Dear Amy,
亲爱的艾米:
Long time no see. How is everything going? I am writing to tell you a good new about me. I received my high school admission this morning. It is No.1 high school in my hometown. You know that it is my dream school. I am so excited to share this good news with you. You will be happy for me, right? Now, it is your turn. How about you? Have you receive you admission yet? Have you come back from your Guangzhou trip? I am eager to know your life recently. Look forward to your replying.
很久不见。最近怎么样了?我写这封信给你是想告诉你我的一个好消息。我今早收到高中入学通知书了。是我家乡的第一高中。你知道的,那是我梦想中的学校。我 真的很激动,所以急于跟你分享这个消息。你会为我感到高兴的,是吗?现在,该轮到你了。你怎么样了?收到通知书了吗?你的广州之旅结束了吗?我很想了解你 的近况。期待你的回信。
Best wishes,
Li Hui
李慧
How was your day off?Did you have fun playing volleyball?Iwas very happy in my day off.I went to the movie with my friends.That movie was interesting,and I went to my cousin's home.I played computer game with him.It was so great .I went to the gift shop and saw many nice gifts.Of course.I bought a gift for my friend. It was a really nice gift.Oh,that day was so great!See you soon!
Love,
Jack
Zeng Qiao is one of my friends. She is a beautiful, outgoingand good-tempered girl. She smiles frequently. I think it’s her smile that makes her beauty. We live in the same dormitory, so that we always stay together, no matter going to classroom or having dinners. At first, I don’t like her very much, because she is always talking. It seems that she can’t stop open her mouth. I am a little bit quiet and introverted, so I seldom talk to others. But gradually, I find that she can have influence on others by what she says. Zeng Qiao likes sharing interesting things with others. For example, she likes telling us her funny stories of her childhood or her former classmates. She always tells me that I should be more extroverted and learn to talk to others. Under the influence of her, I communicate with others more frequently and I find that it feels so great. I am so grateful that I can have such a good friend.
曾巧是我的一个朋友,她是个漂亮活泼,脾气又好的女孩子。她很喜欢笑,我觉得是她的笑容使她看上去漂亮。我们住同一间宿舍,因此不管是去教室还是吃饭都形影不离。之前我并不喜欢她,我认为她太喜欢说话了,总是停不住她的嘴。相反我性格内向,喜欢安静,很少跟别人说话。但是渐渐地,我发现她是个善于用言语影响别人的女孩子,她喜欢跟别人分享有趣的事,那些童年的故事或是以前同学的事情。她经常开导我要变得外向,多试着跟别人说话。在她的.影响下,我跟别人交流也更多了,并且发现这感觉非常好。我觉得有这样的朋友很幸运!
1.仔细观察,合理想象仔细观察,旨在掌握具体的富有特色的笔画,如公牛的双角、眼睛、鼻孔、躯体、尾巴等,如挤奶者的帽子、眉毛、口形、坐姿等,如瓶子的位置、形状。大小等。漫画简洁夸张的笔法常为观察者营造自由想象的天地,观察者会根据自己的\'生活体验,最大限度的发挥文学语言描摹出来。如:
被挤奶的公牛,惊弯了双角,回视挤奶者,其目光呆滞,鼻孔扩大,嘴巴欲张却合,哭笑不得;牛四蹄撑地,背部成弓,尾巴翘而难直的姿态完全是***痒难忍所致。
挤奶者头戴一顶旧帽,眉毛倒挂,笑口难合,穿一身工作服,坐在小凳上,双手─下一下,潇洒自如的挤奶,俨然行家里手。
小瓶子馋奶张圆了嘴,空得干燥的肚子急盼慰藉,但久等的结果仍然是没有尝到半滴奶汁。
2.切中角度,领悟深意观察和想象的目的是为了搞清漫画的寓意。领悟漫画寓意,既是读画的难点,也是读画的关键。怎样领悟漫画深意呢?切中角度,反复揣摩,这是最佳方案。端讲煌趣爱好不同,生活体验不同,切人的角度就不尽相同,得出的寓意也就不完全一样,如:
从挤奶者切人:讽刺那些不进行调查研究就动手于事的主观主义者。
从公牛切人:讽刺那些受辱而无反抗精神的软弱者。
从瓶子切人:讽刺那些不择手段,合伙骗人的作案者。
教学中,应鼓励学生各抒己见,培养他们的发散思维和创造能力。
I have a lot of friends in Simon English School. One of them is my best friend. His name is boyd.
He and I are both thirteen years old. but I am older than he, and I am fatter than he too. He is shorter than I, and he is thinner than I. He wears a pair of glasses but I don't.
He likes to eat pocket-food, and he is a gentleman in a sense that when he has pock-food he will share them with us.
He and I are in the same school and in the same class. So, we can help each other. We alway play in the school together. he likes to do thing I like. He lives in the Ningbo Jiangdong, so he hardly came to my home in Zhenghai but I alway go to his home on weekends and he sometimes will come to my home on weekends. Sometimes we will fight but we alway get along well.
