四级英语很快就要到来了,英语是占据重要的部分,快来看看下面的范文及写作指导吧。
下面请看一篇漫画式命题的作文预测题:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should express your views on the impact of air pollution. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
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The Impact of Air Pollution
The cartoon vividly reveals the phenomenon of air pollution or the decline of air quality. In the cartoon we can see the air pollution is so serious that the earth can't bear it.
What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? Possible reasons can be listed as follows: firstly, vehicle exhaust gases could be one of the most leading causes. With the improvement of economy and people's living standard, urban inhabitants in mounting numbers own their private cars. More automobiles will inevitably generate more exhaust gases. Additionally, household appliances widely used in cities also release a great amount of carbon dioxide gases, which further intensifies air pollution. Last but not least, many factories around the cities emit large quantities of untreated poisonous gases, which should also be responsible for the decline of air quality.
Definitely, air pollution will exert a detrimental impact on many aspects of people's life. For example, many diseases such as cough, skin problem and lung cancer are caused by it. Perhaps it is high time that we should adopt some measures to solve the problem of air pollution.
英语漫画作文写作指导
第一、读图审题
四级漫画作文中的漫画通常反映一个社会现象或生活哲理,要求考生根据自己对漫画的理解来写作。因此,要写好四级漫画作文,审题格外重要。考生在下笔之前要仔细看漫画,弄清漫画的寓意,这是文章切题的保证。此外,在本次四级考试的三道写作题中,Directions部分都给出了写作内容的大致方向,这也为考生把握漫画寓意提供了帮助。下面笔者就来逐一梳理2013年6月四级作文的三幅漫画及其传达的寓意。
第二、谋篇布局
在把握文章的主旨之后,考生就可以构思整篇文章的架构了。四级漫画作文的写作可以分为下面三个段落。
第一段:开门见山,简要描述一下漫画内容,并指出漫画的寓意。描述漫画内容是为了揭示其中的寓意,是手段而不是目的,所以描述要简洁明快,一般来说一句话足矣。需要提醒考生的是,写作的Directions部分虽然给出了大致的写作主题,但是也要求考生对漫画进行简要描述,因此考生切不可抛开漫画内容直接展开议论。
第二段:表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的重心所在。比如,就第一道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段阐述阅读文学作品的重要性;就第二道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述为什么凡事必须从小事做起;就第三道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述掌握基本技能的重要性。
第三段:指出漫画的寓意对大学生的教育意义,或者提出解决问题的建议。考生需要注意的是,结尾段一般并不需要实质性的分析,其主要作用是总结和升华,使文章结构完整。所以结尾段的写作要简明扼要,点到即止。
第三、论证方法
漫画作文的\'第二段要表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的核心段落,也是作文字数达到要求的关键。因此,考生在这一段要浓墨重彩,写深、写透。在写这一段时,考生要尽量摆事实、讲道理,避免空泛的议论。针对这一核心段落,笔者在此推荐以下三种展开议论的常用方法,希望对考生有所启发。
1.条分缕析
在写作第二段时,考生可以从2~3个方面对观点展开论述,这种写法可使文章显得层次清楚、条理清晰。例如,本次四级作文第一道题目的第二段需要阐述阅读文学作品的重要性,考生就可以从以下两个方面展开:第一,相对于电子媒体,文学阅读更能培养人的想象力;第二,阅读文学作品能够帮助我们更好地了解社会。请参考下面的范文。
There wasa time when children could relish (欣赏/ 也可以使用appreciate 替换 literature. But childrentoday can enjoy the sounds and action on a TV or computer screen. “So why bother reading?” some ask. The reasonis obvious: It enriches our imagination. When we read apiece of literature, we are living the life of RobinHood or starting an adventure with Tom Sawyer. In addition, literature is the mirror of society,whether it be poetry, drama or fiction. We know thesociety better through literature.
2.举例论证
如果漫画所传达的是抽象的人生哲理,那么考生在论述时最好能举出具体的事例,尽量避免空洞的说教。比如,就本次四级作文第二道题目而言,考生可以在第二段中举出一些成功人士如何从小事做起的例子。笔者下面提供的范文中用到的是哈兰·桑德斯上校从一个小吃店做起,最后缔造出遍布全球的肯德基快餐帝国的例子,用以证明只有从小事做起,才能成就大事。请看下面的范文。
Everything is smallbefore it is big. A good example is KFC. In 1930 Colonel Harland Sanders beganserving food to his service station customers in Corbin, a city in Kentucky. He fried chicken in his own kitchen andperfected his secret recipe there. From the small roadside eatery, he went on to build an empire of fast food.
