要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
上周的周日晚上,孙子写完作业,离睡觉还有一会,于是,就对爷爷说:“爷爷,我们将一盘呀!”爷爷爽快地答应说:“好啊!”孙子拿来了棋盘和象棋,不一会,他们各自摆好棋子,开始下棋,刚走两步,孙子便使用绝招--偷“车”法,用“炮”瞄准了爷爷的“象”就是一炮。爷爷的“象”归天了,同时孙子“士”喊了一声“将军!”爷爷听了,立刻把“士”走上去,孙子乘机又是一“炮”,爷爷的“车”牺牲了,爷爷丢了“车”,立刻用“马”来追孙子的“炮”,孙子乘机一炮把爷爷的一个“士”吃掉了,孙子正得意忘形时,爷爷用“将军”把孙子的炮吃掉了,孙子丢了炮的感觉有点可惜,可又想:一炮换了爷爷的三个棋子,死也值了。
随后,孙子又给调动炮、马、车要进攻的时候,爷爷说:“你可要小心你的大本营呀!”可是,孙子根本就不听,迅速进攻,双“车”、双“马”单“炮”直奔爷爷的大本营,真是韩信用兵,多多益善。他用“车”拿下爷爷的双“马”、单“炮”,可孙子的双“马”、单“炮”也牺牲了,这时爷爷还是镇定自若的'神态,可孙子丢了几员大将,却慌了手脚,乱了分寸,局面棋子像散兵一样,爷爷很快吃掉了孙子的“车”,用“小炮”把孙子的“将”轰死了。孙子输了,爷爷看着垂头丧气的孙子说:“下棋要动脑,要有耐心,不能只看局部,要顾全大局!”孙子听了爷爷的教导,收获颇丰。
通过这一次象棋比赛,让孙子懂得了:做事要有耐心,不能浮躁,还懂得了骄兵必败,否则大意失荆州啊!
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