社会温情类记叙作文800字

社会温情类记叙作文800字

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社会温情类记叙作文800字

社会温情类记叙作文800字【一】

盛夏,阳光透过繁茂的大树,斑斑驳驳地映在我的书桌上,我满怀好奇地跑了出去,仰起头望着那一片片绿得发亮的叶子,一股叶子所独有的清香窜入鼻孔,沁人心脾。

我的心里泛着许许多多好奇的小泡泡,紧盯着那一片片仿佛嫩得能够掐出水来的叶子。姥姥不知何时来到了我的身旁,憨憨的笑着,温柔的问我想不想要,我重重地点了点头,姥姥便略显吃力的爬上了椅子,轻轻地为我洒下了一场绚丽的落叶雨,我哼唱着一首首姥姥教我的儿歌,邀请绿叶同我一起翩翩起舞。

然而,时光荏苒,当年那个内心纯澈的小女孩早已不复存在,当年的满身稚气也早已被周遭的阵阵寒气取而代之。

又是一年,我到姥姥家小住几日,一进门,便望见那棵依旧茂盛的`大树,岁月仿佛遗忘了它,繁茂如从前,转眼看见姥姥拄着拐杖站在门口,佝偻着身子,已然一副看不清我的样子,眼睛里空洞的仿佛一潭死水,我心里微酸,抬脚走进了房门。

一进门,我的视线便被一串世界上最最别具一格的风铃所吸引,那串风铃缀满了绿叶,新鲜的很,大老远便能闻见那缕缕清香,一幅我与姥姥紧紧依偎在一起的合影倚在风铃旁。

我走向姥姥,握了握那双干枯瘦黄的手,将她耳旁一缕悄然滑落的银丝扣在耳后,岁月如同一把无情的刻刀,在姥姥脸上刻画了一道道痕迹,我哽咽着问:“为什么那么久,叶子还那么绿?”姥姥抿了抿嘴:“每天都会拆下来,重新换一串上去,这样它便会一直绿下去,你的希望也不会断。”我怔了一下,才想起儿时对姥姥说过我钟爱绿叶的原因不仅是它身上所散发的淡淡清香,而且绿色代表着我希望。

那不过是我儿时为了夸耀自己的文采,随口一说罢了,可姥姥却为我十几年如一日地编织着希望。我紧紧拥住了姥姥,泪水情不自已地滑落,打湿了手背,汇成一股股暖流,遍布了我的全身,绿叶的清香萦绕在了我的身旁,将我们包围。

蓦然回首,姥姥对我的爱仿佛就是那一丛丛绿叶所渗透出来的淡淡清香,虽不浓郁,却温暖人心,在我的成长中一点点积攒。这个冬天,我的身旁依旧有姥姥为我编织的一串串绿叶,依旧有姥姥为我编织的一缕缕便随着绿叶恬淡的清香的温情,足矣。

社会温情类记叙作文800字【二】

——题记

曾经看过这样一篇文章:一个老人虽臀部有伤,但还是接受了小姑娘给他让座的好意。车子在旅途中颠簸不停,老人默默忍受这身体的疼痛......事后,他对别人说:接受别人的善良又何不是一种善良。

老人的话使我受益匪浅。

那是一个阴雨交加的下午,我站在车站牌前着急的等待。一辆车过去了,又一辆过去了……可这都不是我要坐的`车子。想起爸爸还在终点站淋着雨等我的情景,心中的焦虑又多了一分。

“哔——哔”

公交车响亮的叫声,把我的思绪拉回了正轨。终于挤上来了。可众多的人,嘈杂的声音,还是那么令人讨厌。公交汽车如醉汉般摇摇晃晃,就在这时,上来了一位老人,他还带着一名大约5,6岁的孩子吧,拥挤的人群是老人喘不过气。终于有人让座了,因为离得远,只看见这是一位女人,而且老人似乎和那位女人推辞了好一会,终于,老人抵不住女人的软磨硬泡,极不好意思的坐了下来。

好奇心驱使着我想探探事情的究竟。

走上前去,我愣住了——那女人,她还挺这个大肚子,我实在想不通她为什么让座?善良吗,应该吧。

我下车的时候,正好他也下车了,我追上前去问她我的疑问。

“作为社会的一员,给老人让座是我们的责任。”

“可你……”

“我没事。”

我被这个女人感动了,是啊,只要心中有爱,又有什么能够阻碍你做善事,行善举呢?