3.类比论证
如果漫画中的寓意不容易通过具体的事例来证明,那么考生还可以使用类比论证的方法,即通过打比方来论证一个抽象的道理。比如,对于本次四级作文的第三道题目,考生可以在第二段中用学习打篮球的过程来打比方。学习打篮球时,只有先学会了投球、运球、传球这些基本技能,才能进一步学习高难度的技能。以此类推,无论做任何事情,只有掌握了基本的技能,才可能取得更大的成功。此外,考生还可以举出统计数字,用具体的研究结果来证明论点。请看下面的范文。
Simple as they mayseem, basic skills serve as the first link in the chain of success. Thisis analogous to learning to play basketball. If shooting, dribbling and passing are not mastered,learning advanced skills will become difficult, if notimpossible. A growing body of research has also documented that such basicskills as reading, writing and computing are highlycorrelated with success later in life. A 2012 study surveyed 300 CEOs ofFortune 500 companies and found that 87% attributed part of their success tothe basic skills they learned in primary school.
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Different people have different views on_____.Some people think that_____,whereas others aegue that __________.
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion that ___________.For one thing,I firmly believe that ___________.For another,_____________.Just think of________,who/which_______.
Taking all these factors into consideration,we may safely come to the conclusion that______.Only if_______can we _______,just as the saying goes,________________.
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In recent years there have been many reports of ________.It turns a new chapter of _________in China,and will have far-reaching effects in the forthcoming years.
The biggest benefit,in my eyes,is that_______.In addition,_______.Finally,______________.
Apart from the benefits mentioned above,we should also face several unavoidable challenges.In the first place,_____________.In the second place,________.What’s more,_______________.In summary,we should_______________.
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Nowadays more and more ______are commonly and widely used in everyday life,ranging from __________to_____________.
The popularity of _______will have a great influence on ______.On the one hand,_________.On the other hand,__________.
To conclude,____________are just like a double-edged sword.With them we may________.However,one point should be kept in mind that we should make sensible use,always being a master instead of slaving of them.
挥挥手告别童年的云彩,快乐早已被秋飞的大雁牵走。
马上面临的是如歌的花季,亦诗的雨季。如歌?唱出一支凄美的歌;亦诗?写出一首忧郁的诗。
无数次的“滑铁卢”,失落之心便会涌上心头,无数次掩卷沉思,便会化为苦咸的泪水。古人云“逝者如斯夫”,时间的确像流水般飘逝了,飘逝在茫然空洞的眼神里。每次下定决心,便会被父母的冷言蜚语所击毁,缕缕苦涩的烦恼,便成了一个没有穷尽的轮回。烦恼,烦恼,太多,太多……
作业之多幻成千万次叹息,老师之厉难为了欢笑与嬉戏。
每次熬夜,静静地呷几口茶,无伴奏的笔尖轻点,像跳芭蕾舞般地飞旋……
曾经看到过这么一句话“书山本来没有路,死的人多了,便成了路。”
看到此文时,忍俊不禁,可现在总算到作者的难处了。
面对无数题海,我有时一人发呆,一道道题目仿佛幻化成无数个影子,在眼前飘荡。题海无边,可人的精力呢?精力是有限的!
吃的、穿的、学的、背的……全都是美丽的花瓣,可它们本应是些美丽的花瓣,而今却一片片地消失在远处的风景里了。
望望窗外,都是些经春意渲染过的东西,连雾也被过滤了一遍,像是披上了一层绿色的薄纱,淡雅、别致……可我心里的春天呢?已被漫天的飞雪所掩盖。
忆儿时,手擎一只风筝,让它在蓝天里飞翔,我的心也开始飞翔。
可现在,我的心像是套着一把沉重的铁枷锁,望望窗外,望望蓝天,折断了的翅膀,又怎能飞翔?当迎春花开满窗头时,又怎能放飞心中的梦?
于是提起沉重的笔,含泪在题海里漫游……
当爸爸提起那巨大手掌的一瞬,当妈妈扯开嗓门的一念,我往往眼睛一闭,我很平静,很安稳,平静得呆板,安稳得程序化。
多少个夜晚,挑灯夜读,多少个夜晚,奋笔疾书……可是,换来的,只是一路被碾碎的花瓣。
这次数学,我平静地面对着,可是额前的汗水还是汇成了一条溪流,考试结果还是不尽人意,多少美好的梦想都成了泡影。
这就是我用辛勤的汗水浇灌出来的成绩吗?
