交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点:
主题句
记得那是在一个周末,妈妈放假,可是在八点多钟来了一个电话,妈妈化好妆就出门了。我自己在家里也没意思,就想找好玩的东西,我一下子发现了妈妈忘记放起来的`化妆品。看到后,我就决定玩一玩妈妈的化妆品。
我拿起一个口红,口红是圆柱形的,外面是银色的,可里面的芯却是红的,外面摸起来滑滑的,还有一股味道。
我拿着口红左涂涂,右涂涂,把自己涂成了一个“怪物”。我一照镜子,吓了一跳,我满脸都是红色,满手也都是红色。
这时,妈妈回来了,我赶快倒了一盆水,要洗脸,可我还是晚了一步。妈妈已经进屋了,妈妈看见我吓了一跳,还以为我脑袋出血了呢!可一看见桌子上的口红,就知道是怎么一回事了。妈妈把我给说了,我说:“我再也不玩口红了。”
这就是我小时候的一件事,它告诉我一个道理,就是不要乱动大人的东西,但爱发现也是一件好事嘛!
结尾句:Ishe a suspedted SARS patient? Who can tell ? Butwedid't retreat.
扩展句:1、Whenthe savage SARS was spreading,people showedfearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.
2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.
3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果
起因+经过+结果
第三段、对事件的分析
分析句1+分析句2+分析3
当新学期来临时,许多学生对新生活表现得很兴奋。在大学,新生快乐地享受着自由。在接下来的四年里,他们希望过着高中描绘的\'美好生活。但事实是,大学生活中有很多东西要学。
First, the major knowledge occupies the most important role. As a student, learning knowledge is their job, while many students focus on playing cellphone in the class, or just sleep. They lose interest in studying when they come to the free environment. Mastering the professional skill helps them to be competitive. The sad thing is that most of them can't realize it.
首先,专业知识占据着最重要的角色。作为一名学生,学习知识是他们的工作,而很多学生在课堂上玩手机,或者睡觉。当他们来到自由的环境后对学习失去了兴趣。掌握专业技能帮助他们提高竞争力,可悲的是,大多数人没有意识到这一点。
Second, as there is much free time, they can make use of it and gain the valuable experience. Students can join some clubs to develop more interest, or find part-time jobs. It is better than to stay in the dorm and play computer games all the time.
第二,由于空闲时间多,他们可以充分利用好这些时间,并从中获得宝贵的经验。学生可以参加一些活动来发展更多的兴趣爱好,或找份兼职工作。比呆在宿舍玩电脑游戏好多了。
A lot of students feel lost in the campus, because they don't plan campus life well. The things you learn will make you different in the future.
很多学生因为没有计划好校园生活在所以迷失了。所学到的东西会让你在未来有所作为。
主题句:Without hesitation, _____. It wasn't long before _____.
扩展句:1、One ______.
2、Another _______.
3、Our teacher _______.
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