初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
星期天不读书的时候,我常常自己在家里一个人孤孤单单的`闷在家里。因为我这人不喜欢常跟别人打交道,所以我爸爸买了一只小狗跟我玩。从此后,这只小狗便成了我的“小伙伴”。
它非常喜欢和我玩,整天活泼乱跳个不停。它的整个身子是黑色,有两只翘翘的耳朵。要是一有人来我家,它的小耳朵就马上竖起来,像一只小兔子。它有一条不长不短的尾巴,这条尾巴只会和它的主人摇摆。它有四只小小的脚,特别可爱。我常常抚摸着它的小脚。更有趣的是,它可以为我作画,它的脚粘了泥水之后,就会在我家的地上画出一朵一朵的梅花。此外,它有一种习惯,让我更感兴趣。它经常在房子周围钻来钻去。开始,我认为它在闲聊呢?直到它抓来了一只老鼠,我才知道它并不是这样的。它跑累了的时候,常常趴在地上睡觉。这时,我就常常逗它开心,让它不得安宁。每天,我上学时,它都跟在我后面,走到一半路时,它又恋恋不舍地离开我回家去了。
有一次,我放学回来时,它蹲在地上垂头丧气地看着我,原来,它被爸爸打了。这时,它好像特别希望我安慰它,一见我就晃着尾巴跑了过来,跟我打招呼。
自从有了它,我每天都过得很开心,我开始变得活泼了,爱交朋友了。
叮铃铃……上晚自习的钟声响后,走廊上传来了一串有节奏的脚步声“嗒嗒、嗒嗒……”咳咳!告诉你吧,那是我们的语文老师张老师正在向教室进军。
只见张老师在全班同学的静候中闪亮登场,他颇有风度的说:“此时此刻,手里有课外书的同学请举手。”“刷” “刷” “刷”全班立即变成了手的林子。我知道,擅长变花样的张老师今晚上又有新花样了。老师啊,快别吊胃口了,快把你的新花样广而告之吧。“统帅”终于下令:“阅读5分钟,预备,开始名训练有素的士兵一声“得令”,便是老鼠钻进书堆里——咬文嚼字。
今天这气氛,我实在是十分兴奋,我选好角度,边做好看书的架势边“偷拍”。哇噻!同志们一个个全神贯注,与那蚂蚁似的文字作紧张战斗呢。你看,“夫子”李坤边看边轻摇其头,一副十分陶醉的神情。咦!“话匣子”黄盼已经被张元帅列入黑名单了,原因是不小心打开了话匣子,违反了张元帅的在阅读是保持安静的“大律”。说着,战斗时间五分钟已到。瞧,张元帅又在发布今晚第二号命令了:“请大家迅速脱离书海,整理思路,将你这五分钟的真实见闻与感受以文字的方式记录下来。”“噢……哼……哈哈……”此时教室里的情况恰好是对拟声词作了生动形象的应用。
军令如山,心不愿动,手却必动。片刻过后,亲爱的战友们战绩非凡:《紧张五分钟》写出了紧张的气氛;《感悟五分钟》写了时间的珍贵;《遗憾五分钟》写出了时间太紧,美文未尽的`无奈;《黑色五分钟》不用说就是黄盼受训后的抠心力作;《无聊五分钟》是“杭漂”(杭州漂流)人员何中玲的真情告白……
哎呀,不好,镜头里出现了一张夸张的脸,那是张因生气而情绪激动的脸。扯呼!我赶紧埋头用笔诉说我的心里话,第七只眼告诉我张元帅已走近我,我佯装镇定。从隐蔽的摄像头里看到张元帅正注视着我作文本上的《偷拍五分钟》,那张脸竟然变得十分生动起来,那是张因兴奋而盛开的脸。我赶紧收回视线,在作文的结尾写上“这是我最刺激也是最成功的一次偷拍,噢耶!”
我的小伙伴有很多很多,有院子里的、学校里的、网上的,但我最要好的就要数聂梦玉了。我和她从1年级就是同班同学了,我们的友谊算得上是经过风风雨雨的考验,关系可铁了。
聂梦玉长着一双丹凤眼,眼睛不大,胖胖小小的,她有这一张可爱的樱桃小嘴,睫毛并不长,但又密又黑,她的眉毛黑黑的,天生就是那样的,她的眼睛不是和别人的一样,而是给人一种温暖的感觉。她最引人注目的就数她那一头卷卷毛啦!
