世博会是五年才举办一次的盛会。让我倍感荣幸和骄傲的是,今年的世博会是首次在我们国家的上海举行。我觉得“世博会”就是世界各国的博览会,我们不用到国外就可以看到许多国家的珍贵物品,感受到它们的历史文化。这个暑假,我特地去世博会游览了一趟,收获很多。
一进世博园,哇塞,世博园里的人真多啊,每个场馆前面都排着长龙似的队伍。多亏有身穿制服的志愿者们维持秩序,现场的队伍才不会很乱。世博园很大,里面有289个场馆,我和爸爸妈妈在里面逛了两天也只看了很小的一部分。我们去了中国馆、澳大利亚馆、比利时馆、加拿大馆等等。这些场馆有的金碧辉煌、有的构建巧妙,让人眼花缭乱,流连忘返。
先来说说中国馆吧!中国馆是世博园里最受欢迎的场馆之一,它的结构像中华的华的繁体字,鲜艳的红色非常引人注目。我们在里面排队等候了两个多小时,脚都起了水泡,累呀!终于,我们进入了中国馆,首先看了一部精彩的电影。之后,我们发现了一幅巨大的清明上河图,它是我国古代著名画家张张择端德作品。专家利用三维技术让画面上的人物动了起来,真厉害!我还坐了山地车,沿途有一些我国城市的美丽图片,真有趣!
接着,我来到加拿大馆。场馆的外形是用木材做的,非常环保!一走进馆内,空调的冷气便扑面而来。唉,那是什么?走进一看,原来是自行车。不过这些自行车和我们日常看到的可不一样哦!只要你用力踩脚踏板,就可以发电,给大屏幕供电。大屏幕上就会出现加拿大的美丽图片,向我们展示加拿大人的低碳环保生活。
澳大利亚馆是我最喜欢的,它的.外形像一台棕色的巨大钢琴。澳大利亚以前是属于英国的,所以它们两个国家的国旗很相似。同样,我看了一部电影,它讲述的是三个小朋友对未来的梦想。那里我买了非常有纪念意义的徽章,上面的图案是考拉,一种在澳大利亚非常惹人喜爱的动物。
在世博园里,我还买了一本“护照”,每到一个国家的场馆,我都盖上这个国家的章作为长久的纪念。当然,妈妈还给我买了可爱的海宝、世博会纪念币等等好多好玩的东西。
回到家,看着这些纪念品和徽章,回想着在世博园里德旅程,我希望我们的城市让生活更美好!
都说读万卷书,行万里路。读书重要,行万里路亦然重要。我们家也是个爱旅游的家庭。因为旅游不仅增长了我们的知识,而且能给我们一种视觉上和心灵上的享受。
今年暑假,爸爸妈妈带我去浙江省横店影视城玩。那里有秦皇宫、欢乐谷、故宫、清明上河图……我们去参观的是秦皇宫和欢乐谷。
第一个到达的地点是秦皇宫。我一进秦皇宫的第一道门就往四周看,哇!多么高的城墙,多么华丽的石像,多么壮观的大门。这景象如同电视剧里的皇宫一样气派。我的心情顿时激动起来。突然,大门自动开了,里面出来了四个骑兵,十二个步兵。只听中间的将军一声令下,步兵一个个舞动起来。而骑兵们骑着马在四周奔跑。那一声声马蹄声真是动听极了,让人仿佛身临其境。就在这个时候,秦始皇出来了,后面有几位仆人,穿着红袍,带着皇冠,看上去真耀武扬威呀!
进宫后,我和爸爸妈妈去看英雄比剑。一方是红队,一方是蓝队,他们各派出一名队员比剑。如同电视所演的,他们展示出各自的剑术,你刺我挡,真是精彩极了。看完后我和爸爸妈妈去旁边的走廊休息。在这附近有着许多参观的游客。有的人在拍照,有的人在喝茶,有的人在欣赏风景……
过了一会儿,我们走出了秦皇宫后,又去了欢乐谷。那里有很多的表演。一进去就看见了正在进行的一场功夫表演。大徒弟表演铁头功,二徒弟表演一手劈砖头。三徒弟表演光脚踩钢刀。让人看得心惊肉跳呀!表演结束后也引来了观看的游客一片掌声。之后,我们去看了梦幻太极和山洪爆发。梦幻太极讲的是五行中的神兽故事,而山洪爆发讲的是日月两国大战引来了洪灾。真是精彩又有趣呀!在欢乐谷里面还有古代卖烟的商人、民国卖报的儿童和警察、真正的气功大师……我不禁赞叹道:不愧是欢乐谷呀!
每一次的旅游都让我很开心,我希望明年暑假爸爸妈妈还能带我去旅游!
在晴空万里的早晨,在伙伴们兴高采烈的欢呼声中,坐上了开往阳江的豪华巴士,开始了盼望已久的快乐阳江之旅。
导游带着来到了阳江最美丽的地方——海陵岛,象小鸟一样飞向海边,在柔软的沙滩上奔跑,投入大海的怀抱,我不禁想起一首歌:“小时候,妈妈对我讲,大海我故乡,海边出生,海里成长……”面向一望无际的大海,不由得敬佩书本中作者给大海编写了美丽的诗歌:“海上的风是花神,他一来,就掀起滔天浪花……”啊,多美的诗歌,多美的海陵岛!