我总觉得上天给了我一双沉重的翅膀,让我像一只孤单的大雁,疲惫地飞翔,可是我总是拿不到令我十分满意的成绩。呵,我是一只雁,在天空中飞翔,希望我有一天会到达理想的彼岸……
挥挥手告别童年的云彩,快乐已被秋飞的大雁牵走。
烦恼只是一粒沙,沙子阻挡不了前进的步伐。
风起了,大雁飞走了……
又是一年秋,时光悄无声息而又毫不留情地逝去,恰如中国古代儒家经典《论语》中所言:“逝者如斯夫,不舍昼夜”。而四季则不知疲倦地交替着,年复一年,正像轮回一般。
“秋天又到了,大雁们又不得不开始他们的远程旅行,飞向温暖的南方。”记得只要是有关动物类的节目每每说到动物因季节变化而迁徙时就会出现这样的话,反正大致就是这意思。看过一个人写的话,说的是对大雁迁徙的疑问,为什么大雁每年都要飞来,然后又飞去呢?它为什么不一直留在南方就好了呀!我也一只考虑这个问题,说冷无法忍受还可以让人理解,但是南方气温适宜的地方多的是,为什么不留在南方,这样一来,顶多只需要一点点因环境引起的自身变化。
天际,一个令人神往的地方。能畅游在天空中,让风放肆地掠过头发,穿过衣衫,流进体内;让空灵玄幻的蓝色天空离自己更近,体会那自由无往的感觉;让白云轻轻的抚摸自己,呼吸着仿若仙气的烟云。这些,都是多么令人惬意的事啊!他充满了自由,透出一种怡人的恬静,透出一种莫名的欢愉。
大雁,有着能让它们翱翔于天际的强健翅膀,许多人会觉得它们有着极度的自由;然而并非如此,纵然它们有再强健的翅膀,它们仍不能违背这个世界中的种种规矩。不然,“不得不”这个带着隆重被迫感的词也不会出现在那句话里了罢。
或许,在大雁的思想中最最重要的,也是最执着的信念就是活下去,仅仅只是活下去,然后再尽最大的力,让自己的后代也能活下去,绵延不绝的繁衍生息,只此而已。所以,它们不得不南迁,不得不顶着已略有凛冽之感的秋风向南飞去。
而我说过,我一直奇怪它们为什么不留在南方?我想也许它们真的无法改变自己的生活环境,渺小的力量只能是卑微的无力。
这让我不觉想起了“人生苦短”这个词。我们活在这个世上是为什么?难道如大雁一般,为了活着?为了后代?还是为了……也许,连我们自己都不清楚,不知道自己为了什么,就这样唯唯诺诺的度过了这说长不长也说短不短的渺小的一生。
活在这世上的种种生物,总是要经历无数的灾难的,一直到它离开这个世界,才能停止;而这其中,有着思想的生物,更是磨难重重,因为除了肉体上的伤痛,还要承受心理上的无数打击,而得到的快乐却往往比痛苦少。
着让我产生了一种有点极端的想法,活在这世上的芸芸众生似乎都是来受罪的,这世界简直就像一个大炼狱……
而大雁,为什么还是不辞辛劳的飞来飞去呢?它们是那么的辛苦,为何不停下来呢?是执念,或者是一种期盼,自己可以真正自由地在天空中翱翔,不用再受什么制约;为此,要活下去。有了信念,也就有了希望;有了希望,这暗黑的炼狱中才会有光明,才会有活下去的勇气。
然而,若然这希望落空,紧接着的便会是无边的失落,如果大雁知道的话,它会选择是这样地自欺欺人地活下去,还是干脆一头撞死,得以解脱呢?
Recently, there is a popular saying: the world is so large that I want to have a look! As more and more people travel around during their holidays, tourists have brought large sum of money to the local people.
However, too many tourists also bring some problems to the local life. The most serious problem is the pollution caused by the uncivilized tourists. It’s reported that there were thousands of tons of rubbish left after the flag-raising ceremony on Oct. 1st. The uncivilized tourists left their rubbish wherever they go, polluting the local environment. Another problem is the traffic jam caused by so many tourists.
Tourist can promote the economic development of the local areas, but the pollution caused by those uncivilized tourists has brought severe problems. The local tourist authority should set up relative laws to protect the environment of the local areas, and every tourist obey the laws and help to make the places of tourist more beautiful!
The Role of Mobile Phone in People's Communication
The popularity of smartphones has exerted great influence on the way people communicate, so much so that an increasing number of individuals contend that face-to-face communication is being replaced by texts and images on the mobile phone.
There are more than one angle to consider this phenomenon. On one hand, it is pleasantly acknowledged that smartphones shorten the distance between families and friends. Even people from different sides of the globe can share pictures, feelings and thoughts through various types of apps on the phone, thus building a long-distance connection. On the other hand, as the picture warns us, too much smartphone addiction interferes with people's real-life communication. Statistics show that over 70 percent of face-to-face communication consists of facial expressions and body language, which is why people should stay away from mobile phones when they have the chance to actually talk and communicate with others.
In a word, mobile phones act as an appropriate platform where people can always stay in tough however long the distance is, but a wise man should know when to put down his phone.
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