社会温情类记叙作文800字【三】

那味道带给我温暖,带给我帮助,带给我希望,虽然它已经消失了,但是我永远也不会忘记那缕缕清香。

临近期末考试,我整个人都慌乱不已,一会儿这个忘了,一会儿那个丢了。这不,早上走得太匆忙,连家门钥匙都忘了拿,父母又都要上班,很晚才会回家。想到:看来今天我要流落街头了。郁闷的我,上完了一整天的课。

叹着气回到家门口,无奈地长叹了一口气,心中不禁哀怨到:世界上最痛苦的事情是什么?是家在你面前,你却不能进去。

不想在门口呆呆的站着,无助的我背着书包,沉重地走在大街上。冬风呼呼地刮着,如刀割般刮过我的脸颊,生疼。突然,一丝清香传入鼻中,我猛的看去,原来是街角路灯下的烤红薯,躲在墙边,盯着烤红薯,忍不住咽了咽口水,听着肚子强烈的抗议声,我无助的转过身,想着:眼不见为静!走吧!正当我想走时,身后传来:“小姑娘,你等一下。”我回过头:是那卖烤红薯的老爷爷。我停下来,看见他走了过来,把一个包得严严实实红薯塞在我手里,拍着我的手,用温和的声音说; “拿去吃吧,刚刚烤好的,热乎着呢!”我愣愣地看着手里的烤红薯,不久才反应过来,想说声谢谢。但他已经回去,继续卖红薯了……

我呆呆坐在公园的长椅上,看着手中的烤红薯,闻着它的香味,忍不住大大咬了一口。顿时,一股暖流流过心田,眼中不禁闪烁着泪花,不知道怎么用语言来形容此时我的感受,只感觉泪水不停地划过脸颊。我快速吃完了一整个烤红薯,只感觉身体充满温暖的气息,心中更是感受到缕缕温情。心中想着:这是我长那么大吃过的最香、最好吃、最温暖的烤红薯!实在是太好吃了!我得赶快去谢谢那个给我烤红薯的老爷爷。我快速地向那街角跑去,心中充满温暖。

跑到街角,却已不见那个老爷爷,心中不禁失落起来,回忆着他的吆喝声,回忆着那温暖的声音,回忆着他炙热的手。心中那缕缕温情却久久不能褪去,淡淡的微笑着,轻轻地对着那空无一人的街角说了声:“谢谢!”风轻轻地吹过,不似刚才那么寒冷,那么刺痛,而像温暖的手轻轻抚摸着我的脸庞,那么轻,那么柔。

即使那味道已经消失,但它带给我的温情永远不会褪去,我会将它铭记在心,将它永远留在我的记忆中。

社会温情类记叙作文800字【四】

【习作题目】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

1.学生给老师打分已很普遍;

2.人们对其持不同态度(肯定或否定的态度);

3.你的看法。

【习作解读】

显然,此任务是写一篇议论文,主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论,开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况,从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活,但有一定的语言难度,也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作,也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下,也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。

此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙,写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时,也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思,学会换位思考,这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。

【习作展示】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.

If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.

In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.