阳江风景优美,物产,我知道阳江最有名的刀具和风筝。吃完午饭后,来到了风筝馆,“哇,好多风筝啊!好大的风筝啊,好美丽的风筝啊……”小伙伴们不由得惊叫起来,那里的风筝琳琅满目,千姿百态,有老虎,有小狗,有小鱼,有雄鹰,有孙悟空,有猪八戒……最引人注目的要数那条八米长的龙了,只见它金光闪闪,五彩斑斓,那双眼睛紧紧有神,栩栩如生,心里不由得惊叹制造者们的斧手神功。
参观完风筝馆,又来到了羽毛球馆,要和阳江的小朋友们一场友谊赛,我呢,次打比赛,心里别提有多紧张,结果,我未能出,打了四场球,三负一胜。还好,教练教导泄气,大家都欠缺比赛经验,要次比赛中积累比赛经验,回去好好练习,以后会打得。听了教练的鼓励的话,我心里默默在为鼓劲,我要加倍努力练习,不辜负爸爸妈妈、教练对我的一片期望,“世上无难事,只要肯攀登”,张羽薇,加油!加油!加油!
啊!旅游真开心,快乐的旅程,我会永远把你记在我心里。
在去年暑假,我和爸爸到上海的一个沙滩去游玩,玩得可开心了!
那天,爸爸开着小车带我去,我在车上兴奋不已,差点儿要蹦出车来了。大约过了两、三个小时就到了,那时,已近黄昏,霞光倒映在平静的海面上,显得很和谐。我迫不及待的脱下我的鞋子、袜子跑到那金黄色的沙滩上。那沙滩又柔软又舒服,使我感到像是踩在空中的.云朵一般,而那金黄色的沙滩,被太阳照得闪闪发光!这时,海水冲到沙滩上来了,仿佛在说:“来!来!只要你站在沙滩上,我就会把你那一天的烦恼冲去!”,我又冲向了大海,把小脚往里一放,那种凉是透心凉,果真冲去了我一天的烦恼。时间一转眼就过去了,到了晚上,我安静的睡着了,那时,我脸上挂着一丝微笑,因为,我正在做着一个美梦。
第二天,我一大早就起来了,因为今天我又可以去沙滩上玩了。我和爸爸走啊走,终于到了,今天不像昨天那样安静,今天沙滩上、海上人山人海,热闹极了!从远处看,海水中正在游泳的人们,犹如是那鱼儿,正在欢快的跳跃。
突然,我尖叫了起来,因为我看见了我妹妹,赵佳心。
我连忙跑过去,一过去就是一个热情的拥抱。我和她用沙子堆城堡。我们先用被海水浸过的沙子做一个大大的、圆圆的底部,再用干沙子做上面的样子,最后,挖一个比底部要低的洞,再从洞里和海水那里画一条直线,让海水流过去,城堡就做好了!接着,我们又开始收集贝壳。我们找啊找,找了一个小时,终于找到了10个大大的贝壳,接着,我们对进行贝壳的审美,挑了大约15分钟,终于挑出了4个完美的贝壳放在城堡下面,城堡变成了一座水上城堡。
两天的时间转眼就过去了,离开时,我依依不舍的望着那片金黄的沙滩、蔚蓝的海水和快乐的游人心想旅游真开心,这次快乐的旅程虽然短暂,但我会永远记在心里。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
在我家居住的小区里,我和伙伴们最爱玩的一种游戏就是“救人木”。
来到小区的第一天,我到楼下散步,看见儿童游乐区有几个小朋友在玩游戏,他们追追跑跑,玩得很开心。我很好奇,于是走过去问:“什么游戏这么好玩呀?”“这你都不懂,这种游戏叫 ‘救人木’。”为首的小男孩说。我很想跟他们一起玩,所以就拉着小男孩让他给我讲这个游戏的玩法。原来游戏规则也不难记,游戏开始前,所有准备参加的人先猜拳,那个最后猜输了的人就要准备当“坏人”,其余的都当“好人”。游戏开始时,“坏人”要蹲在地上,手按在地面上从一数到十,然后才可以起身开始捉人。他要想尽办法捉住四处逃窜的“好人”,如果谁不幸被他捉住了,就要代替他来做“坏人”。而“好人”只要能让“坏人”的手碰到自己前大叫一声“木”,就可以免于被捉,无需沦为“坏人”,但却失去自由,只能站在原地等待其他好人解救后才能再次走动。这条规则无疑给“坏人”增加了不少难度,这也是大家都不愿意当“坏人”的原因。我加入了他们的行列,但是要我直接先当坏人。
这“坏人”可真不好当,我满场跑了十几分钟,累得气喘呼呼,满头大汗,一个“好人”也捉不到。看着他们一个个冲我扮鬼脸,还满脸坏笑,用挑衅的语气对我说:“来呀,来呀,来捉我呀。”我是又气又急,心想再这样下去,我就是跑到脚软也捉不住他们的,我只能“智取”了。于是我假装累极了的'样子,大口大口地喘着粗气,还蹲下来慢慢地整理鞋带。果然“好人”们都松懈了下来,有的几个人围在一起说话,有的在玩手上的玩具。我看到一个正背对着我,蹲在地上看小蚂蚁的“好人”,一个箭步冲上去,紧紧地抓住他的手。于是便轮到他当“坏人”了。
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