记得有一次数学小测验要用铅笔作图,可我恰恰没有带,急的我像热锅上的蚂蚁——急得团团转,聂梦玉走过来问我怎么了,我说:“我忘了带铅笔了,马上就开始考了,我可怎么办啊?”聂梦玉说:“我这有一支,你先拿去用吧。”“可你怎么办啊?”我焦急地说。“没关系,我还有一直呢,你拿去用吧。”她心平气和的说。我点点头。
试卷发下来了,我的了满分,而老师却批评她不用铅笔画图,事后我问她为什么不用铅笔画图,她告诉我只有一支铅笔,借给我了,自己只好用中性笔画图。
看我的小伙伴就是这样一个善良、漂亮又为他人着想的好女孩,你们快和她交朋友吧!
我有许多好朋友,我们互相关爱,互相帮助。其中最好的朋友还是她。她是谁?就让你们猜猜吧!
她那圆脸蛋红彤彤的,看起来十分可爱;水汪汪的眼睛,炯炯有神;一头乌黑的短头发;一个小小的鼻子和一张樱桃小嘴。她十分文静,性格温和,从来不会与他人发生吵闹,她是一个乐于助人的同学。
记得开学的时候,学校举行了军训活动。那是要去到东莞市国防训练基地训练。每天都要在炎炎烈日下训练站姿,总让我们汗流浃背。一天,我站了十几二十分钟就觉得头晕,当时觉得很口渴,很难受。我的好朋友小琦看见了,就飞快地跑过来小心地把我扶起去休息,还倒了一杯温水递给我。然后,从匆匆忙忙地回宿舍拿油给我擦,宿舍在六楼,但过了不一会儿,小琦就拿着药油下来了。小琦轻轻地拧开盖子,用温柔的双手仔细的帮我擦药。
还有一次体育棵,我跑步不小心摔跤了,手和脚都摔破了皮,小琦连忙跑过来,小心翼翼地扶起我,慢慢地把握扶到医务室,她还拿着药温柔而细心地帮我擦,擦的时候还亲切地问我:“还疼不疼?下次要小心点哦!”看到她认真、仔细的样子,我感动地说:“小琦,谢谢你,你一次又一次地帮助我。”她笑了笑说:“没关系,我们是朋友嘛!”这让我知道了她是一个关爱同学的人。
我的好朋友:小琦。她就是这样的一个人,她还经常说:“乐于助人为快乐之本。”小琦,我永远的好朋友。
在后半期的语文学习开始之前,我觉得有必要和大家谈谈心。谈心,不是一个矫情的词,至少在我这里不是。就像我开头称呼你们为“亲爱的”,既是惯用语,又确是有心而发——无论你们怎样让我恼火,我从来没有真正地漠视、讨厌和放弃过你们当中的任何一个。不过,要说我有多喜爱你们,多愿意无条件为你们呕心沥血死而后已,那就过了,已经进入矫情的地界,鸣警!我们尽量只谈事实、只讲心声。我们的相处,我们在人生路上这段短暂的交集,从时间上说,已过一半,正在进入倒计时。时间很快,你们懂的。
五班的李海燕同学曾在练笔里问我,是有多走投无路才选择当老师。六班的吴守正同学也在初中伊始时表示不理解:大好青春为什么要浪费在不成器的我们身上,更有率真的某某,当面以老老师的衰老想要“威慑”我,呀,原来不只那岁月,你们更是那***猪刀。不管怎样,好心的你们,潜台词里似乎觉得:老师,多细枝末节的职业;不管别人,至少不适合胡老师你。
呵呵。是么?我已不知老师的地位至此,我已然不知,课堂上除了教学,还真的需要管纪律。只是,本科读师范,硕士读语文课程与教学论的我,当老师早就成为理想化的目标,教育成了事业的代名词。
某种程度上,我很能理解你们。我知道你们都是渴望被尊重、被肯定,喜欢自由和快乐的孩子。谁不曾是呢?我时时翻看我初中时的,看看当时我当学生的心态,跟你们何其相似。所以我愿意去尊重你们,尽可能地给你们自由。这不是新的教育理念所提倡的吗?然而,结果不很好。应试教育的余威不灭,我的理想、你们的心愿,常常一头撞在现实的南墙上。而六班的孟刘颖同学说得好,过分的宽容便成纵容。纪律问题就成星星之火,课堂逐渐涣散,到了令人非常不愉快的地步。
某种程度上,我又不太能理解你们。时代在你们身上打下了鲜明的烙印,信息的爆炸、财富的积累、人际的龃龉,学习氛围已然不同往日,尊师重道开始悄然褪色。亦师亦友,看似简单,似乎总是单边实现,是老师的难成朋友,是朋友的难当老师。不知道胡老师在你们眼里更偏向哪种?而我,正为这个问题而长时间困惑和苦恼。我不能理解的是,尊敬且不谈,起码的尊重和礼节都不懂——发言不举手,举手发扁言,点名直发懵,站直需三秒,一笑闹哄哄,一静懒沓沓——呜呼,怎一个乱字了得!什么时候,你们在课堂上才能做到有礼有节、收放自如?
