要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
这是一个动物学校。猫鸭子。马和动物学校的狗。有些动物正在看书的英文。有些动物画鸟。
some animal are play games......Ther are very happy . sheep teacher is talling a stors.
一些动物在玩游戏......疗法很快乐。羊老师换一个故事。
This animal school is very good. I like this animal school very!Do you like this animal school?
这种动物的学校是很好的\'。我非常喜欢这个动物学校!你喜欢这只动物的学校吗?
I valued my time in the No.1 middle school very much,because I know there is no endless banquet in the world.Before appling for xiao yu zhong,wondering whether it is the sixth sense, there was a prediction that I would leave my mother school,so I valued the left time which I have spent with my teachers and classmates.Perhaps some students and teachers didn’t understand why I was still so hardworking since I have been recruited by ShanDong university,Ididn’t have a very mature reply at that time.Now I can make a summary:After all,I have been in the science class for two and a half years.Not only was I interested in the subjects but also I have formed good privity with my teachers;Futher,many people take part in the National Entrance Examination in order to go to college,including me,but before the second term of senior three,I have known I have been admitted,to tell you the truth,I can’t accept it right now,so there was a time when I adjusted to it.
During my presence in the school,I was xiao san hao student in a row,and I obtained Li Zhen De bonus for two years.I got the second prize in the maths competition held by Shan Dong Province,After I was admitted ahead of time, I got a prize in the English speaking competition in jinan held by CCTV.
Besides my efforts,above all,I owe my scores to my teachers.It is teachers who passed knowdege to me,without them,I can’t have such scores,here,Ishall say sincerely,toilful are teachers!
In the study life in the future,I will develop my advantages and get over my shortcomings,making me more excellent,I can say full of confidence,I am pround of yizhong and yizhong is pround of me!
June sixth,2006
除了祭白虎,广东人在惊蛰这天也有“打小人”的习俗。打小人者相信,惊蛰一到,不仅害虫全部出动,连小人也开始出来活动。而他们相信,到庙里打过小人后,就可以把引起病痛或纠纷的恶鬼统统赶走,在新的一年里便可以顺顺利利,不受小人的纠缠了。
