外研版4-6年级英语作文可跟读【一】
我们认识十年了，儿时初见，路过童年，相遇在青春。小学的你优秀得不像话，初中的你也备受老师的宠爱，高中的你是否同样惹人注目？
十年，人生能有几个十年，而我又花掉了人生的几分之几去认识你，又该用多长的时光去对你视而不见。视而不见这件事，你比我做得更完美。
每一次，我都能穿过人海找到你，而你始终不曾看我一眼。看着你落寞的背影，在人群中微跛的行走，突然间只觉得心酸，那么骄傲不肯认输的你如何承受得起？
我们八杆子打不着的陌生人。你走在我的前面，我走在你的后面，隔着五十米的距离，却犹如隔着马六甲海峡。你永远不会回头看我一眼，我看不见你的孤独，你也瞥不见我的忧伤，在这个每天有着考试的城堡。不过短短数月，你早已不复当初的光环叠加，时间是最好的雕刻家。你的`背影多么寂寞，如一颗琥珀，在如潮的人流淹没。你像个落魄的王子，一个人吃饭，一个人走路，一个人吹风，一个人做很多事，一个人看遍路旁的风景。
很多次路过你身旁，你都视而不见，当我不存在。所以只好在路过时落荒而逃。我想要整个世界的宠溺，我想要你看到我就在你的身后，我想要你为我唱一首歌。我知道你不会开口对我说一句你好，因为你不愿。我也知道我不会开口对你说一句你好，因为我不敢。我埋怨你的淡漠，其实我又何尝不是？我连跟你打一个招呼的时间都不肯给。谁比谁更冷漠。我也很骄傲，可是在你面前我所有的伪装不攻自破。或许是你太优秀，也或许只是因为在你认识我时我还是一派天真的模样。输给你，心服口服。可是这一次我不想输，我告诉自己，如果你先对我说一句你好，我就对你说一句你好。
许多昔日的朋友因为你的淡漠而远离，我为你感到悲伤。在我心里，你一直是我的朋友，可是我真的不确定你是否把我当作朋友。可是，我明白，在你无所谓的面孔下有着怎样一颗温暖的心。我没有忘记，在我最难过最孤独的时候，你的微笑曾抵达我心底柔软的角落。
记忆是根长长的线，在我路过的路上缠绕。我沿着它走过的轨迹，一路往回。想要回到最初相识的地点，却发现回忆早已模糊，如同染上了灰尘的玻璃。与你有关的回忆终有一天会淡忘，可是我记得你来过你很好。
少年，你可安好？
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外研版4-6年级英语作文可跟读【二】
??斑可窥全豹750字自幼年起，大千世界的缤纷五彩，就在幼小的心灵深处留下了深刻的印记，一张张美丽的风景画，一幅幅生动的图片，一幕幕形象的舞台剧。这些一直存在在记忆深处。
并没有选择用绘画的方式来留住这些美好，最后我选择了摄影。随着时间的流失，科学技术的进步，摄影也不再如以往那样……
小时候的梦想是自己努力成为一名出色的摄影师并拥有属于自己的专业器材。为了这个梦想自己不断的努力，不断的积累。不仅仅是金钱的.积累，同时还包括了对摄影技术和自身品格的磨练。
如今梦想就在不远处招手，我即将放飞自己，在自由的天空中翱翔。
回顾以往艰难的点点滴滴令我想起一句话：“我痛苦着但也快乐着，”带给我这能够留下剪影的门乡的正是父亲启发与鼓励以及自己的不放弃的坚持。
从小到大，父亲每一年都会为我留下许多在这一年里发生的事情的留影。有哭，有笑，有美丽的，又有普通的。这些都是我的故事，不管精彩与否，它们是我的一枝一叶，从而组成了我这个小小世界。
而今我也能够自己收集那些细微之物，那些一枝一叶，去构建我自己的世界。虽然世界如此宽广，而我却如此渺小，但是摄影它带给了我留下“世界”的可能。我时时刻刻都在留意着身边的“世界”，并且时时刻刻不忘记自己的梦想。
一斑可窥全豹，这句话相当适用于我的“世界”，想在细细品味那些作品，有失败的，那是世界中的寒冬；有成功的，那是世界中的盛夏；有意义深刻的，那是“世界”中的萌芽，富含着生机；也有值得反思的，那是“世界”中的枯叶。
我的世界就如同大千世界一样缤纷五彩，现在的剪影与幼时的印迹一张张重叠交错，有相似之外，也有不同的特色，他们都是我身上的白斑，也是我的一枝一叶。
现在我能做的就是不放弃梦想，不放弃未来，不放弃我的一枝一叶一世界。
外研版4-6年级英语作文可跟读【三】
Early morning，sun farther—in—law showed smiling face，small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries，seem to saying：“Beautiful，should get up！Should get up！！
Li Lixing，see sun farther—in—law came out，asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress，wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment，transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry，li Li looks up to look，a birdie is crying，seem to saying：“Li Li has breakfast quickly，I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly，carry small satchel on the back，go to school together with birdie。
外研版4-6年级英语作文可跟读【四】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
外研版4-6年级英语作文可跟读【五】
在家乡 My Hometown’>我的.家乡有一个小湖，那是我最喜欢的地方之一。我总是和我的朋友一起去湖边，我们经常游泳、玩耍。有时我们会去划船，享受安静的时刻。现在的湖因为污染已经不那么干净了。我意识到保护环境的重要性。
外研版4-6年级英语作文可跟读【六】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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