雅思作文怎样从6.5到7分【一】
Most female consumers shop unwisely and spend too much money.
这里的shop and spend就是复合谓语结构，但是到目前为止，这仍旧是一个简单句，我们继续丰富它。
雅思作文怎样从6.5到7分【二】
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money.
这时主语和谓语都已经进行了改善。但是你问还有提升空间吗?当然有!
雅思作文怎样从6.5到7分【三】
2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?
3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?
4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?
5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.
7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.
雅思作文怎样从6.5到7分【四】
太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹，缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。
例：A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.（一项调查显示。。。）
"65%"让文章看起来有些假，有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。
雅思作文怎样从6.5到7分【五】
雅思考试有条写作指令叫做：Include relevant examples from your own experience. 所以很多考生在考试时都喜欢使用举例法（exemplification。这一扩展方式本身无可厚非，然而在使用时几种例子是不适合的。
雅思作文怎样从6.5到7分【六】
如果我们不珍惜每一棵树，每一只动物，每一滴水，那么我们的环境就会越来越恶化下去。那时候，再想挽回一切就不可能了。所以我们要从现在做起，从自己做起，从小事做起，从点滴做起，爱护身边的一山一石，一草一木。
乐山自古以来就被人称为天府之国，故有鱼米三江金天府，峨山沫水秀嘉州的美称，环境优美，青山绿水，风景秀丽，可是近几年来，由于工厂污水的污染，岷江的水就越变越黑，“白色污染”和尾气排放也越来越严重。
一向很爱干净的岷江，现在已干涸不已，浑浊不清，河上经常漂浮着人们的生活垃圾和白色泡沫，河里的鱼儿不是死了就是游走了，只剩几只在河里挣扎，钓鱼的人们常常是乘兴而来，失望而归，一无所获。街上散步的人常常把吃完的食品袋和垃圾扔入河中，河岸上常常垃圾成堆，苍蝇成群，看到真是令人反胃。
我们美丽的乐山城还存在有害气体和“白色垃圾”的污染。现在人们的生活水平提高了，私家车多了，出门都开私家车，又耗油又污染空气，还造成堵车，农民也过上了小康生活，想要进城来玩，摩托车一骑，“嘟~嘟~嘟~”就来了，尾气满天飞，真是烦啊；还有许多工厂一心是想提高生产，却不顾给河水带来的污染；现在全球气温上升，每年上升2~3摄氏度，地球妈妈发高烧了……；五花八门的塑料袋、一次性筷子、一次性纸杯、一次性饭盒，虽然给大家带来了许许多多的方便，但那塑料袋漫天飞舞的景象难道不让人恶心吗？还有土地沙漠化、水土流失、各大灾害的发生……千疮百球的地球母亲正在向我们人类求救，我们要行动起来，保护环境，从点滴做起。
对一次性筷子说“不”，挽救大树生命；多植树造林，抵抗“黄风怪”；展开河道清理，并将污水处理后循环使用；决不出现垃圾乱扔；出门减少坐私家车，减少废气污染……我们小学生，要尽自己的力量，为建设家园做出一份贡献。
地球的生态环境要由人类改变，首先不乱砍伐，不到处乱扔废纸，不排放大量污水。这样我们的地球妈妈才能健健康康、快乐的过好每一天。让我们去保护地球的生态环境吧！因为地球是我们共同的家，保护它等于保护我们自己，愿美丽永驻乐山，环境保护，从我做起，从小事做起。
雅思作文怎样从6.5到7分【七】
在这个句子中，我们先选择advertisements，influences， people这三个词汇，然后开始准备扩句。
