你好!我是纪录你生活中喜、怒、哀、乐的铅笔,平时受到你的爱惜与呵护,所以我才能尽情的在纸上跳舞,做出一篇又一篇有趣的,能遇到你,一定是老天爷眷顾我,给了我一个懂得爱惜铅笔的好主人!
记得以前的你,只要一生气,就会把我抓起来,当作出气筒,重重的往地上丢,所以我老是青一块、紫一块的,全身上下乌漆麻黑的`、都是疤痕。每次你一摔,我就会马上昏迷。而我也常常进出急诊室,可以算是急诊室里的常客了呢!
但自从你的老师告诉你铅笔的好处,你终于不再摔铅笔了!还常常擦拭我,再小心翼翼的将我放在我的床上──铅笔盒。从此以后,你都会跟我好好配合,一会儿写作文,一会儿写童诗,一会儿画画,做出许许多多的完美杰作。每次你用我写功课,得到老师的称赞时,我都好骄傲,听到其它铅笔一句又一句的怨言,我真的觉得我是全世界最幸运的铅笔了!
希望主人你能持之以恒,好好利用我。你出脑,我出力,让我们共同在生命画布上创造美好!祝
学业进步、身体健康
你忠诚的铅笔敬上
2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?
3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?
4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?
5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.
7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.
雅思考试有条写作指令叫做:Include relevant examples from your own experience. 所以很多考生在考试时都喜欢使用举例法(exemplification。这一扩展方式本身无可厚非,然而在使用时几种例子是不适合的。
一个国家同样难代表世界。雅思是international的考试,不应将范围框的太局限。此外考官来自各个国家,过分使用一个国家的例子会引起他们的反感。
例:Many children in China like to play computer games for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.
只需小小改动便可成为成功范例。
因此,首先考生应了解,举例是一种常见的论述方式,特别在论述某一些比较抽象的话题的\'时候(比如文化类或跟艺术相关的话题)。但是,并不是每个段落都需要例证法,举例过多或过分牵强会影响文章的正式感,甚至给考官喋喋不休的感觉。
举例是为了更加形象地叙述事情。朗阁海外考试研究中心提醒考生们要注意以下原则:
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