五年级英语作文必背范文秋天【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文必背范文秋天【二】
拉开窗帘，打开窗户，凉爽的秋风瞬间吹打在我的脸上，使我一下子精神起来。舒爽的凉风过后，天渐渐阴沉下来，不一会儿便下起了小雨。“这下好了，今天应该是不用出门了。吃过早饭，我便回到自己的房间写作业。听到窗外劈里啪啦的雨声，我并不感到烦躁，经过了一个多雨的夏季，我已经听懂了那雨的美妙韵律，于是我打开窗子，洗耳恭听那凉爽的秋雨奏响的乐章。
窗子一开，美妙的声音扑面而来，说它是大自然的奏鸣曲也不为过。我静静地坐在窗口，陶醉其中。我听到了水滴落地的声音，小鸟鸣叫的`声音，楼下小猫的叫声，还混杂着树叶在雨中飘落的刷刷声。我就这样一直听着，一直欣赏着。
中午过后，天放晴了，雨后的天空显得格外蓝。也许是未到深秋，树木的落叶并不很多。人们都说，一场秋雨一场寒，街上行走的人们已经添加了外套。一向喜欢宅在家中的我，此时也忍不住走出家门，来到楼下，尽情地呼吸秋雨之后新鲜的空气，相比刚刚过去的夏季，此时的气温让人感觉非常舒适。漫步在街边的公园，树叶上积攒的豆大的雨珠从微黄的树叶上滴滴滑落，迎着阵阵凉爽的秋风夹杂着泥土的芳香，真是让人心旷神怡。
秋天的一阵风，吹走了夏季的炎热，秋天的一阵雨，滋润着广阔的大地。
秋天是一幅美丽的图画，向人们展示了一个清朗而充满希望的世界。
秋天是一个既美丽又让人感到舒适的季节，我爱秋天！
五年级英语作文必背范文秋天【三】
夏姑娘悄悄地走了，秋姑娘唱着歌儿飞来了。她伴着秋雨，给劳碌的人们带来了丝丝凉意。
秋天是一个忙碌的季节。稻子黄了苹果红了鱼儿肥了……。蜜蜂和蚂蚁也开始忙着储藏过冬的食物。到处都是丰收的景象，到处都是忙碌的身影。
秋天是一个美丽的季节。天空更蓝了，蔚蓝的天空中一丝云也没有。天空中南飞的大雁，好像在对我说：“小朋友，再见!我们要到温暖的南方去了，明年春天再回来跟你们玩耍。”
美丽的秋菊五颜六色千姿百态，在凉爽的秋风中竞相开放。令人啧啧称奇。
我们也背着书包，迈着轻快的脚步，呼吸着好像被过滤过的新鲜空气到学校去报名，准备迎接一个新的学期。
啊!美丽的秋天，我爱你!
