Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
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写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
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My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
记得有一天,天很冷,妈妈做好了早餐说:“宝贝,快来吃早餐!今天的早餐很好吃哦!”我听了慢吞吞的走了过去,一看,呀,又是我不爱吃的蛋卷,心想:啊,又是蛋卷,应该想个法子不吃早餐。呀,想到了。于是,我咬着嘴唇装着着急的样子说:“妈妈来不及了,我要上学了!”我背上书包飞快的走了。
在上学的路上,我把口里的`蛋卷吐了呀,只顾逃离那难吃的早餐,走的时候忘记穿大衣了,现在感觉身体感觉凉呼呼的,终于到了学校,我赶紧走进教室,上课时,老师讲的什么话我都没有听进去。写字时,我的同桌提醒我:“潘思宇,别发抖了,赶快写字呀!”可我还是在发抖。下课了,谢老师走过来对我说:“潘思宇,***妈给你送大衣来了。”我听了就一步一步的走下去,走到了妈妈的面前,妈妈着急的说:“是不是很冷呀,赶快穿上大衣吧!”我听了低下头,接过大衣,慢吞吞的穿上大衣。眼里一热,泪珠滚了下来。妈妈又说:“去校医那检查一下看感冒了没有,如果感冒了就打电话。”我听了点点头,心想:啊,如果当时没有与妈妈赌气,那该多好呀。转身就走了,走了一米的距离的时候,我回头看了一下妈妈,又转身走回了教室。在教室里,我感到非常惭愧。身体倍感温暖。
穿上大衣就不冷了,可是我感觉在我心中,妈妈对我的爱才是最温暖的。
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