这,便是我写这封信的`初衷,想提高课堂效率,改变这令人不愉快的课堂,不要让我走出教室就不想回头,宁愿在办公室一直改作业也不想上课——而语文课堂本应是一个愉快的交流过程。我认识你们所有人的字,但我管不住你们在课堂上的嘴和心。当然,我知道大家心里早就开始嘀咕了:谁叫你上课那么没意思?语文课上教的又不考~哈,平心而论,“闲静少言,不慕荣利”真是我的标尺,“谈定”、“平淡”从我上大学时就几乎成了我的标签,更有友人大呼:你太淡了,像水一样淡!兼学生直言:胡老师是一个“很正经”的人……所以其实不善言辞的我,选择当老师,不会瞎白话真是一不妥,所以我很少开玩笑、讲故事、做游戏。我偏爱哲学思维,又向往诗意地娓娓道来,置你们的认知范围不顾,当然不受欢迎。如果你们要我成为鞠萍姐姐或易中天,我只能尽力为之。而课堂的基本要求,也望孩儿们尽力为之。语文功夫的确在课外,课堂上是助推力,限时的思维和语言训练,也不可轻视。
改变需要我们共同努力。你改、我改,大家改,才是真的改。
当然,我不会天真到相信说这几句你们就会照办,我倒希望能成君子协定,恐怕君子不多。不依规矩不能成方圆。科代表兼任课堂纪律记录员,事件、原话、课堂影响,一一记录。一周之内可消号,一周总结一次,上交班主任、通知家长。狠下心对你们,是自私的;狠不下心来,是自虐的。再有三番两次不尊重老师挑战我忍耐极限的人,我自然谨记“过分宽容是纵容”,报之以更简单粗暴的处理方式。
愿我们的短暂相处成为人生中更愉快的记忆。
小红不但是我的邻居,还是我最好的小伙伴。她有一双大大的眼睛,一头乌黑发亮的头发,不高不矮,一笑起来脸上那俩个可爱的小酒窝就给露出来了。
下面就由我来给你们说说小红的事。
记得有一次,小红在回家的路上,突然看见一位老奶奶摔倒了。于是小红就急忙地走上去扶老奶奶,并问老奶奶家里再哪,她想把老奶奶送回家。可是,老奶奶说,她不记得了。这下可糟糕了,老奶奶不记得回家的路了。小红想了一会儿。说,走吧,奶奶,我送你回家,于是小红去警察局找到了警察,并把请况告诉给了警察。终于,在警察的帮助下,把老奶奶送回了家。
小红不但乐于助人,而且拾金不味。
那天小红在马路上看见了一个钱包,她打开一看,哇。有整整10张100元放在里面。她心想,钱包里有这么多钱,一定有要紧事。于是她就站在那里等失主来找回它。可是,阳光渐渐消失,天色暗了。小红依然饿着肚子站在那等失主。突然,她看见一个男人好像在路边寻找什么似的。于是,小红走上前,问,先生,你是不是落了什么东西。是啊,那里面有张整整1000元啊,那是给乡下的奶奶治病用的。小红仔细核对过,才把钱还给失主。
怎么样。我有一个这样的小伙伴,你们羡慕吗。
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