谁都当然我也有——那就是我的卧室。
我的卧室朝南,进门迎面先看见“天道酬勤”四个苍劲有力的大字被镜框装着挂在墙上。那是爸爸花了不少钱请著名书法家写的,为的是能够激励我好好学习;每当我看见它,心里就会默默地嘀咕:“一定要刻苦读书,不辜负爸爸的期望!”。镜框的下面是一个刻有各种动物的、大大的粉红色书桌,桌面有一个台灯和一本词典。书桌的右边是一个书柜,里面有好多工具书,那都是我查资料用的;还有许多我喜欢的书,比如《上下五千年》《小公主》《安徒生童话》等等。书桌的左边是我那可爱的小床,床上是绿色的床单、(.蓝色的被子和一个小小的枕头,还有许多布娃娃,我每天晚上睡前都要看看她们。
靠窗子还有一台电脑,有时偷偷把门一关,还能玩上一会儿,网上有许多知识呢!电脑右边是一架“雅马哈”牌的电子琴,好多钱买的呢;当我学习累了的时候,就弹《长大后我就成了你》《西班牙斗牛士》《天黑黑》等曲子,自己欣赏着,那感觉别提有多爽了!
头顶有一个“欧普”牌的吸顶灯,灯罩上面有个大象的图画,晚上亮着的时候可好看了!卧室的窗帘也是粉红色的,非常典雅,因为我喜欢粉红色!
怎么样,我的卧室还可以吧?
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
人要生存需要的是?衣食住行。的确,仅此四件,而为二十一世纪的中学生,我也拥有一间属于的卧室。
当你推开家门,向里走时,你会,个房间便是我亲爱的小屋。我的小屋大概占了整个家的1/8,推开房门,映入眼帘的是那极其富有个性的窗帘。并落地窗。帘子也垂到地上,而却更了几分乖巧,几分精致。米黄色的墙壁,枣红色的窗框,映着窗帘不规则的圈圈道道,给温馨的小屋徒增了几分神秘,几分猜测。
地板是枣红色的,衣柜枣红色的。走上去的咚咚声听起来格外悦耳。正对门的,是我可爱的书柜和写字台。书柜里层层摞摞的课外书,一看就知道此房间的拥有者为“书女”。书柜上“唐老鸭”储钱罐肚中空空如也;写字台上整整齐齐的,护眼灯、抽纸、垃圾筒、文具盒、作业本……右侧是淡黄色的墙壁,再往左侧看,一米二的小床上,一0一斑点狗的被子、床单、枕套……整洁大方。黑色的斑白色的底,明了得让人不可思议。两边的两个床头柜,上面堆满了衣服,上面放了动漫报纸,课外书、闹钟……学习与生活了鲜明的对比。
且说我的衣柜,是与卧室一体的,一道道的木质纹路的推拉门,堆满了我的包包的斜角柜……床上时不时还会有一只小绵羊,一只小狗,一只泰迪熊相伴……告诉你,天花板上一蒌蒌似乎泡泡却又发散着朦胧的黄光的物品,是我的小吊灯。
环顾完四周,我的卧室就欣赏完了。怎么样?喜不喜欢?我本人它是十二分的满意,这美丽、整洁、素气的房间!
我的小床可漂亮了,雪白的床体上还有我喜欢的.米老鼠和唐老鸭呢!说到供我睡觉,似摇篮式的小床,还有一段小故事哪!那是在我三岁搬家时,也就是我与爸妈分床时,爸爸妈妈带我去买新家居,妈妈让我选漂亮的床,我呀,就选中这个白白的带有米老鼠和唐老鸦的.搬回家后妈妈说:“今天我们全家人比赛,看看谁表现最好(吃饭,洗刷,谁表现好,今天谁就住漂亮的小床,我呀!吃饭象小老虎,爸妈都夸奖我,当时的我可得意了,洗刷就更快了,结果我美美的睡在小塌塌米床上,半夜醒来时看到妈妈站在床前(其实是妈妈不放心,来看我的我还惊奇的说:“你也想来睡呀!”从此我就独立地睡在小摇篮里.不过床头上有很多我喜欢的磁带,每晚我都伴着乐曲或英语歌曲入睡,我一点也不害怕.
不用说小床的右边是我的书桌——学习的小天地,上面有许多东西,中间是我最喜欢的猫咪钟表,她每天笑眯眯的看着我,告诉我什么时候睡觉,什么起床,有她陪伴我不孤单.钟表的右边是我的小书架,里面站着很多有趣的故事,字典,;钟表的左边是我学习离不开的台灯,书桌下面的洞里全是我的书和没用过的作业本.
一走进我的卧室,最显眼的就是那一排排整齐的各式各样的.娃娃和一大堆的芭比小玩具.这可是我从生出来到现在所有收到的礼物,不管是新的,还是旧的,我都会完整无缺地保存下来.芭比玩具的下面是我最喜欢的书柜,里面摆满了各类书籍,就象一个知识宝库,它们给我的生活带来了欢乐,学到了许多课堂里学不到的知识.书柜的左边是我那张可爱的硬板床,虽然累的时候趴在上面不是像弹簧床一样的舒服,但它却培养了我从小到大不沱背的好习惯.我真高兴.
我的卧室还有三个柜子,里面分别放着我上学以来,每学期获得的奖状和学习用品.卧室的正中墙上是一盏每天都陪着我的小猪灯.上面有两只形状不一的小猪,每天上床睡觉时,我总要跟它们说晚安,我才会进入梦香.
左边墙上的下面是我的衣柜,里面放着我春.夏.秋.冬四季的衣服,有我最喜欢的五颜六色的短裙;粉红色的纱裙;还有上次去旅游妈妈买给我的苗服;等等.
每天放学回来,回到自己的房间,开始做作业,看电视,我就有无拘无束的感觉.总之,一句话:我爱我的卧室,我爱我的自由快乐天堂!
走进宽敞明亮的卧室,最抢眼的是紫色的“星空”。“星空”是紫色的水晶板造成的,里面藏着很多不断眨眼的水晶灯,晶莹剔透,星光闪烁,很养眼,很清凉,也很魔幻。我最称心的是那张紫色的心形睡床。床边垂着柔软的紫色窗纱,其颜色可以随着我的心情改变颜色,朦朦胧胧,如同在云雾中飘摇。水晶的写字台上放着一台智能电脑,它的.功能神奇的出乎意料。只要我一挥手,电脑就会自动开机,电脑屏幕上就会出现紫色的大幕,节目主持人就会从紫色的帷幕中走出来,直接与我对话,问我想做什么,它就为我做什么。然后,再一挥手,电脑屏幕就会变得像电影屏幕一般大,我心里想什么,屏幕上就会出来什么。如果我来了写作灵感,智能电脑就会把我所需的素材,呈现在我的面前。我的卧室的地板更神奇。紫色的,比塑胶还要绵软,而且还会自动旋转,我想去那儿,它就会把我送到哪里。
我的未来不是梦。到那时,我一定请你到我的智能别墅做客,感受美轮美奂的紫晶宫,享受天上人间的绝美景色。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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