His mother is a doctor in the Li-Hui-Li hospital and I know where her office is. His father is a worker in the Bei-Lun power plant. He is a head of a group. So, his father has a lot of work to do.
He and I are in the same school. We usually have a good time so he is my best friend.
漫画就是用简洁而夸张的笔法描绘生活的图画,它极富幽默性与讽刺性。
怎样写漫画的说明文呢?我在教学实践中归纳出了“两段四步法”,具体模式是:
仔细观察,合理想象→切中角度,领悟深意一点明特征,讲究顺序→选择方法,推敲语言。
其中,前两步为第一段──读画,后两步为第二段──写画。
下面以华君武的漫画《公牛挤奶》为例,对上述模式作以具体解说。(漫画略)
一、读画 读是写的前提和基础,读透了,才能写准确、写扼要、写深刻。怎样读呢?
1.仔细观察,合理想象仔细观察,旨在掌握具体的富有特色的笔画,如公牛的双角、眼睛、鼻孔、躯体、尾巴等,如挤奶者的帽子、眉毛、口形、坐姿等,如瓶子的位置、形状。大小等。漫画简洁夸张的笔法常为观察者营造自由想象的天地,观察者会根据自己的生活体验,最大限度的发挥文学语言描摹出来。如:
被挤奶的公牛,惊弯了双角,回视挤奶者,其目光呆滞,鼻孔扩大,嘴巴欲张却合,哭笑不得;牛四蹄撑地,背部成弓,尾巴翘而难直的姿态完全是***痒难忍所致。
挤奶者头戴一顶旧帽,眉毛倒挂,笑口难合,穿一身工作服,坐在小凳上,双手─下一下,潇洒自如的挤奶,俨然行家里手。
小瓶子馋奶张圆了嘴,空得干燥的肚子急盼慰藉,但久等的结果仍然是没有尝到半滴奶汁。
2.切中角度,领悟深意观察和想象的目的是为了搞清漫画的\'寓意。领悟漫画寓意,既是读画的难点,也是读画的关键。怎样领悟漫画深意呢?切中角度,反复揣摩,这是最佳方案。端讲煌趣爱好不同,生活体验不同,切人的角度就不尽相同,得出的寓意也就不完全一样,如:
从挤奶者切人:讽刺那些不进行调查研究就动手于事的主观主义者。
从公牛切人:讽刺那些受辱而无反抗精神的软弱者。
从瓶子切人:讽刺那些不择手段,合伙骗人的作案者。
教学中,应鼓励学生各抒己见,培养他们的发散思维和创造能力。
二、写画漫画的说明文写作之所以比较难,是因为它不仅要生要会卖、读懂,会说、说清,还要求学生要用准确、扼要、形象的书面语言表达出来。第一段的两步读,不仅突破了写的难点──寓意的领悟,而且为写作的重点──说明的方法和语言准备了充分的语言材料,这就变“难”为“易”了。怎样下笔成文呢?1.点明特征,讲究顺序 特征是事物之间的相互区别,是说明的中心。漫画的特征除了幽默性与讽刺性晕一共同特点画本身的寓意。动笔行文时,开篇点明寓意,不仅确立了说明的中心,使中心统领了材料,而且将自己与读者的思维控制在同一角度中。《公牛挤奶》一文的寓意,可根据写作的兴趣从一个角度切人,切忌面面俱到。开篇点题的构思,就确立了总→分→总的说明结构。分说时要讲究顺序,把画面说明得有条不紊,层次清楚,空间顺序是漫画的常用顺序,由上到下,由左到右,由主到次,等等,因图而异,因寓意而异,不拘一格,利于行艾,如《公牛挤奶》可从牛到人再到瓶子,可从人到牛再到瓶,还可从瓶到人再到牛,只要抓住特征,哪一种顺序,当然,应选最佳的顺序。
2.选择方法,推敲语言 只有选好方法,才能在具体说明时说得有趣又真实合理,行义中,应把平实说明与生动说明结合起来,要特别用好摹状貌和打比方的说明方法,用这两种方法时,必须推敲语音,力争语言准确、扼要、形象、幽默、风趣。要做到这些,读画中的“合理想象”是关键,只要能把想象说出来,再把抽象笔法变成文字材料,正式动笔行文时,就可集中精力对材料进行整理、编排、文字加工,语言关也就顺利通过了。
“两段四步法”是一种操作模式,对于初学者和中、差学生来说,的确是一大“法宝”,它可以驱逐时茫然而不知所措的畏惧心理,有步骤的构思行文,比较顺利的完成任务,但同时,它束缚了学生的思维,制约了学生的创造性,学生要排除其干扰,就需要一个比较长的过程对学生对模式的运用十分娴熟之后。
My name is Wu Yuwei .I’m 13 years old. I’m a Chinese girl .I study in Xinqi PrimarySchool.I’m in Class 3,Grade 6. I’m in Row 3. I have many friends in class.For example, Che Lei is my best friend . She is 13 years old , too. She is a good girl. We often help each other.There are four people in my family .They are my father, mother, sister and me .My parents are formers . They work hard. My sister is a student . I love them and they love me ,too.
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