五年级英语作文写一个人 范文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文写一个人 范文【二】
The person I admire is my mum. She is an English teacher. She is very popular among the students because she spends lots of time on her lessons and has a good sense of humor. Students all enjoy her class.
My mum is not only a good teacher, but also a great mother. She is patient with me and always smiling while talking. My mum teaches me how to think independently and helps me to build up my confidence. When I have some difficulties in my studies, it is my mum who encourages me to work until I solve the problem. When I’m feeling sad or bad, it is also my mum who looks after me with care.
I remember when I caught a fever at midnight last year, my mum took me to the hospital as fast as she could. When we got home after my injection, it was about 5 o’clock in the early morning. My mum only slept 2 hours because she had to wake up at 7 o’clock to prepare breakfast for me, and then she went to work. She must be very tired that day.
My mum is not very beautiful, but I admire and love her.
五年级英语作文写一个人 范文【三】
When I was in high school, there was a teacher who taught me more than that in was a very kind boy, 4 or 5 years older than us and taught us geography. We all liked to take his class, though geography was not our major course.
What impressed me a lot was his could see him always got angry only when we were too noisy in class,he often played soccer with used to be a very believable defender and never fouled on any of us.
We all liked to call him "Teacher Miao" and he was just like a friend, not a sonsy personality inspired me to be kind to everyone I was my well-beloved "Teacher Miao".
五年级英语作文写一个人 范文【四】
最敬佩的人是那平凡的女清洁工。说实话，没有去年夏天发生的一幕，他们根本就不会成为我最敬佩的`人。
那天早晨，我和爸爸去儿童公园玩，骑车出家门没多久，就迎面扑来一阵恶臭，原来一条阴沟被脏物堵塞住了，因为头天晚上刚下过雨，路上积满了污水，大家都捂着鼻子，绕道从别处走。我也屏住呼吸，与爸爸快步而过。
中午，我和爸爸从儿童公园回来，经过那地方时却看见一个人蹲在阴沟旁，原来是一位清洁工阿姨正在掏阴沟里的垃圾……
看到这一幕，我不禁想：清洁工啊清洁工，你们无论刮风下雨，还是严寒酷暑，总是为人们创造美好的环境而不辞辛苦地工作着，每当大扫帚挥过的后面，都留下了一条又一条清洁的街道。虽然你们穿着沾满尘土的衣服，但是你们同时也拥有一颗美好的心灵。你们的精神是多么灿烂，多么伟大。你们是最平凡的，但也是最值得敬佩的!
五年级英语作文写一个人 范文【五】
??敬佩的一个人-五年级-写人她留着短卷发，睿智的大眼睛，瘦弱的身材，讲起课来却又特别有劲儿，她就是我最敬佩的人，非常认真负责的语文老师——李老师。
这学期一开学，李老师就开始找我谈话：“茹心，你的字写得太小，不舒展，如果能写得大气一些会更好看。听了李老师的\'话，我极不情愿，心想：字小一些又不是什么错误。于是，我怀着侥幸的心理，在写作业的时候又把习字本潦草地写完了，完全没把李老师的话放在心上。
第二天一早，我就看到李老师伏在桌上，埋头在一堆习字本里批改着。只见她时而欣喜，时而皱眉，时而看看我们，突然她翻到了一本作业，我看她在上面圈圈画画，她又看看封面的名字，这时她的目光移向了我，我心里咯噔一下：难道我写错了？“茹心，过来一下。李老师的声音听起来和往常不太一样，我赶紧跑过去一看，习字本上全是一个个红圈，“你这字怎么越写越小？昨天不是才让你写大点吗？“老师，我的字没写错，而且我写不大啊。我委屈地说。
这时，李老师摊开另一本作业，“你看，这两本作业有什么不同？我仔细一看，顿觉惭愧，那本作业字体适中，看起来既舒服又清楚，对比之下，我的字因为太小不仔细看都看不清。“现在你明白为什么让你把字写大点吗？听了老师的话我眼泪都快落下来了：“李老师，我一直写字都这么小，没写大过，我不知道怎么写？“来，我教你，字的占格要在正中，写之前先把字的结构想好，大小要匀称。说完李老师扶着我的手，和我一起在写字本上写了“练习两个字。
李老师的手很暖，她带我写出字我至今难忘。我一直认为字写的是否美观不是什么大事，但李老师却在这件事上如此的认真，这让我看到了她的耐心和负责。
这就是我最敬佩的李老师，以后每做一件事，我都要像她那样认真、负责、有耐心。
五年级英语作文写一个人 范文【六】
他不仅长得可爱，还非常调皮，经常把我们班同学何老师逗得大笑不止，记得有一次，老师给我们讲《草船借箭》，讲完后，老师让我们自读课文，读了一半他突然对我说：“嘿，你知道诸葛亮失算了，没有借来箭，会怎么对周瑜说吗？”我回答说“不知道。你知道啊，你说说我听听。”“嗯，他会对周瑜说‘我逗你玩呢。’”他说完后逗得他前后左右和我都大笑不止，老师看到后，走过来问：“怎么了？你们在笑什么？”我们只好把事情的前因后果告诉了老师，原以为老师会批评他，没想到就连老师听完后也哈哈大笑，还夸他有想象力，长大后有可能当作家，被“夸”过的同桌被弄得满脸通红，还对老师说：“下次再也不这样了，一定遵守课堂规则。”老师没有责怪他。
这就是最令我难忘的一个人，虽然早已经换坐了，但还是令我难忘。
