在我的印象中桂林是阳光明媚的地方。我每年都梦想去那里度假。桂林以它美丽的自然风光出名。
Firstly, owing to the goodlatitude, it's neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer. So it seems likespring all the year round.
首先,由于良好的.纬度,冬天不是很冷夏天也不太热。所以那里是四季如春。
Secondly, as no large industrythere and focus on tourism, there's almost no pollution. Maybe we can enjoy ourbeautiful nature there.
其次,由于那里没有大型工业区,重点关注的是旅游,所以那里几乎没有污染。也许我们可以在那里享受到我们大自然的美丽的风光。
Thirdly, the landscape in Guilinis the best in the world. For example, Lijiang River is as clean as a mirror.While boating on Lijiang River, I found myself in wonderland. The mountains alongthe river are so fantastic. Some of them look like animals; some of them looklike plants; and some of them look like human beings. The elephant mountain,it's the symbol of the city.
第三,在桂林的景观是世界上最好的。例如,丽江像镜子一样干净。在丽江上划船,我觉得自己犹如在仙境中一般。河边的山是如此的奇妙。其中一些看起来像动物;有些看起来像植物;有些看起来像人类。象鼻山,是这个城市的象征。
What's more, it's also worth visitingthe silver cave. It's eroded by carbon dioxide and water falls. As you enterinto the cave, you will discover yourself in another fanciful world. You can'timagine how magic our nature is.
而且,银子岩也是值得参观的。它是由二氧化碳和倾斜而下的水形成的。你进入洞中,你会觉得自己身处于一个幻想中的世界。你无法想象我们的大自然是多么的神奇。
There are a small number of people called “the moonlight clan” in our society, who always run out of their income each month and have no plan to save money. Concerning with this kind of consumption conception, some consider it as a fashion while other oppose it.
在我们的社会中有一小部分人叫“月光族”,他们每个月总是没有钱剩余也没有存钱的计划。关于这种消费观念,有人认为是时尚而其他则持反对态度。
Those who are in favor of this kind of consumption conception point out that being moonlight clan let them have more chances to enjoy lives and live in a high-quality life. However, the opponents argue that it is not a kind of rational conception because those called “the moonlight clan” may have no ability to cope with their rainy day. In addition, this kind of consumption habit put a premium on extravagance and waste to some extent.
那些支持这种消费观念的人指出成为月光族让他们有更多的机会享受生活,过高质量的生活。然而,反对者则认为那不是理性的概念,因为那些所谓的“月光族”在他们低迷的时候可能没有能力应付。此外,这种消费习惯在某种程度上形成了奢侈浪费。
Taking the two opinions into consideration, I am inclined to agree with the latter one. From my point of view, the life of the moonlight clan is more luxurious or high-quality but they may be lack of sense of security, especially in their rainy day. Therefore, I still advocate that all of us should keep some money at any time so that we will not be too difficult in our rainy day.
考虑到以上两个观点,我倾向于同意后者。从我的角度来看,月光族的生活更豪华或质量更高但是他们也许会缺乏安全感,尤其是低迷的时候。因此,我仍然认为我们所有人在任何时候都应该存一些钱,这样在困难的时候就不会过得太艰辛。
《山不过来,我就过去》是往年高考的一个材料,为了给学生自由发挥的空间,我没有交代材料内容,想观察学生在面对这样一个标题时,会选择怎样的角度立意,会怎样归纳中心论点。没有与众不同的写作思维,没有有效归纳中心论点,是很难写出一段优秀的文章的。
这篇作文的材料内容是:人生会遇到很多困难,这些困难的存在是客观的,无法改变的。如果按照这段材料写议论文,考生可以围绕“困难压力不变,成功从自身改变开始”的中心论点展开写。由于学生并没有看到上述材料,结果有了新的视角,比如将山寓意为人生成功的巅峰,成功若不来,我用智慧和勇气走向成功。这个论点很新颖。立意准确,是我们进行片段训练的成效之一。
在进行片段训练的过程中,引导学生进行思考,确定段落的写作思路和例子,然后使它们有机地结合在一起。为了增强文章的说服力,我还鼓励学生运用“举例论证”和“对比论证”来证明文中的事例。让正反两方面的论点或论据作对比,在对比中证明论点,会让人印象深刻。例子属于事实论述,过多使用会使文章显得过于呆板,可鼓励学生综合运用事实论据和理论论据,两者穿插使用,提升文章的趣味性。理论论据包括著作中的精辟见解、古今中外名人的警句、定理公式以及俗语、谚语等,用这些论据有力论证文章中的观点,会增强文章的权威性和说服力,论证的多元也会使得文章更加丰满充分。
写文章不易,对于文学基础较为薄弱的高中生而言更是如此。对于点论结合的片段训练,应引导学生有一个清晰明确的认识,把握好中心论点,选择合适的写作语言,这样才能有效提升高中生的议论文写作水平。
When students finish their high school, most of them will to go study in college, the first thing they do is to choose the major. Choosing the major is a big problem for every college student, not only for Chinese students, but also for the students around the world. Students will face the factors such as their interest is more important or the future of the major worth being first concerned.
当学生读完高中,大部分人会去大学学习,他们要做的第一件事就是选择专业。选择专业是对每个大学生来讲都是件大事,并不仅仅对于中国的学生,对于全世界的学生来说都一样。学生仍然面临着他们的兴趣更重要还是专业的将来更重要的问题。
On the one hand, most parents care about the future of the major. When students decide the major, parents will interfere with their own opinion, they want their children can have a bring future, so they care much about the needed talent of the society. Thus the children can find a promising job and earn more money.
一方面,大部分父母关注专业的未来。当学生选择专业时,父母会干涉,他们想要孩子有一个光明的未来,所以他们很关注社会需要什么样的'人才。这样孩子可以找到一份有前途的工作,赚更多的钱。
On the other hand, students want to choose the major that they are interested. This is often contradicting with their parents’ opinion. Some students want to learn art, but most parents won’t be allowed it because it is hard for students to find a job. Everyone admits that interest is the first factor, with it, students will feel happy.
另一方面,学生想要选择他们感兴趣的专业。这经常和父母的意见相左。一些学生想要学艺术,但是大部分父母不会同意,因为这很难让学生找到工作。每个人都觉得兴趣是第一个要素,有了兴趣,学生才会感到快乐。
When choosing the major, students should considerate their parents’ opinion, most parents are open-minded, they will respect the kids’ willingness.
当选择专业的时候,学生应该考虑他们父母的意见,大部分父母是开明的,他们会尊重孩子的意愿。
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