的家。我也会为那些珍贵的濒临灭绝的动物捐款,让它们不至于完全灭绝。
或许,这样的我很傻、很傻,但我愿意做那个傻傻的为在别人眼里微不足道的小动物担心的人。
如果你也像我一样“傻”,那让我们坚定不移地“傻”下去。因为它们都是可爱的。
今天中午,全家都在家中,很没劲,于是我们打算到外面去走走。突然,我看到在一家饭店前面摆了个笼子,里面放了一只小兔子,灰白色的毛,很漂亮!但当我看到笼子上面的时候,我很生气,你们知道吗?上面有一块木板,写着:野兔子,现***现烧。
我看到了以后,心里想:多么可恶的人类啊!竟然忍心***了这么可爱的小兔子,它是那么无辜,为什么要去***它呢?为了满足某些人的食欲而把人们的好朋友兔子***了,岂不太残忍?
多吃了野味会患病的!万一兔子吃了不好的东西,你吃下去了就会流入血液里。到时候你患病了不仅要去医院,还要花钱。我们可以不吃野味的。
马上要去秋游了,我们可千万不能给动物们随便喂吃的,因为动物们跟人类不同,有的动物喜欢吃草,有的动物喜欢吃自己的饲料……各种各样的动物喜欢吃不同的东西,如果你给猴子吃了点饼干,别人给它吃了些鸡蛋什么的,不久这只猴子就死了。什么原因?吃得多撑死的!
现在有好多人赶时髦,都爱穿皮草大衣,可那些人有没有想过那些皮草大衣是怎样做成的吗?是把动物的皮剥下来才做成的。但人们有没有想过呢?如果人们不再买皮草大衣,商家卖不出去,就不会有人去打猎,不会有人剥动物皮了!当你在美滋滋地看着皮草大衣的时候,却不知道动物们的心在流血。
动物是我们的朋友,保护动物从我做起!
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
在一个阳光明媚万里无云的日子里,姑妈回来了,然后我就和姑妈去了奶奶家,在我们去奶奶家路途中,我突然在路边看见有一个白花花的东西,我很好奇,我就迅速的走到那里,一看,原来是一只老白鸽,它的翅膀断了,在路上一动不动,我小心翼翼地从地上捡起,抱在怀里,然后,我就飞快地跑回了家过了一会儿,我就到家了。
我先找来一个纸箱,在纸箱里铺上了一层稻草,我小心地把白鸽放了进去,我找来了一些水给白鸽喝,它却不喝反而把水弄洒了,我很生气,但是我很心疼,我又找来了一些食物,把食物放进了纸箱,白鸽在纸箱里挣扎,在里面东跑西窜的,它似乎很害怕,身在拐角浑身发抖,怕我会伤害它,我怕它又受到伤害,我就去写作业了。过了一会儿,我来看白鸽的时候,他却不见了,我十分着急,我就去找,找了好久,都找不到。当我绝望的时候,它却出现了,我又高兴了起来。
不知不觉的几天又过去了,白鸽的翅膀好了,我们都成了好朋友了,然后,我将白鸽送上蓝天,它好像舍不得走,回首望了望我,向蓝天飞去。动物是我们的好朋友,我们要尽自己的力量去保护动物,给动物一个温暖的家。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
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