【习作点评】

作者观点明确,赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师,就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样,不仅对学生、学校有利,而且对老师本人也有利。这样,老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己,看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可,这将是对自己的一次鼓励,为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高,老师就应进行反思,调控教学方法和教学态度。这样,教学质量肯定会提高。作

者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据,内容充实,贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用,是短文结构清晰,层次分明。最后,最值得一提的是,文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式,给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述,这是一篇不可多得的佳作,值得向大家推荐。

二、写作模板

此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下:

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ;Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people 

Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.

There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.

Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.

三、写作指导

写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象,然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响,最后提出解决问题的办法,或者得出结论,或者提出个人看法,或者预测前景。

论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张,论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多,但最常用的是因果分析法。即:分析事实与论点的因果关系,指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点,从而达到论证的目的。

在近几年的高考中,议论文的比重占得越来越多,议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型,但文体实际是议论文,而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是:

1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。

2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。

3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。

4. 一般采用一般现在时。

5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。

四、巩固练习

1.【练习题目】

2010年上海世界博览会期间,上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作,请你谈谈对此现象的看法。

【参考范文】

During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.

It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.

Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.

In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?

2.【练习题目】

某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文,列举吸烟的危害,并提出建议。

【参考范文】

I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.

First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.

Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.

What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.

So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.

3. 【练习题目】近年来,越来越多的中学生出国学习,出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。

1)良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。

2)拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。

3)传播各民族间的不同文化。

参考词汇:媒介,中间人:mediator

【参考范文】

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.

There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad.First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods.Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.

Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.

4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展,道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解,谈谈自己的观点。

【参考范文】

With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.

I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.

社会温情类记叙作文800字【五】

吴奶奶所有的`空闲时间都和狗在一起,她每天定时给狗洗澡,尽管看不见可她却依旧乐此不疲,每天都乐呵呵的。白天的时候她就逗着狗,摸着它的毛。在儿子的劝说下,吴奶奶开始尝试出门,让狗走在她的前面带路,吴奶奶一开始心生害怕,担心狗会伤害到别人,可她却发现自己多虑了。后来,这只狗成了吴奶奶的导盲犬。它帮吴奶奶将信投到邮筒里,还可以帮她在自动取款机上取款。简单的事情它都可以做到,自此,吴奶奶燃起了生活的希望,每有邻居看到吴奶奶,都不让忘对这只狗夸上一句,吴奶奶的心里乐开了花。她渐渐发现,尽管看不见,可生活依旧是可以多姿多彩。

20xx年的时候,这只狗叼着垃圾袋出门替吴奶奶倒垃圾,可自此却再也没有回来,吴奶奶跌跌撞撞地绕玩了一个小区,喊了一路,依旧没能找回来,邻居说,这只狗极有可能是被人抓走卖了,或已经被人给吃了。吴奶奶好像失去了生活的重心,已经失明的她整日念念叨叨,神神经经的。对任何事再提不起兴趣,几个月前,她失踪了,寻人启事一播再播,也没能找回来。所有人都断言,她是去找她丢了的狗。可一个失明的老太太又如何去找呢,每每说到这,大家都不忍再继续猜想下去……

尽管物是人非,但温情依在,我们只希望吴奶奶能够和她的狗在另一个世界相遇。

社会温情类记叙作文800字【六】

雾霭掩住了苍穹,迷惘了视线,就在我看来这天地仿佛在无垠的穹顶之下,了无生声。世间静谧的出奇,仿佛霎时间芳华殆尽,只能聆听出冰雪消融的脉络,指尖轻点溶解。

我独步走在上学的途中,不敢呼吸任何一方土地,就在此时,我似乎被一种无言的甜蜜牵引,我循着那袅绕的香味前进,一步一步,一点一滴都深深地镌刻在我的骨髓之中,身旁顿时觉得被仙云繚绕,步子越发快了起来,香味越发浓郁了起来,我欣喜若狂,不一会儿,一个煎饼滩子映入眼帘。这神秘的气息也很快找到了出处。

