这几天,高尔基总是闷闷不乐。他一直想着小男孩,让他给自己照相。可是这一天,发生了一件“怪事”:门口的邮箱里有一封来历不明的信,上面写着:
亲爱的高尔基同志:
我是一名少先队员,就是那个为您拍照的男孩。上次因为忘记带胶卷,没拍到您的照片。为此,我大哭了一场。如果您能再给我一次机会,那么就在门口邮箱上绑个蝴蝶结吧!
高尔基看了,马上绑好了蝴蝶结。几天后,男孩来了。高尔基走下楼,看到秘书正站在楼梯口处,秘书说:“先生,这是……”还没说完,秘书的身后闪出一个小男孩——正是那个拍照的男孩!他身上穿着一件洁白的衣服,头发一尘不染,抱着相机,一副郑重其事的样子。高尔基一眼就认出了他,于是他坐在沙发上,拿着报纸,说:“孩子,来吧。”小男孩嘁哩喀喳拍了很多张,直到满意为止。
第二天,他挑出其中最满意的一张照片,粘在墙报上,其余的则放在他的相册里,那照片便成了他心中最美的影像。(指导老师:沈艳波)
过了一会儿,小男孩就匆匆忙忙地赶回来了。小男孩一到门口,秘书就热情地请他到高尔基的房间里去了。
小男孩站在高尔基面前,低着头,不好意思地说:“对不起,高尔基先生,我浪费了您的那么多的时间,耽误了您的工作,真对不起。”高尔基站了起来,走到小男 孩面前,摸了摸他的头,温和地说:“孩子,没关系,公文可以慢一点改嘛!”高尔基停顿了一下,问:“胶卷带来了吗?”小男孩说:“带来了。”高尔基说: “带来了就好,我们开始拍照吧!”
高尔基拿了一张报纸,坐在沙发上。小男孩摆弄了很久,说:“现在可以拍照了。”高尔基侧过脸,对着他微笑。小男孩拿起照相机,咔嚓、咔嚓地拍起照片来了。 照片拍好了,小男孩高兴地说:“谢谢你,高尔基先生,谢谢您抽出这么多时间来给我拍照。高尔基笑笑说:“不用谢,要不要让秘书接你回家?”小男孩说:“谢 谢您,我不用,我自己会回家的。”
说完,小男孩就跟高尔基告别,然后他高高兴兴地回家了。
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
电车把小男孩带到家门口,小男孩哭着走进家里,妈妈问:“孩子怎么了。”小男孩说:“我忘了带胶卷了。”“没有关系,我出去买胶卷,你去睡觉吧!”妈妈说。
第二天,小男孩带着照相机和胶卷高兴地走在路上。不一会就到了高尔基工作的地方,秘书问:“你是昨天给高尔基照相的男孩吗?快进来吧。”小男孩走进工作室给高尔基道了歉,高尔基就又在开始做的地方看报纸。后来男孩又摆弄了很久,只听见“咔嚓”照完了相,小男孩准备走的时候,高尔基说:“我能到你学校去吗?”小男孩开心的点点头。
第三天,高尔基来到学校,校长,老师,小男孩及同学们问了高尔基很多问题,高尔基都耐心的回答了他们提的问题。高尔基走到黑板报前,他默默地看着黑板,一会就咧开嘴笑着点着头说:"不错,不错啊。”
后来,高尔基走了,大家依依不舍的看着他离开。
高尔基高兴地回来的时候,秘书问他:“你为什么这么高兴了。”高尔基说:"我看到了他们黑板报办的很丰富,而且同学们也都很好问和求学。”他满意的微笑着。
我家小区里有一个中心公园,春天来了,公园里杨柳依依,鸟语花香,行人如织,它虽然不大,却承载了我放学后的快乐时光。
这个小公园其实并不长,但是,一进入公园,你会看到一条弯弯曲曲的小路向前延申,小路的两侧,各有一个不高的小山丘,让人有一种曲径通幽的感觉。不远处,你的视线里出现了一条小溪,小溪的水清澈见底,流水潺潺,一直流向远方。走着走着你会遇到一个小亭子,走累了,或者下雨天,人们可以在里面休息。小公园里有一个人工湖,到了夏天,人们就放很多金鱼在里面,金鱼在湖里面自由地游来游去,吸引了小孩子在岸边喂食。湖中间有一个湖心岛,上面有座椅,小桥,在湖心岛上休息,偶尔还会听到青蛙的叫声,和鸟叫声交织在一起,汇成一首动听的旋律。
小公园里有高大的松树,开着花的槐树,大大叶子的椴树,杏树,已经结出果子的海棠树,开着米色小花的葡萄树;还要许多低矮的灌木,花园里还有各种小草,有玉簪,开着紫色小花的野蓟,开黄花的苦荬草,还有开着小铃铛的风铃草,风儿吹过,仿佛风铃在风中摇曳,好像要奏响一曲春的乐曲。
只要一有空,我就和妈妈去小公园散步,骑车,优美的景色让我忘了一天的辛苦,让我有一种回家的感觉。
我和妈妈常常去小公园散步,骑车,它是那么慷慨,它从不拒绝我,不管是春夏秋冬,它都在那里。
小男孩到了家,开始找胶卷。找到了小男孩大叫,妈妈用弱小的声音说:哎呀,小声点嘛。
小男孩并没有听见妈妈说话,他拿了胶卷就往高尔基的家狂奔,到了半路,小男孩已经累得气喘吁吁了。到了高尔基家的外面,当时天色已经暗了下来,小男孩从窗口看见高尔基同志在沙发上坐着,闷闷不乐,心想他心情有一些不好,明天再来吧。第二天,你猜怎么了,和昨天一个样,没有什么变化,他(高尔基还是一边叹气,一边在做自己的工作和事情。连续几天,高尔基一直都是这个样子,有时候,秘书也会请医生来看一看高尔基是不是生病了,但高尔基总是回答没事!
到了第27天,小男孩已经没有耐心了,走到高尔基家的窗前面,小声地喊:高尔基同志,我来给您照相了。高尔基一看,可真是以前的那个小男孩,我一定要让你进来。
小男孩一会儿就站在了高尔基面前,小男孩照相的时候,说:请坐在以前的沙发上,马上开始!
小男孩就连续的拍了好几十张照片,到了家里,用复印机给复印了好几张照片,在班里的板报上展示。
第28天,小男孩上学的时候,看见高尔基在快乐的唱歌,开心的工作。原来,高尔基那些天并没有生病,而是在想念小男孩呢!
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