1、时间
2、地点
3、人物
4、事件与事件背景
5、反映的道理(主题)
6、自己在这个事件中的顿悟,体会,感想。
自然环境和社会环境描写。
My first stay at home alone was memorable. When I was twelve, once both of my mother and father were away on business, and I had been all by myself for two days. My parents left early the first day, and I got up soon after they left. In the first evening I was a little scared, so I turned on all the lights. I actually kept the light on in my bedroom the whole night. For fear of getting up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed and set the alarms respectively at 6:00, 6:10, and 6:15. In order to prove that I could take care of myself, I washed my own clothes the second afternoon, though I could wait for Mother to do it. I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big girl.
记叙文六要素一般的看法是、时间,地点,人物,事情的起因,经过,结果。
有人认为此提法不妥,一般的记叙文中经常出现时间模糊、地点不明甚至不交代的情况。其实此处的“要素”是写记叙文时必备的,孩子从小写习作必须交代清楚六要素,至于现在文学的模糊性,是一个时代的产物,可是这些基本的文体知识还是需要严格掌握的。
The story of an ugly swan becomes beautiful as it grows up telling people not to judge others by appearance. Most kids especially girls look homely but they turn to be beauties as they become adults. But some people are exceptions, because they look beautiful all the time. For the celebrities, they like to show the audience with their pictures as they are small, which proves that they are naturally beautiful, instead of doing the plastic surgery. Like Natalie Portman, the famous actress and winning the Oscar Award for Black Swan, became famous in her 13. The audience grew up with her and watched her became more and more beautiful. But what makes people surprised is that Portman studied at the top university. She is a smart girl with beautiful face. Only the talent can help a person shinning all the time.
丑小丫变天鹅的故事告诉我们不要单凭外表来判断一个人。大多数孩子尤其是女孩看起来普通,但他们长大成人后就会变美。但有些人是例外,因为他们一直看起来都很漂亮。对于名人,他们喜欢给观众展示他们小时候的照片来证明他们是自然美,而不是做整形手术。像娜塔莉·波特曼,著名女演员,凭借《黑天鹅》赢得了奥斯卡奖,,在她13岁的时候就出名了。观众伴随着她长大,看着她越来越漂亮。但是让人惊讶的是,波特曼是在名校上学。她是一个有着漂亮的脸的聪明女孩。只有才华才能让一个人一直闪闪发亮。
As a student, my main target is to study well and then make progress step by step. When holiday comes, it is time for me to play, and I should be happy, while playing all the time makes me feel empty in my heart. I have done nothing at all. I want to do something meaningful to enrich my life. So a target is needed for me. I set a small goal, such as, read a book, or help my mother with her work. Everytime when I finish my target, I will feel so satisfied. The meaningful life is to do something useful and make you feel happy.
作为一名学生,我的主要目标是好好学习,然后一步一步地取得进步。但当假期来临的`时候,我可以出去玩了,我是应该高兴的,但是一直玩耍让我觉得心里有点空虚。我什么事情都没做,我想做一些有意义的事情来丰富我的生活。我需要一个目标。我设定一个小目标,比如读一本书,或者帮我妈妈做点事。每次当我完成我的目标时,我都会感到心满意足。有意义的生活在于做些有用的事,让自己感到快乐。
我一直有在英语平台上学习英语,一次上课时,我偶然认识了一个外教。
她的名字叫joh,性格很活泼,不像其她的外教老师,总是摆着一张臭脸上课,joh长得挺漂亮,更让我对她的好印象加了几分。
在课堂上,我们很聊得来,我的知joh爱看电影和读书,是个热爱生活的青年。她也知道了我的兴趣爱好与年级。
课后,我向joh要了她的qq号和微信号,并添加了她,从此我们成了好朋友。我时不时会上微信和qq与她聊天,我们无话不谈,上至最近的头条新闻,下至今天的晚餐。
但是,这段缘分,没有多久就断开了,那时快期末了,学习紧张,没有一点儿时间多出来,连看书的时间都没有,作业一做就是八九点,哪还有时间上qq和微信聊天,于是我们好久没有联系,就等暑假再拿起手机给joh发消息时,发现她已经换号码了,我们就这么断开了联系。
不过,好在我约到了一节joh的外教课,joh向我表示疑问,她问我为什么不联系她,我只能跟她讲了事情缘故,joh听了,表示理解,给我了她新的号码,我很激动,连声道谢,她也向我笑了笑。我们之间的缘分又再次连接了起来。
我们至今依旧在联系,我想joh是我最好的朋友,我不可能忘记她。
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