雾气袅袅,喷香阵阵,好像把我带回了孩提时代的江南小镇,那里也有原汁原味的特色小吃,也有芬芳四溢的油条、豆浆,也有……可现在,现在只剩下满目琳琅、灯火阑珊罢了,想到此处,被眼睛里流出了的不知道什么东西婆娑住了双眼,与这香气交错,编缀,共同连成了这华胥之境。

卖煎饼的老板娘看上去十分年轻,瀑布般的长发,美玉般的肌肤,以及眼中似有若无的阴翳,我快步上前:“拿一个煎饼。”她应允了一声,卷起袖管,将面粉掷在烧锅上,娴熟地摊了起来,动作十分连贯,在她做煎饼时,我能清晰地感受到她衣角、发间飘来的米香、油香,不同于胭脂俗粉香气的妖冶,更显得自然、亲切,仿佛回到了母亲的怀抱中,那般真切,如斯纯粹。

待到做完后,她又把一杯豆浆放入袋中,我问:“这是送的吗。”她嫣然一笑:“是啊。今天期末,祝你好运喔,煎饼光吃未免太干,和着豆浆风味更佳喔。”我怔了一下,微微颔首,仿佛很久都没有这般感受了,莫名的温暖驱散了身上的寒意,指尖还留着那摄入灵魂的味道,以及老板娘带给我的温暖似乎都在此刻消逝在历史的卷秩中,不复存在了,我怅然若失,心中似乎被什么掏空了一块,莫非这是迷迭香的味道,会将人的神智附着梦魇一并抽离,我不得而知。

天空风云变幻,此刻的乾坤如白天与黑夜的深吻,壮美地无法比拟,昨夜忽起的微风吹散了封存的记忆,似乎还有一些温存的味道,流入了心底,许久无法这样清楚地审视自己了,看这不远处的学校,我闻到了硝烟的味道,今天,我便要书写我的考卷,定不负那温馨的味道。

社会温情类记叙作文800字【七】

请掀开生活外层的布,去欣赏一朵花的盛开,一束阳光的倾泻,温情就藏匿于万物之中。——题记

这吹不起褶皱的日复一日里,灰蒙的雾飞进世人的眼睛,把鲜艳的色彩全都捎了去,再要问起什么是温情,都只剩下摇头了。

而我却是擦亮了眼,把雾气驱之于外。于我来说,一山一河,一草一木,皆是这世间赠与我的温情。于是,我愈发愿意去寻找,去发现,去探索,那被掩埋的——温情的滋味。

滴滴春雨,润我情深

是夜,苍穹深处席来的晚风掠起枝叶摇曳,把沙沙声留在这寂静的春天,我迎着风声探出窗外,恰有雨滴擦过了脸。是春雨来了。万丈高空倾泻下独属于春天的雨,悠长且深情。打在屋檐上,打在草地里,打在池塘中,我听着雨声,缓缓闭了眼。我好像看到雨中小芽冒雨成长,它似在张口,把上天降临的甘露化作营养。我好像看见人行道上有人在雨中奔走,在春雨滴落的另一个角落,有盼他回家的亲人。春雨趟过之处,多了一份生机,多了一份深情。只有我知道,这是春雨的温情。这不正是温情的滋味?!

蝉鸣绵绵,唱我青春

夏日的蝉鸣永远聒噪,我却不觉得它吵,这明明是独属于夏天的热烈啊!蝉鸣是夏天的代名词,是自然最动听的交响乐,我爱坐于树荫下,欣赏骄阳从枝叶缝隙中挤进来而落在草地上的光斑,忠实地聆听树上的蝉长而不绝地鸣唱。而这蝉鸣好似青春,热烈而经久,这是蝉鸣用生命留下的杰作!也是唱响青春的杰作!只有我知道,这是夏日的温情,这正是温情的滋味啊!

世间美好,温暖柔和的事物不断向我们奔涌而来,生活在细微处凭添了一分色彩,而这色彩映入了我的眼。温情的滋味,我尝到了。

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