Dear Cindy
There are many rules at my home,but I like these rules.Because they are good for me.Every morning I have to get up at half past six.And I must do exercise before breakfast.Then I go to school.At5:40pm,I get home.I cant play with my friends becauseI must do my homework first.I can watch TV,but I must finish my homework.and I have to go to bed before 9:30om.Im busy.but very happy.
Yours Zhao Liang
章老师:
你好!
章老师,我是你的学生林姝琪!
虽然我不是1年级就在这里读,而是4年级转来的,但您在我的心里又值得让我尊敬又值得让我害怕和恐惧!
在我四年级转来的时候,当我看见您,我就想见到了怪兽一样——您在那里气势汹汹的打骂男同学,好似发怒的狮子一般,险些把我的魂都给吓没了,从那以后,我就非常害怕你,害怕你打我,或者是害怕你骂我.....总之就是对您有一种恐惧。每当我见到其他的同学总爱跟你开玩笑,您就好像回到了童年,那样阳光灿烂。可是有时候你跟我说话,一般都是批评我,所以现在我总想着跟你保持一定的距离性。
尤其是数学课上,我就仿佛进入了“噩梦”一般,你就想“魔鬼教授”,那黑板就像是您整人的工具。叫通分的时候,你还没有把怎样通分的道理告诉我们,而是说:“你们自己好好复习,等一下我要情人上来通分,你们好自为之,自求多福吧!.......开始报名了,我就像缩头乌龟一样,静静的趴在那里,生怕老师会叫道我的名字,可是老天太不给面子了,最终还是报道我的名字了,我胆怯的走上讲台,在那里不动声色的拿着粉笔头,不知该如何是好.....
但是,记得又一次数学考试的时候,我有些题目不会,也有些题目由于没有时间,好多地方都是空白,如同一张白纸,干干净净!到最后发试卷的时候,我的分数惨不忍睹,都不敢拿出来看,自己都觉得羞愧。中午,我早早的来到教室,把数学作业改好后,你就叫我拿着自己的板凳,蹲在讲台边,订正试卷。你那时候在我眼中,我无法用文字准确形容您当时候的表情,说慈祥吧,你又显得那样凶恶,总之,凭几个词句是不能概括出老师您的表情。
您在那里细心的指导我订正作业,我也听得十分的专心,最终,功夫不负有心人,我订正完了。然后您语重心长的对我说:“这些题目你只要认真去想,没有什么不会做的,你看,当才你认真去想,不都做出来了,不至于考那么差的分数吧,你就是不肯动脑子去想,其实这些题目也并没有那么难,是不是?我微微的点了点头,泪水不禁潸然泪下,出乎我的意料,你见我哭了,用手帮我擦掉眼泪,温和的对我说;“好了不哭了,你以后得帮试卷写完听到没有,哪怕不会写.......
章老师,您是那样的慈祥有那么的值得我后怕!
最后祝老师事事如意,事业一帆风顺!
你的学生:林**
20**年5月8日
两节课后,试卷发下来了,我竟然是八十分,真是太不可思议了,明明昨晚复习的好端端的,怎么会考成这样?!回去要挨老爸的竹笋烧肉了。我只能强装笑颜,其实心里已是万念俱灰。回家的路上,奶奶一个劲的数落我,回到家又被爸爸妈妈呵斥。灰头土脸的我有种无颜面对江东父老的感觉。
我痛定思痛,认真分析了每个错误点并一一订正。我暗下决心,今后一定要努力学习、全面复习,跟“认真”、“细心”做朋友,争取获得好成绩。
好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
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