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上个星期五,张老师让我们当堂写第一单元的大作文,我不像别的同学一样,叫出了声,反而有些正常。因为暑假的时候,因为我作文一般,自己每天写日记,一个星期些、写一篇作文,这让我有些喜欢它。
老师讲解完,让我们开始自己写。当开始写时,我有一大堆问题涌上来,比如:是写童话吗?人物可以说话吗?······我写作通道如同下水道一样,堵牢了,水就下不去了。我很认真的构思,但还是写不出来,我的大脑就如一张白纸,没有一点思路,有如同短路了一样。快结束了,我实在没办法了,就乱写一通,记流水账攒到了字数,交给了老师。
下课了,我一直闷闷不乐,心里仿佛一块大石头,我心里想:老师千万别今天批出来,老师千万别今天批出来。星期一,叫我重写,我可以回家写好,星期一交。想不通的问题回去问妈妈,问题解决了,再好好写一篇。
下课的时间,我一直看着张老师,批了几张,批了一半,还剩一点,我心里一直徘徊着一句话:批慢一点,批慢一点······
最后一节课,张老师还是批出来,把同学们存在的问题讲了一遍,我听得格外专注,来弥补我的漏洞。
一回到家,我把今天作文的事情讲给妈妈听,拿出语文书,给妈妈看作文的`题目,问了我想不通的问题,但妈妈只告诉我一句话:做什么事都要认真对待,不能敷衍了事,。成功只属于有付出的人。
我听了妈妈的话,一直铭记在心,开始研究题目,不放过一字一句,终于,我自己找到了答案,解决了问题。
当天晚上,我真真切切地付出了感情地小草的顽强,坚持不懈,写小草怎么从一粒小种子,在没有水分,没有阳光,没有土壤的地方,把石头顶开,变成一株完美的小草。小草也告诉我一个道理:坚持,才能完美。妈妈看了,竖起了大拇指。
张老师看了。给我打了优秀。
什么事都要做到底,做得完美,要认真对待,不可以半途而废,我要学习小草,做一个坚强的人。
机会只留给有准备的人。
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我想变成一只自由而可爱的小小鸟。
春天,飞到田野里,看看桃花红了,像一个个小娃娃仰着粉红色的笑脸散发着芬芳的香味;看看小草绿了,悄悄地从土地妈妈的.怀抱里钻出来;看看柳树发芽了,像扎着长长的辫子,叶子像发卡,卡在长长的辫子上,风儿一吹就甩进了池塘。
夏天,飞到周口人民公园里,看看火红火红的太阳像大火球一样照耀着大地;看看可爱的女生们穿着自己喜欢的裙子在树荫下做游戏;看看壮实的男生们穿着小短裤在草地上踢足球。
秋天,飞到棉花堆上,看看雪白雪白的棉花像不像朵朵白云;看看变黄的树叶像不像一只只黄色的小蝴蝶在飞舞。忘了告诉你,秋天是一个丰收的季节,苹果熟了,梨子熟了,红透的柿子像一个个小小的红灯笼挂在树枝上。
冬天,飞到雪白的世界上,看看大片大片的雪花从空中落到大地,像洁白的羽毛在风中飞舞;看看小朋友们穿着火红火红的棉袄在打雪仗、堆雪人,他们玩的多开心啊!
我多么多么想变成一只自由而可爱的小小鸟啊!
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