写记叙文要按照事物发展的\'客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
我一开始就挑材料,什么巧克力,糖,水果,差不多全选了。为了把蛋糕做好,我先设计了一个蛋糕模型,时刻都在准备着。听说还有福利院的小朋友来,福利院的小朋友来了,我们大家都鼓起热烈的`掌声。有一位小女孩,她非常胆小,在我们大家的帮助下,她慢慢地走到我们中间,和我们一起交流,变得大胆了一些,和我们一起玩起来了。
终于要做蛋糕了,我一看,已经规定好了,有三种水果、巧克力酱和一个蛋糕坯,我有点扫兴,不过,有蛋糕可以做还是不错了。
老师先让我们讨论一下怎样做,过了一会儿,开始了。我先把西红柿切成一朵花摆在周围,然后让我们的组员也来试试,每当我们切好一个西红柿,大家就特别兴奋。接下来,我把猕猴桃放在西红柿花的后面当椅子,再让小伙伴试试,把桃子摆成一朵花,花中间插个福娃迎迎,再把巧克力撒在蛋糕上,不浪费,搞干净。最后,把奶油挤到西红柿心中间,再把巧克力挤在上面,这样就完成了。我们和蛋糕一起照了相,还品尝了我们自己做的蛋糕。最后,我们依依不舍地和福利院的小朋友说再见了。
通过这次做蛋糕,我知道合作的重要和团结的力量。
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。
2、字数在100字以内。
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