惊蛰的节气特点:全年气温回升最快的节气,冷暖空气交替,天气不稳定,气温波动甚大,惊蛰虽然气温升高迅速,但是雨量增多却有限.
难忘那一次 心灵的历程犹如一条小溪,流淌过鲜花环绕的小径,也遭受过沙石的阻挡,每一个人的心中都有一些无法抹去的伤痕,也许这就是成长中的岁月。 时光飞逝,回想起那年的暑假。 我与几个小伙伴骑着单车在大路上闲逛。这里可真美呀!大路两旁有着大片大片金黄的油菜花,微风一吹,淡淡的花香令人如痴如醉,这花香使我们想玩的心情油然而生。一个伙伴说:让我们玩点什么吧!好呀!另一个伙伴附和道。但是玩点什么好呢?我灵机一动,想到一个点子:不如我们比赛骑自行车吧!看谁骑得快?大家异口同声说好! 我们用石子在面前画出一条直线,作为起点,前方二百米远有一颗大树,大叔的右边再画出一条终点。我们做了做准备活动,比赛马上开始。裁判说:预备备开始!我们像脱缰的野马一样向终点奔去,过了几分钟,我疲倦不堪,渐渐地落在后几名,但是我的好胜心促使我加快速度,第三,第二,第一!我终于排在第一了!我把身子向后一扭,脚离开踏板,手高高举起,摆成v字,表示胜利。过了几秒钟,由于我没有掌握好平衡,身体开始左右摇摆,我的心紧绷起来,竟然把有刹车这件事忘在脑后,我双脚踏在地上,增加摩擦力,好让车子停下。伙伴们大叫:刹车!刹车!我这才想起来,但一切都太晚了,我重重地倒在终点线前,摔得头破血流,伙伴们急急忙忙跑过来,把我扶起来,关心地问:你怎么样了?我的眼泪一直在眼眶里打转,但是我的好胜心又促使我把眼泪收回,并嘴角上扬45°。当时,我的心像打碎了五味瓶,又像刀绞一般。 到现在,这件事我还记忆犹新!吉林吉林昌邑区博海中学初一:李嘉宁
胡局长(左侧)和我光阴似箭,转眼一年过去了,回想起去年6月28日我们棋院的棋手们参加上海第七届“同洲杯”国际城市儿童围棋邀请赛,给我留下深刻的印象,难忘的一张照片作文。在那次比赛中,我和来自全国各省市、香港和新加坡、日本、韩国等五湖四海的小选手们进行国际儿童围棋比赛。我们临川棋院不负众望在这次比赛中获得较好的成绩,我也荣获国内组第六名,马慧同学获得女子组第一名,还有几个同学也分别进入了前八名,优异的成绩很快传到家乡。区教育局胡局长正好在上海开会,在百忙中风尘朴朴赶到比赛地。一个身穿普通西服,乌黑头发、娇健如飞年过半百的人,走进我们小棋手们之间,他就是胡局长,小学四年级作文《难忘的一张照片作文》。他是那么平易近人,并给我们鼓劲加油,和我们一一合影留念。他说:“这次比赛你们为家乡争光,希望你们回家以后发扬拼搏精神,努力学习,要德智体全面发展。祖国需要你们,你们是祖国的花朵,是祖国的接班人。”我牢牢记住胡局长的教导,也更加珍惜这次合影,只要看到这张照片,他就鼓舞了我,不管遇到什么困难都勇往直前,决不后退。我把胡局长的话作为座佑铭,从此我的成绩也越来越好。事隔一年,当我看到这张片照片时,就勾起我对他的思念之情,我牢记胡局长的敦敦教导,决不辜负他对我的期望,学好本领,将来把我们的祖国建设得更加繁荣富强。
“马虎”就是指办事粗心大意,草草了事,不认真。这里面还有一个血泪斑斑的故事呢!宋朝有个画家,他画什么都是随心所欲。有一次,这画家要画一只老虎。他刚画好虎头,一个人就来了,那个人说;“画家,请你帮我画一匹马吧!”画家就在虎头的下面画了马的\'身体。
那个人说:“你画什么呢?”“这本来就是马马虎虎的,这么好的画,送给你了吧!”但是那个人说什么也不要,画家就只好把那幅“马虎图”挂在了自己家的大厅里。这画家的大儿子看到了这幅“马虎图”,但是他不知道那是什么动物。他问画家:爸爸,这幅画里画的是什么呀?画家生气地说:“你怎么这么笨呀,这明明是一只老虎呀!老虎是一种可怕的猛兽,会吃人的,你要是碰到了这种动物,就马上躲起来,要不然就千方百计地把它弄死。”
大儿子深信万分就去了野外。他看到了一匹马,他以为这是老虎,就取出弓箭射死了马。他还说:“哈哈,这样,爸爸就会说我是打虎英雄了!”突然,有人拉住了他,把他拉到画家那里让画家赔了钱。画家画的这幅“马虎图”让自己赔了钱。他正在气头上的时候,二儿子看到了这幅画,就问:“爸爸,这幅画上的是什么呀?”画家说:“你怎么把你哥还笨呀,和你哥说是只老虎,他却射死了马,这就是一匹马。”
二儿子半心半疑地去了山上。他看到一只老虎,以为是马。他还想:“哇,这就是一匹马,听说它能日行千里呢!”他就马上走向“马”去,还没骑上“马”就被老虎给吃了。画家知道了以后,悲痛欲绝,天天以泪洗脸。画家生气地对那幅画说:“你害我赔了钱,还赔了儿子。”他就烧了那幅画。
之后,画家写了这么一首诗:马虎图,马虎图,长子依图射死马,次子依图喂了虎,草堂焚毁马虎图,奉劝诸君别学吾。这就是“马虎”一词的来历,它告诉我们做事千万不能马虎,否则要吃大亏的。
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